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a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
Theirs, is a rarity
born of an unwavering likeness
recognized by words
which morphed into
a shared religion
spoken to each other
in verse, haiku or prose
yet always
with a depth of truest affinity
conversations of a lifetime
done, by way of stanza
rolling lovingly into stanza
words that unite
their understandings
reassuring minds, bodies and souls
that loneliness,
now foreign
would forever be
unknown.
Author's Note
© Blu2021
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All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Anonymous
- Edited 10th Jul 2021 8:45pm
9th Apr 2021 1:06am
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Re: Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
9th Apr 2021 4:09am
Thank you so much for reading Virg. I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts.
Warmest regards,
🌹
xo
Warmest regards,
🌹
xo
Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
9th Apr 2021 1:09am
Love the way that this ended, and the stanza rolling upon stanza part is to freaking tight. It is hard to believe that you are the shy, unsure poetess that you so recently was. Now it's as if you was a simple extinguished ember that now blazes across this site. Tight work Lady
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Re: Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
Hi there Me :)
Your comments always make me feel like I'm making a sort of progression and I really appreciate that feeling you help usher forth. To blaze is an unbelievable compliment, my friend
Thank you so very much and I bask in your 'tight work' remarks. My smile is wide, knowing you picked out those particular lines... I enjoyed that part the most, too.
Good selection!
Warmest regards,
🌹
-B
xo
Your comments always make me feel like I'm making a sort of progression and I really appreciate that feeling you help usher forth. To blaze is an unbelievable compliment, my friend
Thank you so very much and I bask in your 'tight work' remarks. My smile is wide, knowing you picked out those particular lines... I enjoyed that part the most, too.
Good selection!
Warmest regards,
🌹
-B
xo
Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
9th Apr 2021 1:38am
I love the notebook how you did that and the poem is Lovely . I love the message and the clever way you rhymed and the structure it’s all here BlueBoo
Love the way you write !🤗♥️
Jackie xo
Love the way you write !🤗♥️
Jackie xo
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Re: Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
Awww... thank you so much for reading, the list add and those kind words, my lovely friend 🙏
I appreciate you so much - that meant a lot to me. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading!
Much love and returned xo's, Jackie! Muah!
🌹 💜 🌹
I appreciate you so much - that meant a lot to me. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading!
Much love and returned xo's, Jackie! Muah!
🌹 💜 🌹
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
9th Apr 2021 1:53am
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Re: Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
9th Apr 2021 12:36pm
Ty, Tim
I appreciate you reading, the generous list add and taking the time to comment.... your thoughts are truly welcomed
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xo
I appreciate you reading, the generous list add and taking the time to comment.... your thoughts are truly welcomed
🌹
xo
Anonymous
- Edited 9th May 2021 8:45pm
9th Apr 2021 4:52am
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Re: Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
9th Apr 2021 8:22pm
I must have missed your comments, Claude... dammit, whoops! You're so extremely kind and far far too generous in your thoughtfulness. This piece is far from a home run but I truly am grateful for you saying so. I appreciate the kind list add as well. I'm just not feeling this after coming back reread and leave your reply... That sometimes happens!!.. lol... Damn my honesty!! You are a considerate and wonderful new friend and I really love your visits. It really cheered me up.
Warmest regards,
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-S
Your poetry you left me in your comments was so cleverly cute. Ty so much :)
Warmest regards,
🌹
-S
Your poetry you left me in your comments was so cleverly cute. Ty so much :)
Anonymous
- Edited 9th May 2021 8:45pm
10th Apr 2021 6:30am
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Anonymous
- Edited 28th May 2021 4:45am
9th Apr 2021 6:02am
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Re: Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
9th Apr 2021 12:38pm
Yes, my warmth emanates.... even across a l'il ol pond ;) I am smiles beyond measure that you enjoyed reading.
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💙🖤
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Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
9th Apr 2021 7:15am
Karma can be good or bad. Do good things and good shall come. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
9th Apr 2021 12:39pm
Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
9th Apr 2021 8:22am
A connection always begins with words, a simple hello to the written word, poets unite drawn together by the love of the written word and now with the poetry sites we finally have a meeting place
Love and light gorgeous
Ron xx
Love and light gorgeous
Ron xx
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Re: Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
9th Apr 2021 12:47pm
You're correct about that, about uniting within the written word and having a place for like minds and souls. There's also some you meet that you create a bond with via your similarities or you're just drawn to them because of simple chemistry. It's also my lovely fantasy life of connections like a Queen and her bravest Knight or a Vampire and his chosen dark bride or a Dom and his loyal sub.... that I truly adore and cherish.... as well...
