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Punish me sweetly
Carelessly knocking me over,
On a passionate bed of love
I will bend my back very gently,
And you greedily take me
So that there is no strength, no desire,
To break free from this captivity
Today I want a punishment!
And kneel before you
Come on, punish me sweetly!
And shut my mouth with your lips!
There is a love fight between us,
Come on, my hot cowboy!
Tormented by your passion,
I have already forgotten about everything
Kissing my orchid,
lightly threaten me with a belt
And yet you make it beautiful
Ask on my knees for mercy
And the hot fluids of love from your cache,
Will wash the remains of lipstick ...
On a passionate bed of love
I will bend my back very gently,
And you greedily take me
So that there is no strength, no desire,
To break free from this captivity
Today I want a punishment!
And kneel before you
Come on, punish me sweetly!
And shut my mouth with your lips!
There is a love fight between us,
Come on, my hot cowboy!
Tormented by your passion,
I have already forgotten about everything
Kissing my orchid,
lightly threaten me with a belt
And yet you make it beautiful
Ask on my knees for mercy
And the hot fluids of love from your cache,
Will wash the remains of lipstick ...
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Re. Punish me sweetly
14th Apr 2021 9:07pm
Well ... the best part of a man's wardrobe is his belt ... this one makes me sting ... "And shut my mouth with your lips" ... "Kissing my orchid" ... then the last line ... *sigh* ... this is what great erotica looks like ... now I need a smoke ... and maybe a little something ... else ...
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Re: Re. Punish me sweetly
14th Apr 2021 9:38pm
Yes indeed, that is the best part isn't it? Although I love a nice suit too. ;) Thanks for sharing some feedback on lines. :) You made me really happy that you think it's great erotica. I need a little something else right now too maybe that's why this one came about. lol ⛓️💦🔥
Re. Punish me sweetly
14th Apr 2021 9:54pm
Nothing like a good cowboy to settle manners with his woman
I like every part of this phenomenal ink
Makes me want to take my belt off and ....
Picture brings this baby home
Love ❤️ this write
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
I like every part of this phenomenal ink
Makes me want to take my belt off and ....
Picture brings this baby home
Love ❤️ this write
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
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14th Apr 2021 10:08pm
Ah yes! cowboys like it rough, don't they? Is that why they get the girls... ;) I like your phenomenal comment. Makes me want to... you know. The picture is pretty nice, isn't it. Thanks for the love, BL, and RL Poetspeak! I appreciate it very much. ⛓️💦🔥
Re. Punish me sweetly
14th Apr 2021 11:49pm
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15th Apr 2021 11:48am
Thank you so much for the comment FeN, I am really happy you loved it. Bless and much love back at ya. :) ⛓️💦🔥
Re. Punish me sweetly
15th Apr 2021 00:03am
Super hot write and read, love it, great job sweetie
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Punish me sweetly
15th Apr 2021 11:50am
Always want to give you something hot to read Ron ;) Thank you so much for the comment. I am really happy you loved it! Love and light back at ya. :) ⛓️💦🔥
Re. Punish me sweetly
15th Apr 2021 1:54am
Ironically orchid comes from the Greek word for testicle.... delicious morsel as usual...
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Re: Re. Punish me sweetly
15th Apr 2021 11:52am
That is ironic and now I will never think of orchids the same way again, so thanks for that. lol Thank you so much for the comment and teaching me something new. Always trying to keep you fed with delicious morsels BC. :) ⛓️💦🔥
Re. Punish me sweetly
15th Apr 2021 4:57am
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15th Apr 2021 12:00pm
Oh no! you never have to keep yourself together and censored around me! I want the unfiltered Lj experience. ;) I really appreciate you echoing what Lil said though. Thank you so much for the comment. ⛓️💦🔥
Re. Punish me sweetly
15th Apr 2021 4:57am
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15th Apr 2021 12:01pm
My passion is always on full throttle Francisco! Thank you so much for the comment and encouragement. ⛓️💦🔥
Re. Punish me sweetly
15th Apr 2021 5:35am
When I read things like this, I love that she trust me and loves me. I like this.
