I do see, with or without looking ~ (a totally undestined tale) +Spoken Word

Thats so tender, caring, loving i read that and my heart felt a longing for my big sister who passed away, I remembered playing in fields and parks. I'm not sure why that all sprang to mind  
Love and light  
Ron xx

Awwww... that's so beautiful, Ron. They sound like  cherished memories, my friend. I'm so sorry she's passed but I'm glad you have those lovely thoughts to recall... Ty so much for sharing that with me. I appreciate it very much and I send my ghost hugs across the ether (hugs)
I appreciate you the list add and all your loveliness.. it makes my day.
Much love,  
🌹
xo

beautiful
increasingly i see
you leaving most of us behind
in your writing
kinda jealous
that you can express so eloquently
i can only dream of doing
I am in your shadow
if i was ever a light
you out shine it

My dearest Colin,
I think the first three times I read these comments (without bursting into tears.. lol ) was when I finally realized or understood the reason that fate or destiny collided us together all those months ago. You support me in just the way I need it and I do the same thing, on your behalf. Even though we're a completely weirdo combination (I say with love and the most affection) to be such good friends, we just are. We just work. YOU are a light, even if you think otherwise. You will always be that to me. You are responsible for such a large portion of my growth as a writer that I'll never be able to thank you or properly convey it enough. I am grateful for you, every day, my friend... and now, I cannot ever envision my life without you. A thousand thank you's and all my love from across the pond,
🌹✨💫✨🌹
xo
-Susan

I'm so very blown away by this comment, RiAN.
Reading it, I'm so very engrossed in your explanations and gorgeous descriptions of the fey. I really do love such magical creatures and the feelings they evoke, so your comments just made my day so very bright. My heart swells with thankful gratitude... Much thanks for being so in tune, sharing your thoughts that I adore and your gracious list add- it's an honour.  

I always... AWAYS enjoy your visits :)  

Much love,
🌹  
xo
-Susan

Beautiful. The heart and mind wander when I'm in the garden. Sometimes I feel the presence of those precious ones lost. Thank you.

I couldn't agree more, KP. The garden is a solace for me and always seems to turn my mood around, when I get my hands dirty a bit.... Ty for sharing your thoughts and for the generous list add. My soul was poured into this one; tears ran down my cheeks as I wrote it....some for reasons I know and some for reasons I am still trying to understand. So, with that admitted bit of raw honesty, I am truly and sincerely full of gratitude that you enjoyed my little journey here -  
Much love,  
🌹  
✨ 💫🌱✨
-Susan

My heartbreaks deeply but this is beautiful expressed.

Ohh Lj, that's a sentiment that makes me send cyber hugs (🤗) your way.... I bask in this piece as a catharsis of sorts... just my weirdo little way of coping, me thinks.... lol. I thoroughly appreciate your thoughtful comments and smile from ear to ear seeing you today. I take your words of compliment and cherish them, so.  
Much love and respect,  
🌹  
xo  

You continue to prove yourself as a great poetess, always working and improving on your art. This is a beautiful piece even with it being what it is, the imagery of the good times, the times together. Dang tight

Ty for reading and your thoughtful comments, Me. This piece actually tore at me a bit to write, so I really do appreciate your insights here. Your gracious words soothe and I really do love "Dang tight"
Ty again, my friend.✨  
🌹
xo

Quite the epic write ... Full in its purity and beauty ... Bless and much love ... .

My dearest FeNyX,
Whoa ... what an amazing compliment / sentiment! I am humbled by your thoughtful comments and I really do value your generous list add, my friend
It means a lot to me that you visit me  
and not to mention the huge smiles it brings.....  
I hope you're doing well. 🙏  
Much love and respect,
🌹  
xo
-S

loved this..right from the title .. soft & determined breezy tale of love.. with or without looking, the sun still is the cynosure .only one. ..  magically mystically indelible ... fine verses x:)

Hi there Uma :)  
🌹  
Ty Ty for your kind words... it's amazing how your thoughts are in tune with the tiny bit of magic I wanted to reflect... I am charmed, indeed... and so grateful for your generosity in the list add.  
I'm adore your writing... every word. Sometimes I just can't figure out how to properly covey that in words... I just wanted you to know that little tidbit. ☺  
All my appreciations ;)  
Much love and respect,  
🌹  
xo  
-Susan

Ahh the memories of Love and heartbreak us part of life.  When love works it's a beautiful magical feeling and you also get great sex.  Keep on writing.

lol... You're like a dog with a bone.... lol.
Ty for reading and leaving your thoughts, Francisco
🌹

Dear BV,

Harumph! You promised something mediocre. This. Is. Not. That. Something! It’s like you’re not even trying.
Just messin with ya. Honestly, this is too close to home and too touching for me to maintain a stiff upper lip. So I hide behind my façade of stupid humor.
“ born from a likeness
of pain
and hearts
that have grown too big” this is wildly superb. On a personal note I’m choked because we still can’t quite get it right. Alas, a beautiful write. Again. 😉
H🌷

Hee hee hee...
I wrote a tanka yesterday- before this one- that I swear it is a total half assed attempt.... hahaha.... BORING 💤 💤 and meh... (I tease!)
You crack me up, H. I Thank you for it too, because I totally needed that chuckle!! 🤭.... lol.

I'm so very happy you enjoyed this. You're not the only only who was choked up... I had tears running down my cheeks, writing. I think it's my hormones going haywire, like when you cry from watching a commercial and can't help it. I just seem to be doing that more and more often...Gotta love peri menopause!!! Lmfao. My appreciation is all yours for the honour of your list add, lovely lady!
I do adore you to pieces.... ☺ 💕🤗♥️

Enjoyed seeing you tonight!!
Much love,
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
-B

Such melancholia and poignancy...a loss of love...a poem for us all, Blue.