I thank you for being so lovely in all my writing dreams, my friend! (and so supportive, a million times over... I thank you for everything!)
Much love and respect,
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
I thank you for being so lovely in all my writing dreams, my friend! (and so supportive, a million times over... I thank you for everything!)
Much love and respect,
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
9th Apr 2021 11:16pm
Re: Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
9th Apr 2021 11:27pm
I was was waiting for your comments!!!
You flatterer, you.... heh heh heh...
Thanks for that, C. I heartily thank you and appreciate the list add and those lovely remarks so very much. Your opinions on this particular spill are meaningful. Much love and respect from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
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xo
You flatterer, you.... heh heh heh...
Thanks for that, C. I heartily thank you and appreciate the list add and those lovely remarks so very much. Your opinions on this particular spill are meaningful. Much love and respect from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹
xo
Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
10th Apr 2021 2:30am
Love is born into your words and given unto me the reader to enjoy. That ending was the ultimate loving. You consoled me tonight in my solitude. I am forever grateful to you for letting me read this.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
10th Apr 2021 2:47am
You're never truly alone while you are here within the DU cyber walls, my friend 🙏
I'm so happy you enjoyed it and that my words deliver comfort.
That's the best compliment ever
You're just the best, John!
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Susan
I'm so happy you enjoyed it and that my words deliver comfort.
That's the best compliment ever
You're just the best, John!
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Susan
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Nov 2021 8:45pm
10th Apr 2021 10:12am
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Re: Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
10th Apr 2021 3:29pm
Hey there Rian ;)
I just adore your "siblings of the soul" turn of phrase, Rian. That's so astutely and cleverly put. I feel that kinship deeply, as I'm sure most of us gentle souls who brave sharing our inner hearts do.....I like to think! I truly appreciate your time taken, the list add and the thoughtfulness and consideration you always leave for me to ponder.
It's a beautiful light... and I thank you for shining it.
Be well and warmest regards,
🌹
xo
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I just adore your "siblings of the soul" turn of phrase, Rian. That's so astutely and cleverly put. I feel that kinship deeply, as I'm sure most of us gentle souls who brave sharing our inner hearts do.....I like to think! I truly appreciate your time taken, the list add and the thoughtfulness and consideration you always leave for me to ponder.
It's a beautiful light... and I thank you for shining it.
Be well and warmest regards,
🌹
xo
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Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
19th May 2021 00:42am
Whether you call them kindred spirits or soul mates, this really shows an example of how writers/poets who connect at a distinct level.
Superb verse Ms. Blue, truly superb.
Superb verse Ms. Blue, truly superb.
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Re: Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
19th May 2021 00:49am
Thanks for your thoughtful comments, Wally. I truly appreciate your visits and I'm extremely grateful..... Glad you liked it, my friend.
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹-B
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹-B
Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
11th Nov 2022 7:12am
Wow, I love the poem within the picture. For some reason that blows me away hehe.
"done, by way of stanza
rolling lovingly into stanza"
I greatly appreciate all my friends. Wish I could express that feeling as well as you did here.
Btw hope you don't mind me creeping on your old poetry. I just always feel you do so much for me and everyone here that I owe you more than I could ever pay 😁 ok, that sounds even more creepy haha
"done, by way of stanza
rolling lovingly into stanza"
I greatly appreciate all my friends. Wish I could express that feeling as well as you did here.
Btw hope you don't mind me creeping on your old poetry. I just always feel you do so much for me and everyone here that I owe you more than I could ever pay 😁 ok, that sounds even more creepy haha
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Re: Re. a vanquish of dark with your certain light.
11th Nov 2022 7:29am
Hee hee hee... it's not creepy and you're not creepy, either! I enjoy the fact you dig my older poems out of my dust bin! It's nice (albeit sometimes embarrassing, if it's a poem that's meh!... lol..) and I feel it's respectful and cool to want to see other phases of someone's thoughts and emotional heads pace. So, much obliged my friend!
Thank you for the compliment about the visual, I enjoyed that little notebook photoshop trick, too! hahaha... It worked out pretty cool!
You're a gem and I'm so glad that you're here with us. Thanks for all you contribute, too.
(୨୧•͈ᴗ•͈)◞ᵗʱᵃᵑᵏઽ*
-B
Thank you for the compliment about the visual, I enjoyed that little notebook photoshop trick, too! hahaha... It worked out pretty cool!
You're a gem and I'm so glad that you're here with us. Thanks for all you contribute, too.
(୨୧•͈ᴗ•͈)◞ᵗʱᵃᵑᵏઽ*
-B