Truth Lies at the Bottom

Deep inside us lies the truth of our Being, and it's nothing to do with fear or loathing. It's pure, unobstructed love.

Well done, Luna. Your entries are fabulous! Great job!

Thank you so much, Ahavati xo

Thank you for your kind words, BP

The deeper you go, the more coherence, the nearer the truth - great write

Thank you so much, Josh!

It sometimes takes the big dives to get to what's true about ourselves.
Sometimes it's good and sometimes it needs work, but getting there is half the battle.
Great thought provoking piece.

Absolutely, Eerie.  Thank you so much!

Dear L,

Everyone above has used all the good words and better thoughts.  I can only say I really loved this.  Each stanza’s opening line is mesmerizing and brings me right down to the core and forces me to really look at what I really am.  It’s scary so I’m coming back up to the surface but your words have loosened a great burden for me and it was incredible.  Lovely lovely write! H 🌷

I’m always so excited when you stop by.  Thank you so much for your support, and for reading with such depth and understanding 💜

A dazzling poetic exploration of your own being. The imagery here is loaded with meaning and sparkles like a hypnotist crystal. This is a true gem of a poem. I didn't just see it I felt it deep down. You have created a looking glass of poetic wonder.

John

Your kind words are so appreciated, thank you!

Someone’s tapped in deep. Sometimes I think 💭 the act of personifying a fundament, such as the ocean 🌊 isn’t speculation but evocation, the farthest listening from the oldest cells.

I completely agree.  Thank you for your insight as always, Loki.

I think the first thing the grabbed my attention are the first two words of the title "Truth Lies" not sure if it's because I've also used those two words as oxymorons and as double meanings, but how you really dove (pun intended) deep into this emotion.

I've always enjoyed those pieces that repeat a line, as if to embed it but the "Far beneath" repetition really drives the messege.

Excellent work and a lovey 2nd entry for NaPoWriMo (yes, I'm barely catching up with all my readings now).

Thank you so much, Wally!

dear LGH

I am not decorated
with fake plants and
dyed-gravel mimicry
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these lines 'show' and are very painterly  
they offer much more than  'telling'

a warm smile
silent lotus

Thank you so very much!