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Re. Dancing in His Dream
6th Mar 2021 11:19am
good morning dearest Wally this tore at my heart
beautiful expression of feeling ❤
beautiful expression of feeling ❤
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Re: Re. Dancing in His Dream
9th Mar 2021 4:35am
Thank you dear Crimsin and thanks for adding to your RL.
It's one of those things that we dream and we don't want to wake up from.
It's one of those things that we dream and we don't want to wake up from.
Re. Dancing in His Dream
6th Mar 2021 1:11pm
Beautifully heartbreaking in visual and in substance, Walter.
Outstanding job
I really enjoyed it's impact.
Ty for sharing
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Outstanding job
I really enjoyed it's impact.
Ty for sharing
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Re: Re. Dancing in His Dream
9th Mar 2021 4:37am
Thank you very much Blue (and thanks for the RL).
It's a mix of emotion and imagery that haunts the heart after awaking up.
It's a mix of emotion and imagery that haunts the heart after awaking up.
Re. Dancing in His Dream
6th Mar 2021 2:38pm
Re: Re. Dancing in His Dream
9th Mar 2021 4:39am
Thanks Poet. Too often we find ourselves trying to dive back into the dream.
Re. Dancing in His Dream
6th Mar 2021 4:15pm
There is terrific presence, subtle and evocative, to this write, which is both proportional and harmonious in the gentle lilt of rhyme. Well sculpted Walter, speaks to me of maturity and long acquaintance with the quill.
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Re: Re. Dancing in His Dream
9th Mar 2021 5:03am
Thank you very much for that wonderful comment Daniel (and for the RL). Visual poetry is becoming one of my favorites as of lately, conveying the message with a more raw and vivid emotion.
Re: Re. Dancing in His Dream
11th Mar 2021 4:59pm
I was just talking to Nomoth about his photography and how much it is at the center of his writing. It does add a wonderful dimension. I often say our writing is the shadow of our lives, so it is enriched by all other avenues we pursue. I am reading the Plath compilation by Hughes currently.
I have been thinking about a write where I talk about the moon reflected in the surface of a cup of tea I spotted whilst standing on my back porch, there is something of duality about it, the tenuously mortal and the celestially immortal.
I have been thinking about a write where I talk about the moon reflected in the surface of a cup of tea I spotted whilst standing on my back porch, there is something of duality about it, the tenuously mortal and the celestially immortal.
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Re: Re. Dancing in His Dream
13th Mar 2021 1:18am
Now that I have a smart phone I find myself taking pics of random things that inspire. What you described in your back porch sounds like a revelation to your eyes and an epic poem that may follow.
Re. Dancing in His Dream
6th Mar 2021 7:13pm
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9th Mar 2021 5:03am
Re. Dancing in His Dream
7th Mar 2021 7:48pm
You're really putting these out there lately, Wally. You nailed this image and words yet again.
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Re: Re. Dancing in His Dream
Lately as in the last few days and at the late hour (I'm working a "Poetry After Midnight" theme). I'm finding I'm enjoying the Visual poetry style with it's shorter format a bit challenging but also fun.
Re. Dancing in His Dream
8th Mar 2021 11:16am
Re: Re. Dancing in His Dream
9th Mar 2021 5:07am
Thank you very much Joseph, I appreciate the comment and the Reading List addition.
Hope all is well.
Hope all is well.