🙏 Harry

Ty for your thoughtful comments, my lovely friend. It's so good to hear from you and I just love seeing you on my page.. I appreciate the generous list add. I didn't think this little #Nopoo was as melancholic as it ended up being... lol. Some things just take on a life of themselves.... I think!

I hope you are doing well down under, Harry

Much love your way,
🌹
xo
Susan

The emotional nuances are so well rendered, subtly walking through the substrate of the monologue as it paints the milieu. Masterfully done. It is technique I often recommend to render full dimensions to writing.

I humbly thank you for your thoughts Daniel ....
I wish I could say that I felt like I was as technically savvy as what you portray, alas, I think I just happened to get lucky... lmao.... Really.
I absolutely love your honest feedback, and I still get excited about reading it, whenever I see a notification and spy that flame 🔥 from your avatar..... hahaha #Truth.
In all seriousness,
I do believe you've helped me to understand and grow (exponentially) ... So when I joke and say the above.. and the "I got lucky"... I kinda mean that it's comments like yours (especially) that have allowed my luck to take root. I really do thank you so much for being part of laying down the seeds... 🌱

Much love, my friend
🌹
xo
-Susan

this spill exuded wanderlust and carefree, play, playful intimacy
not only with another resonate
but with nature and magickal everything !!

i need to read here daily else i be missing out on these sparkling drops of flowery dew
You, spew / spill

Ohhh my...
I do LOVE LOVE LOVE the imagery you just wrote of sparkling drops of flowery dew... I think my breath caught in my chest as I read those words, lovely, Tallen... I'm not kidding either! .. I'm breathless... Ty so much for leaving me that visual floating in my personal ether... Gorgeous.  
I'm so glad you enjoyed reading, I extend all my thanks for the list add and all your loveliness...
Feel my sincerity as I send it out along the 🍃 winds of all my honest appreciation ~~
✨ 🧚🏻‍♀️✨
🍃🌱🍃🌱🍃
xoxo
-Susan

Omg this piece is just amazing
Your reading is just so beautiful, I didn't think you could elevate your work higher, obviously I was wrong
Absolutely awesome
Love and light
Ron xx

You are far too kind my friend. ✨
Ty for listening, I'm so appreciative and grateful for you... I'm all smiles from this comment and I humbly thank you
🌹
xo

Your comments are welcomed and very much appreciated (as well as closely capturing my intentions), my friend. I appreciate you taking the time and leaving your thoughts.
You're always welcomed here
🌹
xo

I've been on some bull lately, crushing feelings and whatever.  Nice Share.

Ty for your comments, Remy.
I appreciate the visit
🌹
xo

Susan I am absolutely stupefied by your sheer brilliance.
There really are no words to describe this magnificent work of art.
Listening to your words as I read and listened over and over again along is truly an emotional experience.
A genuine testament to the power of your talents
...Goose Bumps!!!
Your artistic ensemble of writing and audio is an incredible epic journey of honest reality portrayed through masterful poetry.
I simply find myself immersed in your exquisite poetic talents.
Masterpiece!

Good morning, Ron
I missed seeing you!!!.. It's wonderful that you have an opportunity to stop in and visit.... I appreciate you reading / listening and I'm beaming at your admitted "Goosebumps". What a tremendously awesome thing to know, I'm so blown away by that and humbled completely. I appreciate the generous list add and your very kind words.... I can't thank you enough for your sweet support and encouragement. I have been down on myself  today for various reasons and you've cheered me up to where I'm almost cracking a smile.... lol... almost....(I sorta tease)... Thanks for coming around and taking the time to leave your insights.  
I hope you are doing well, my friend 🙏  
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo

Absolutely wonderful Blue. Your reading adds so much to this as well we can feel the heartbreak and emotion underneath it all.
Excellent work.

Ty so much for reading and listening, Walter
You are an inspiration with your supportive sentiments. I'm so deeply appreciative and glad you liked it
Much love,
🌹
xo

Oh my, Lady Blue ❣️❣️ I am so touched by this piece and your reading of it. I felt such a pleasant tingle when i heard your voice  utter the first line. I can't get enough of listening to this very romantic verse.
I was overtaken by emotion when reading and later hearing these words,
"born from a likeness  
of pain  
and hearts  
that have grown too big"
We two are kindred spirits in this regard.
And my emotion overflowed with this passage,
"of all that my mind knows
as home"
The images evoked of a playful frolic by this passage just increased my joy,
"covered in bliss and fate
with bits of garden
clinging"
Bravissima, Goddess BB...an exquisite love letter 🐻💋🐻💋🐻

Dearest BB ✨✨
I truly love love love reading your comments. I wonder if that makes me full of myself or if that's just a 💯 shout out to your caliber of the crafting of words into exactly how you are feeling. It's a pleasure to behold and read. I soooooo stopped in my tracks when I read that you'me were over taken with emotion and.. - I just marvel. Me??!??
 I was able to elicit THAT? (no way!) I still have a hard time reconciling that in my mind. I am utterly and deeply appreciative.... You have no idea!!!  

Two kindred spirits, indeed.
Thank you for sharing your amazing remarks, your gracious list add and your gorgeous honesty.
My luck is that of the blessed, in having you as a friend  
Much love and respect,  
🌹
xoxoxoxo
-S

My pleasure. I added the last word, "letter," that was eaten up by the silly bear next to it.🌹

Hee hee hee.. Danke, BB
🌹

Awww... yes, a bit but mostly love of connection and a feeling that lasts.... despite being gone.
I thank you for reading, the list add and your kindness left in your comment.
You're always welcomed here
🌹
xo

Ty Danny... I was extremely emotional reading this... you caught that...
wow
I appreciate you listening
🌹