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shallow.
a puddle's deep depth
rueful way to measure up
first step's a doozy!
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 20th Mar 2021
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Re. shallow.
20th Mar 2021 00:35am
Ohh ... Too many times ... Also pic from one of my fav movies ... Love Bill ... Bless and love ... ..
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20th Mar 2021 4:03am
haha... too many times?....at puddle stepping or being shallow?? I love Bill too... he's my spirit animal!!.. Ty for reading and your thoughtful remarks my dear!
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Re: Re. shallow.
20th Mar 2021 6:14pm
likewise, it's more than common in Tampa when it rains more than half the year almost every day... lol...
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I hope you are doing well, my friend
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I hope you are doing well, my friend
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Re. shallow.
erhmm... Groundhog Day!! Good movie.
This is awesome Blu. So true. You have a way with Senryus.
This is awesome Blu. So true. You have a way with Senryus.
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Re: Re. shallow.
20th Mar 2021 4:11am
lol... I loved this movie, Groundhog's Day cracks me up! . and Bill Murray is my spirit animal... 😂.
Plus, it's so fitting!!... hee hee.. I deeply appreciate all your kind words and thank you for reading, Lj
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Plus, it's so fitting!!... hee hee.. I deeply appreciate all your kind words and thank you for reading, Lj
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20th Mar 2021 4:14am
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20th Mar 2021 4:15am
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20th Mar 2021 7:57pm
hahaha.. You're funny Lj.... erhm..
Nothing to see here!!.. move along, move along...
Needed that giggle 🤭, thx
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Nothing to see here!!.. move along, move along...
Needed that giggle 🤭, thx
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Re. shallow.
20th Mar 2021 1:29am
I have known a few shallow people in my time. Somehow they were always liked by everyone. I never could figure out how that translated to charming. Maybe is was because they were who they were and lived their truth. Then again, I don't get people a large majority of the time, so maybe I have no idea what I'm talking about Lol. Great senryu.
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haha... I don't get people most of the time either nor their motives and working from home for almost a year has definitely doubled down on that inability, that's for sure..lol... 😂.. I thank you for reading and your thoughtful comments, Eerie :)
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Always a pleasure ✨
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Always a pleasure ✨
Re. shallow.
20th Mar 2021 2:27am
One of the most dangerous of humans is one that doesn't realize their true self. But and then a human true identity can be as deceiving as that puddle. There could be more there than what's seen on top. Tight work boo
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It's true, you never really know what lies beneath!
I certainly have dealt with that before... that's dangerous, too... I thank you for reading and your insights, Me. You always have a good perspective that I enjoy seeing from.
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I certainly have dealt with that before... that's dangerous, too... I thank you for reading and your insights, Me. You always have a good perspective that I enjoy seeing from.
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20th Mar 2021 3:18am
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20th Mar 2021 4:25am
Re. shallow.
20th Mar 2021 5:49am
Love it❣️Love it❣️Love it❣️ Funny movie and what an annoying character, the insurance guy. He's super annoying in "Silicon Valley." I remember a rain storm in Houston that flooded the downtown streets so badly that while walking to the bus stop I step off one curb and sank in to 2.5 feet of cold water...rueful indeed😲 Brava, Sweet BB🌹
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That's Ned Ryerson from Groundhog Day....
hahaha... I was watching it ( because like the theory Bill Murray himself tests in the movie I believe BM actually IS God ... Haha...) 🤭 giggling.
I do believe that BM is my spirit animal, though... I freaking love him. That's where the impetus came from...for shallow PEOPLE ...
That's the worst, btw .... - your puddle experience. I think we've all had that happen at some point!
Glad you enjoyed reading and I appreciate your awesome comments!
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hahaha... I was watching it ( because like the theory Bill Murray himself tests in the movie I believe BM actually IS God ... Haha...) 🤭 giggling.
I do believe that BM is my spirit animal, though... I freaking love him. That's where the impetus came from...for shallow PEOPLE ...
That's the worst, btw .... - your puddle experience. I think we've all had that happen at some point!
Glad you enjoyed reading and I appreciate your awesome comments!
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xoxo
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20th Mar 2021 6:08am
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20th Mar 2021 6:11am
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20th Mar 2021 6:23am
Re. shallow.
20th Mar 2021 8:21am
Great poem. You not a shallow woman, you are a strong smart beautiful sexy ass woman. Love the movie reference. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. shallow.
20th Mar 2021 5:31pm
Those are some very kind words, Francisco and I appreciate you saying so as well as your committed readership
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20th Mar 2021 5:30pm
exactly... and some puddles are deeper than some people...
Ty for reading, Adagio
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Ty for reading, Adagio
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Re: Re. shallow.
22nd Mar 2021 4:15am
Thanks bunches, lady... I appreciate you reading and leaving your thoughts.
Good to see you :)
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Good to see you :)
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Re. shallow.
24th Mar 2021 00:27am
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24th Mar 2021 00:39am
Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts, Leo ;) I like that you enjoyed rueful... me, as well
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Re. shallow.
29th Mar 2021 5:14pm
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29th Mar 2021 5:39pm