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15th Apr 2021 12:07pm
I am glad you could feel the love and trust Remy! It's great when you can trust someone enough to give yourself over completely. Thank you so much for the comment and sharing your thoughts. ⛓️💦🔥
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Honestly, her giving me that power and trust helps me. She has saved me numerous times from hot-headed behaviors with the sweetest and dirtiest whisper of words and bedroom promises. Safely exploring those bonding moments when both parties want it... can it get better?
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Re. Punish me sweetly
22nd Apr 2021 3:58am
Words that contrast so easily come to mind with this read that traverses the full spectrum of erotic coupling.
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Re: Re. Punish me sweetly
23rd Apr 2021 12:22pm
Hey Jazz! Thank you so much for the comment. I love contrasts and the full erotic spectrum. ;) And I am really happy you liked it. ⛓️💦🔥
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Re: Re. Punish me sweetly
23rd Apr 2021 12:23pm
Hey Danny! I love to spice things up... I thought the picture was a perfect compliment as well so I am happy you do too. Thank you so much for the comment and compliment! ⛓️💦🔥
Re. Punish me sweetly
25th Apr 2021 7:55am
The contrast between pain and pleasure makes you appreciate the other like salty versus sweet enhances your "palate".
Another sultry write my gifted, cute poetess. Eat some cornbread your ribs (avatar) are showing! : )
Another sultry write my gifted, cute poetess. Eat some cornbread your ribs (avatar) are showing! : )
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26th Apr 2021 3:05pm
So true DaVinci. I like the analogy with salty vs sweet. One without the other just leaves one unsatisfied.
Thank you so much for the comment and compliment.
But, I don't like cornbread. I know I am supposed to but I don't... Ribs showing is okay. :p And try standing on your head - balancing can really engage the abs. ;) ⛓️💦🔥
Thank you so much for the comment and compliment.
But, I don't like cornbread. I know I am supposed to but I don't... Ribs showing is okay. :p And try standing on your head - balancing can really engage the abs. ;) ⛓️💦🔥
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26th Apr 2021 3:15pm
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26th Apr 2021 6:41pm
Hey Oral! It's really good to see you. And I am really happy to provide some stimulation. Thank you for the comment and great feedback. Extra hugs back at ya. ⛓️💦🔥
Re. Punish me sweetly
20th May 2021 3:34am
This is the ultimate sensual sub trip. Love every twist and turn and how you present yourself for him so sweetly to drink in all the erotici magic he offers. You take it all in like a good girl and bathe in the sensation leading to what you desire most a paddling. Truly an erotic journey of the utmost ecstasy.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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20th May 2021 3:24pm
I am so happy you could take this little sensual sub trip with me. I love bathing in all of the sensations including the paddling taking it all in like a good girl, yes! ;) I cannot imagine the journey of life without ecstasy. This is what gets me out of my head and let's me truly immerse in the full feelings of bliss that pleasure and even pain can offer. ⛓️💦🔥
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Re: Re. Punish me sweetly
24th May 2021 7:34pm
Thank you for the wonderful compliment Bon_Mot. I try to avoid the extreme content gratuitous porn element here although I can certainly do that. lol I am so happy you enjoyed it and I really appreciate eloquence. :) ⛓️💦🔥
Re. Punish me sweetly
29th May 2021 2:32am
I always enjoy the complete and total submission of one character to the other, full passion and expectation leading to ultimate bliss. Each stanza felt like a cliffhanger, wondering what would happen next, creating raw and vivid images.
Well done.
Well done.
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29th May 2021 12:43pm
Complete and total submission can be a very beautiful thing, getting out of my head and as you say full passion, expectation, and ultimate bliss and fulfilling fantasies some never explore. I love that you felt each stanza felt like a cliffhanger, I had not thought about it like that, and very happy to leave you with some raw and vivid images. :) ⛓️💦🔥