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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
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Re: Re. happiness.
11th Mar 2021 9:45pm
Re. happiness.
11th Mar 2021 9:52pm
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You just made my day... with your visit!! I thoroughly enjoy your comments, Ron. I'm so appreciative of you and I don't take your time, the list add nor your support lightly....
-all my deep appreciation..
Again, Ty Ty 🙏
Much love from across the pond,
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xo
-all my deep appreciation..
Again, Ty Ty 🙏
Much love from across the pond,
🌹
xo
Re. happiness.
Dearest, Lady Blue,
You capture so well that butterflies-in-your-stomach feeling of meeting someone with whom you have an uncommonly strong connection. There are times that I wished I had been more proactive with such feelings. "Soar" is such an exhilarating word.
The picture frankly freaks me out 'cause I can never muster the courage to ride that monster. However, it fits perfectly with this piece. Bravissima, mon Jolie amie, BB🌹🐻💋🐻
You capture so well that butterflies-in-your-stomach feeling of meeting someone with whom you have an uncommonly strong connection. There are times that I wished I had been more proactive with such feelings. "Soar" is such an exhilarating word.
The picture frankly freaks me out 'cause I can never muster the courage to ride that monster. However, it fits perfectly with this piece. Bravissima, mon Jolie amie, BB🌹🐻💋🐻
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Re: Re. happiness.
11th Mar 2021 10:03pm
Re. happiness.
11th Mar 2021 10:08pm
Re: Re. happiness.
11th Mar 2021 10:22pm
Me too, my dearest FeNyX... even the smallest punch 👊🏻 of happiness is enough to make me smile 😀 I thank you so much for the generous list add and all your loveliness... it's just so good to see you!!
Much love
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xo
Much love
🌹
xo
Re. happiness.
11th Mar 2021 10:43pm
Re: Re. happiness.
11th Mar 2021 10:46pm
You leave me breathless, sometimes, C
swoon.... ;)
Ty for reading and leaving me all a tingle, my friend 🙏
🌹
xo
swoon.... ;)
Ty for reading and leaving me all a tingle, my friend 🙏
🌹
xo
Re. happiness.
12th Mar 2021 00:54am
Hey, we remember that ride, we've never been on it. But we could just imagine that feeling of freedom if just for the briefest of moment. Hahaha, kinda like a kid begging to swing higher and higher trying to touch the sky. Totally cool piece, tight as heck. Dang you guys can really pack a punch within three lines
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Yeah that ride is AWESOME!! I love riding it
To me, It's not easy writing 5 - 7 - 5 in proper syllable structure and apply that structure into a coherence that's utterly poetic. I always found it intriguing and have the utmost respect for those who actually write them well and with such terrific beauty, emotion or poignancy. It's something that I covet and admire so very very much. That's why I wholeheartedly appreciate your kind words, Me. I cherish them because of that appreciation.
I take great pains to write my senryś or haiku. I have such respect for their meaningful structure and the history from which they came. An important feature that I try hard to uphold....
Thanks again, my friend
🌹
xo
Btw, who's you guys?.. 🤷🏻♀️
To me, It's not easy writing 5 - 7 - 5 in proper syllable structure and apply that structure into a coherence that's utterly poetic. I always found it intriguing and have the utmost respect for those who actually write them well and with such terrific beauty, emotion or poignancy. It's something that I covet and admire so very very much. That's why I wholeheartedly appreciate your kind words, Me. I cherish them because of that appreciation.
I take great pains to write my senryś or haiku. I have such respect for their meaningful structure and the history from which they came. An important feature that I try hard to uphold....
Thanks again, my friend
🌹
xo
Btw, who's you guys?.. 🤷🏻♀️
Re. happiness.
12th Mar 2021 2:34am
Dear BV,
Well heres a slice of uplifting joy and lighthearted hope. Just the ticket for today. I know senyru and haiku have such rigid structure but when it flows as beautifully as this its stellar. Another one for the good book!
H🌷
Well heres a slice of uplifting joy and lighthearted hope. Just the ticket for today. I know senyru and haiku have such rigid structure but when it flows as beautifully as this its stellar. Another one for the good book!
