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Your novel
If your life were
A book
Would I want
To read it?
Underline your
Achievements
And write notes
In the margins?
Would it inspire
Me? Make me laugh
And not cry?
I would hope so
Because my own
Book is sort
Of boring,
Methinks,
A book
Would I want
To read it?
Underline your
Achievements
And write notes
In the margins?
Would it inspire
Me? Make me laugh
And not cry?
I would hope so
Because my own
Book is sort
Of boring,
Methinks,
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Re. Your novel
I really appreciate and enjoyed the questioning quality here, as well as your quip of an ending. It makes me ponder; motivating me to get my ass in gear!!
Ty for sharing, Robert :)
Ty for sharing, Robert :)
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10th Apr 2021 7:04pm
Re. Your novel
Anonymous
10th Apr 2021 5:14pm
You would definitely want to read the novel about my life. Although sad, I couldn't have made it through without laughter.
This made me think about a lot of things I wish I could change.
Very much enjoyed this.
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This made me think about a lot of things I wish I could change.
Very much enjoyed this.
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Re: Re. Your novel
10th Apr 2021 7:06pm
Write it. Please. Write it. There is even a section for such on this site. Kisses, Robert.
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Anonymous
10th Apr 2021 8:47pm
Thank you for the encouragement. If I did, people would swear it was fiction.😏
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10th Apr 2021 9:49pm
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Anonymous
10th Apr 2021 10:33pm
I don't know 😉
It would be something like. I was born in Odessa, Texas, in the year of the tiger. My first vivid memory was of me standing in front of a screen over a window. In my hand I held a butter knife which I used to cut the screen to set free a trapped butterfly 🦋.
From there, it's all downhill. 😂
It would be something like. I was born in Odessa, Texas, in the year of the tiger. My first vivid memory was of me standing in front of a screen over a window. In my hand I held a butter knife which I used to cut the screen to set free a trapped butterfly 🦋.
From there, it's all downhill. 😂
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10th Apr 2021 10:43pm
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Anonymous
10th Apr 2021 11:09pm
Nah, I got in trouble for cutting the screen. But....skip forward many years to the time a guy pulled a gun on me, putting it to my head. He pulled the trigger, but nothing happened. He looked at me really strange.
I told him that's the power of my God.
Each person's life would take volumes to write. Mine has been so strange that I don't think anyone would believe me.
I told him that's the power of my God.
Each person's life would take volumes to write. Mine has been so strange that I don't think anyone would believe me.
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11th Apr 2021 00:34am
Re. Your novel
11th Apr 2021 9:39pm
You're probably just being modest with your 'commonwealth' stiff upper lip & all that, lol.
I bet you have a lot of interesting tales.
I bet you have a lot of interesting tales.
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Re. Your novel
22nd May 2021 7:42pm
Many folks aren't willing to take risks and play it safe while others seek adventure. It's the latter who end up sharing wild stories that entertain. I think we all have stories to share, some more wild than others.
Nice write robert.
Nice write robert.
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22nd May 2021 9:01pm
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