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a return sacrosanct of whispering.
Take my grace
and bend me
to thy will
Surely
you know
It's of yours.
That
desire's
hands
b e c k o n
Thoughts
and wants
traveling
racing
beating
faster
and
faster
still
Anticipation
becomes religion
as
I
kneel before
anxiously
illuminated
in pure
need
Coveting
stolen moments
lips licked—
O' how my taste
is sweeter than
As wishes
become time
in pause
stopped for
their
chances caught
Chances
of souls ablaze
in purposeful
drive
permeating
to
marrow
Every
millisecond
Every
slight touch
are lips dying
for sustenance
A desperate
requiring
of
a whispered
command
is air
and
life itself...
as he's the one,
....
the one I wait for.
Author's Note
© Blu2021
Random morning thoughts today.
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Random morning thoughts today.
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Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 2:15am
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15th Apr 2021 2:17am
Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 2:20am
This piece makes us think of a light shining on multiple shelves of a curio cabinet, each shelf another level of erotica. Each piece on each shelf holds so many secrets of naughtiness, hahaha, yeah we have a messed up mind. But this is a tight piece Lady
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Re: Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
Your words are so incredibly close to the visual I had as I was figuring out the formatting; different tiers of desire or need cascading to an eventual point, or hopefully a good end line. So you're pretty much on point, Me. Well done! I bask in your "tight piece" comment—always. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing insights and all your support.
Much appreciated,
🌹
xo
Much appreciated,
🌹
xo
Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 2:25am
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Thank you so much, Robert. I appreciate your thoughtful remarks and I'm blushing at the 'breathtaking'...
Nice seeing you 🦋
🌹
x
Nice seeing you 🦋
🌹
x
Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 2:45am
... I am pretty caught up in this Blue. The woman... gorgeous flower, wanting and needing to be smelled and admired, and kissed.
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Mmmm, such lovely images, Remy.... I'm transfixed! I am all smiles that you enjoyed reading.
I really appreciate your kind words and your generous list add. It's always such a pleasure seeing you ✨
Much love and respect,
🌹
x
I really appreciate your kind words and your generous list add. It's always such a pleasure seeing you ✨
Much love and respect,
🌹
x
Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 4:09am
Dearest, Blue
I didn't know we go to the same church, "Anticipation?" 😍 This is beautifully sensual piece as only you can write. This passage is profoundly sensual,
"souls ablaze
in purposeful
drive
permeating
to
marrow"
And this one is tingle city,
"lips licked—
O' how my taste
is sweeter than"
That would be 🍯🌹
I didn't know we go to the same church, "Anticipation?" 😍 This is beautifully sensual piece as only you can write. This passage is profoundly sensual,
"souls ablaze
in purposeful
drive
permeating
to
marrow"
And this one is tingle city,
"lips licked—
O' how my taste
is sweeter than"
That would be 🍯🌹
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Re: Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 7:47am
I knew you'd be a fan of the tasting lines... lol
My heart is full of joy that you found your way back to reading my little poem... and I am smiles that you seemed to like it as well. I appreciate you taking the time to leave your insights...
Much appreciated.
🌹
xo
My heart is full of joy that you found your way back to reading my little poem... and I am smiles that you seemed to like it as well. I appreciate you taking the time to leave your insights...
Much appreciated.
🌹
xo
Re: Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
18th Apr 2021 1:18am
Dear. Lady Blue❣❣ Your recording is positively hypnotic. Just don't snap your fingers if I'm in a public place😘😄🐻💋🐻💋🐻
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Re: Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 7:49am
Purrr
I love it!
Thank you for the generous list add and your kind words, C
I appreciate you
🌹
xo
-B
I love it!
Thank you for the generous list add and your kind words, C
I appreciate you
🌹
xo
-B
Anonymous
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15th Apr 2021 12:24pm
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15th Apr 2021 12:30pm
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Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 4:38am
Re: Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
I am so grateful for your read the thoughtful words left. My gratitude is yours.
Thank you for the generous list add and the time taken.
Warmest regards,
🌹
-B
Thank you for the generous list add and the time taken.
Warmest regards,
🌹
-B
Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 4:59am
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15th Apr 2021 7:53am
Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 5:57am
Bluevelvete
THE EROTIC GODDEST
I WOULD LOVE TO BE STUCK INSIDE A BUBBLE WITH YOU
SO I COULD FREAK YOUR MIND
THE EROTIC GODDEST
I WOULD LOVE TO BE STUCK INSIDE A BUBBLE WITH YOU
SO I COULD FREAK YOUR MIND
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Re: Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
Mmmm.... yum.
My mind might be freaked but
Yours would be BLOWN away.
💋
🌹
xo
-Thank you for reading the list add, my latín luv!
My mind might be freaked but
Yours would be BLOWN away.
💋
🌹
xo
-Thank you for reading the list add, my latín luv!
Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 8:14am
Who is the lucky man put there waiting maybe not even knowing the girl of his dreams hunts fir him too.
Great write gorgeous you need to read this one loud
Love and light
RON X
Great write gorgeous you need to read this one loud
Love and light
RON X
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Re: Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 11:07am
Ohhh I am hunting, too!
I'm so happy you enjoyed reading and maybe I should record this too? I dunno maybe it gets old and people burn out of my SW poems? Hmm....food for thought.
I appreciate your list add and all the support, my brave Knight!
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
I'm so happy you enjoyed reading and maybe I should record this too? I dunno maybe it gets old and people burn out of my SW poems? Hmm....food for thought.
I appreciate your list add and all the support, my brave Knight!
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 9:20am
Re: Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 12:16pm
Hee hee hee...
I take that as high praise, DC!
Thank you for reading and your generous list add.
This was literally spur of the moment yesterday morning.. I write what comes... and I tweaked it a bit for the formatting...
🔥 my lust ebbs and flows.
Ty so much for sharing your thoughts with me, I really do enjoy them.... and appreciate you taking the time.
🌹
-B
I take that as high praise, DC!
Thank you for reading and your generous list add.
This was literally spur of the moment yesterday morning.. I write what comes... and I tweaked it a bit for the formatting...
🔥 my lust ebbs and flows.
Ty so much for sharing your thoughts with me, I really do enjoy them.... and appreciate you taking the time.
🌹
-B
Re: Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 4:48pm
Never too busy for a friend. Spur of the moment poetry are some of the best.
Sorry if I'm a man of few words. Guess I save them for when I write 😆
Sorry if I'm a man of few words. Guess I save them for when I write 😆
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Re: Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 4:59pm
like that about you, though! That's probably why I do really cherish your comments when you leave them!!
No worries and thank you
🌹
x
No worries and thank you
🌹
x
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15th Apr 2021 10:46am
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Re: Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 10:48am
Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 10:50am
Re: Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 11:04am
Your so awesome and lovely Grace
Ty for reading and your extremely kind words
🌹
xo
Ty for reading and your extremely kind words
🌹
xo
Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 12:50pm
your words,
they have a way of whispering more...
echoing loud the sounds of anticipation
with every line, every syllable.
priceless...
they have a way of whispering more...
echoing loud the sounds of anticipation
with every line, every syllable.
priceless...
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15th Apr 2021 1:07pm
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15th Apr 2021 1:15pm
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Re: Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
15th Apr 2021 11:05pm
Soooo lovely.
You've no idea..... 😉
Ty for reading, Danny ✨
It's good to see you 🦋
I appreciate you stopping by my friend
🌹
xo
-B
You've no idea..... 😉
Ty for reading, Danny ✨
It's good to see you 🦋
I appreciate you stopping by my friend
🌹
xo
-B
Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
16th Apr 2021 4:45am
This read like a submission so deep and profound that was done justice and more by your words of desire. I felt the sheer power of your hunger for what this man can give and take. The sensual fire here burned out of control. And in the end, the flames are bound for a heaven known between you and him.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
It's a fantasy man at that... lol
I appreciate your thoughtful comments, John.
You make me feel... worthy and that's something that I know I crave and that I have been missing, sadly... I'm so utterly thankful.
Immense gratitude for the RL add as well. 🙏🏻
🌹
Endless respect,
-Susan
xo
I appreciate your thoughtful comments, John.
You make me feel... worthy and that's something that I know I crave and that I have been missing, sadly... I'm so utterly thankful.
Immense gratitude for the RL add as well. 🙏🏻
🌹
Endless respect,
-Susan
xo
Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
Anonymous
16th Apr 2021 5:26pm
Someone needs to push my buttons like this lol Don't have to thank me for the comment, it's a crap throw away comment, not worth the time. I love the poem, but I'm not often good with my comment words but want you to know my appreciation anyway ❤️🔥🌹
♠️💙
♠️💙
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16th Apr 2021 5:49pm
Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
18th Apr 2021 6:23am
Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
18th Apr 2021 9:08am
Omg your voice just does a amazing job beautiful. Its like honey in my ears, absolutely delicious piece
Love and light Ron xx
Love and light Ron xx
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18th Apr 2021 9:28am
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18th Apr 2021 9:33am
Re. a return sacrosanct of whispering.
29th May 2021 6:47pm
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29th May 2021 8:28pm
Hee hee hee... I can't say that I didn't really love your "OMG." because I'm STILL smiling and giggling... What a tree terrific reply!!! ... I kinda forgot this piece and just now listened again.... a steamy little number, I agree. I wholeheartedly thank you for your excellent comments and I'm sorry humbled by your generous list add.
Much appreciated, dear friend 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
glad you enjoyed listening /reading.
-B
Much appreciated, dear friend 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
glad you enjoyed listening /reading.
-B