H🌷
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12th Mar 2021 3:16am
Ohh Honoria,
Senryś and haiku are some of my favorite poem types because they challenge me so. That's why I'm so very grateful of your thoughtful remarks and the generous list add.. 🙏. I have been on a senryś kick recently because my buddy AspergerPoet56 loves them (he's quite a master at them... just wow!) and I get inspired by reading his, and I hope to one day be as elegantly clever as he can be... That 5-7-5 syllable structure isn't easy. I know that I wrote a senryś once and publicly published it, only to find out my syllable count was off and I didn't realize until a few days later... I was so embarrassed.... derp. 🙃 Hence, the challenge.
Now, I triple check.. hahaha 😂 just to make sure... lol... Ty for taking the time to leave your thoughts, my friend 🙏
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Senryś and haiku are some of my favorite poem types because they challenge me so. That's why I'm so very grateful of your thoughtful remarks and the generous list add.. 🙏. I have been on a senryś kick recently because my buddy AspergerPoet56 loves them (he's quite a master at them... just wow!) and I get inspired by reading his, and I hope to one day be as elegantly clever as he can be... That 5-7-5 syllable structure isn't easy. I know that I wrote a senryś once and publicly published it, only to find out my syllable count was off and I didn't realize until a few days later... I was so embarrassed.... derp. 🙃 Hence, the challenge.
Now, I triple check.. hahaha 😂 just to make sure... lol... Ty for taking the time to leave your thoughts, my friend 🙏
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
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12th Mar 2021 3:33am
Re. happiness.
12th Mar 2021 5:53am
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12th Mar 2021 8:31am
Ty for reading and sharing those thoughts... I think so, too!
:)
Enjoy your visits, Richard!
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Enjoy your visits, Richard!
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Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Jul 2022 4:45pm
12th Mar 2021 8:30am
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Re: Re. happiness.
12th Mar 2021 8:32am
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12th Mar 2021 5:03pm
I appreciate your time and the visit.
Don't be a stranger...
You're always welcomed here, my friend
🌹
xo
Don't be a stranger...
You're always welcomed here, my friend
🌹
xo
Re. happiness.
13th Mar 2021 00:13am
That brought me some nice flashbacks, the start of something new, the possibilities, the excitement felt when we were young.
Nicely done Blue.
Nicely done Blue.
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13th Mar 2021 1:58am
Ty for reading, Wally
Glad you found something that resonated
I appreciate you.
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Glad you found something that resonated
I appreciate you.
🌹
Re. happiness.
13th Mar 2021 1:57am
...Mere possibilities'' are always better than none.....Hope. Always hope and it keeps you going. Regards, Robert.
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13th Mar 2021 1:59am
I agree, Robert.
100%
I thank you for taking the time to leave your thoughts, my friend :)
🌹
xo
100%
I thank you for taking the time to leave your thoughts, my friend :)
🌹
xo
Re. happiness.
Another one of your 'anticipation' poems maybe? I can certainly feel it, put it that way. I have an unfinished shortie that I would love to share with you later via a PM cos yours made me think of my own. Sure, my poem's about happiness too but the smuttier side, a cautious, unfortunately.
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13th Mar 2021 1:31pm
Sure!
I'd love to read it.. I enjoy the "smut" as much as the romantic or love poems, too. I'm equal opportunity, I am. lol.... I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts.
Whenever you get a chance, PM me, no problem, Snaggy 😁
🌹
xo
B
I'd love to read it.. I enjoy the "smut" as much as the romantic or love poems, too. I'm equal opportunity, I am. lol.... I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts.
Whenever you get a chance, PM me, no problem, Snaggy 😁
🌹
xo
B
Re. happiness.
14th Mar 2021 5:04pm
💞🙏 I know just what you mean. I've been blessed to know, even the agony is a blessing, it is life.
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14th Mar 2021 5:40pm
It really is life, isn't it!?!... damn you are a poet aren't you!!.. (she's cheeky) lol.... 🤭... giggling.
I truly love seeing you, my dear.
Ty for reading and leaving those spot on thoughts.
✨
🌹
xo
-S
I truly love seeing you, my dear.
Ty for reading and leaving those spot on thoughts.
✨
🌹
xo
-S