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On Rebirth
her bumble of bees
and deciduous trees,
Spring’s unveiling invention;
shake of her shoulder
eye the beholder,
Flower’s blooming intention
display of green leaf
enchanting motif,
Thaw acquiesces his throne;
sweet singing of birds
love’s soft-spoken words,
Hope springs among the seeds sown
her groaning of ground
now quickens the sound,
Moss and the moonstone cast spells;
growth of the forest
moon-path of Horus,
rebirth of earth on a swell
and deciduous trees,
Spring’s unveiling invention;
shake of her shoulder
eye the beholder,
Flower’s blooming intention
display of green leaf
enchanting motif,
Thaw acquiesces his throne;
sweet singing of birds
love’s soft-spoken words,
Hope springs among the seeds sown
her groaning of ground
now quickens the sound,
Moss and the moonstone cast spells;
growth of the forest
moon-path of Horus,
rebirth of earth on a swell
Published 4th Apr 2021
Author's Note
3/30 NaPo entry (56 unique words)
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4th Apr 2021 4:43am
Wow what an explosive vision of spring 🌸💐🌷
You always hit the mark lol I reallly enjoyed this
I felt like I’m there in middle earth with you
sounds grand ☺️
That’s your theme yes? And if not either way i love it.
Your killing it Luna 👍🏻
You always hit the mark lol I reallly enjoyed this
I felt like I’m there in middle earth with you
sounds grand ☺️
That’s your theme yes? And if not either way i love it.
Your killing it Luna 👍🏻
4th Apr 2021 10:01pm
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4th Apr 2021 10:01pm
4th Apr 2021 8:20pm
I love uncommon rhyming words and you hit it twice on this. Such a delight to read.
4th Apr 2021 10:02pm
5th Apr 2021 2:21am
This had the magic of Midsummer's Night Dream but written of spring. Just wildly painted imagery through words that leave me feeling giddy and happy through and through. The artistry here is playfully alive with the earth's awakening.
John
John
5th Apr 2021 2:42am
15th May 2021 8:38am
This has such a perfect rhythm and flow, it's difficult to smile while reading it.
Beautiful work Luna.
Beautiful work Luna.
