words. (a senryú)

Oh ... I just love this ... deep poetry ... it is my catnip ... nice crisp write ... sating ...

I'm all smiles that you enjoyed reading, LilD. Ty so much for the generous list add and your thoughtful comments. I'm deeply grateful -
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xo

Words cut like a knife, they can build on destroy
Such is its power
Great job beautiful
Love and light
Ron

You bet they can cut! Deep as fuck. ... but they can be life changing and truly resplendent ... like "I do" or "it's a boy".... etc... It's always the painful reminders of words that I go to first, too. I'm so pre-wired to pull from darkness, I've always been that way. So it's difficult for my instinctual self to immediately look at this from the positive, first. Which is something that I'm working on and talk about difficult!! .... hahaha...Thank you so much for reading, your unbelievably awesome list add and engaging with me via some terrifically wonderful comments... I'm so grateful. 🙏  
Much love and respect,
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xo

Dear, Lady Blue
I am flattered that you've written my unauthorized biography 🤪😉
This bears 🐻💋🐻💋🐻 a deep message when I ponder on all the people, or things for that matter, that is can describe. Brava, Goddess BB 🌹

hahaha!
Busted! heh heh 😜
in glad you enjoyed my senryú vibe, BB
I love your visits and I appreciate you letting me take you down in your goodness, with my unauthorized bio!! The truth shall set you free!!!
😂 😂 😂 😂
Much love,
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They are all of that neatly wrapped up in three beautiful lines, tight

Hey, Me :)
Thank you for reading and your comments. I missed you and I'm glad you enjoyed this. if you get a chance look at https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/413407-a-theory-of-possible-sanguinity/

I wrote it early this morning and I'm contemplating doing audio... I'd be interested in your thoughts?
whenever you get a sec.... Ty my friend 🙏
Much appreciated.
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xo
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this is clever and well done. it makes me roll around words in my head that could do the soothing or the slaying. the first one that popped in my head was yes. I love poems that make me think. well done.

Awww Daisy, thank you for reading and those super kind words. It's awesome that you found something to roll around your mind within my little senryú. Amazing!, imo. I'm extremely grateful and love seeing you. :)
Much appreciated,
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xo
-B

not sure what a senyrú is but I like them already. you’ve a talent going on there, lady. good stuff, and well done

😂 lol... I like you Eamonn!

Senryú is a Japanese form of short poetry similar to haiku in construction — three lines with 17 syllables. Traditionally in a 5-7-5 syllable line configuration. Senryū tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature... but that's all subjective now... it's hard to tell the two apart sometimes!.. It's AspergerPoet56 who is the master at them... his #Nopoo senryú today killed it!.. It was hysterical. I learned a lot from him in constructing both haiku and senryú.  

Thank you for reading and your thoughtful comments...  
Much appreciated,  
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xo
-Susan

BOOM!

BAM!
(Ty, Remy)
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Sometimes you want to soothe and sometimes you wish that purge movies would become real life.  Keep on writing.

hahaha... you are 100% correct... I'm laughing so hard!!! Thank you, Francisco... You nailed it
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xo

no half stepping do I perceive here. When humans tend to add complexity to anything they can, this write for me refers to a simplicity.

I agree, my friend
To value the heft of words for both good and bad
They're more powerful than most actual weapons, imo... I thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts.
It's always lovey to see you
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xo
-B

What a gloriously amazing comment. I truly appreciate your thoughtful remarks and the kindness they delivered.
Much love and respect,
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xo
Ty for the generous RL add as well
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Yes ... one, of course ... Bless and much love ... .

That's how powerful, indeed.
Ty so much for reading and leaving your kind words, dear friend.
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I am deeply grateful for you.
xo

Words cast spells, that's why it's called spelling. That's not why but I'm trying at pith. Haha

Heehee.... cutie patootie!
giggling *🤭
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Well done!

Hi Tim :)
I concur, words are as powerful as any weapon... Maybe more so?? ... As they're normally what instigate most wars, fights, etc....Your comments are astute with a distinct understanding. I'm glad you enjoyed my senryú and stopped by to visit..  
grateful for the list add as well - ;)  
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xo

Preach.
Nicely done Blue.

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Ty, Walter!
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