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I used to love you but now I just want to nail your best friend (competition entry)
Oh, I lie
it seems
I found a true calling
the lies flow almost too easily
I breathe in
and they're there, falling
when I exhale,
it's pure lying fire
Lies that feed
into our life of pretend
you
only loving the life
I generously extend
It's easy for you
and your conscious
to suborn all mutual fabrication
years of self absorption
translates to joint learned perfection
in all our classically narcissistic
outward deceptions
We both tend to pretend
so secretly disguised
covering in incessant lies
hiding the extreme cold
of our untouched hold
It leaves me
constantly craving
almost stark raving
for
h e r
sexy ass derriere
She never
really
confirms
nor denies
Always has me watching
with intensity and squirm
(you, are seemingly careless)
swimming
in this purposeful obliviousness
Damn,
your best friend
she is
So. Fucking. Relentless.
she constantly wicked conspires
for ALL
my sweetest favor
she batters my erotic senses
a sexual leopard huntress
I aim to tame her
tired, unseen in our faux boring
normal pleasantries,
you and I continue
to play out our usual role,
as your best friend
reverse cowboy rides
into all of my deepest desires
now, a hatched plan
to
FINALLY
take her up
on her nonstop demand
where maybe,
juuuust maybe
it will inspire....
animosity to spark
heated desire
and a future
of three(some)
might conspire
Published 23rd Feb 2021
| Edited 26th Mar 2022
Author's Note
for TROME's CHEATING compİBlu2021
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23rd Feb 2021 00:27am
23rd Feb 2021 00:42am
haha... Ty, O
just a comp piece that I have been messing around with.... lol
Ty for your kind words
just a comp piece that I have been messing around with.... lol
Ty for your kind words
23rd Feb 2021 1:07am
23rd Feb 2021 2:58am
Hee hee hee...The product of my work conference call on mute... this is what I was doodling while "listening" today...bad Blue! 😂
Ty LilD, I appreciate it ;)
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Ty LilD, I appreciate it ;)
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23rd Feb 2021 1:57am
23rd Feb 2021 2:59am
hahaha... maybe.
Just be good to each other and you won't have any problems!
Ty for reading
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Just be good to each other and you won't have any problems!
Ty for reading
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
23rd Feb 2021 2:43am
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23rd Feb 2021 2:58am
23rd Feb 2021 7:27am
This is a great response to the competition and you know this from a males perspective so well I might even begin to suspect you are a trans.
LOL not really
That good though I hope you win
Richard
LOL not really
That good though I hope you win
Richard
23rd Feb 2021 7:10pm
Haha 😂...
Ty for your thoughts, Richard!
It's just years of perceptiveness....
I appreciate your well wishes ;)
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xo
Ty for your thoughts, Richard!
It's just years of perceptiveness....
I appreciate your well wishes ;)
🌹
xo
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Sep 2021 1:45am
24th Feb 2021 11:40pm
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25th Feb 2021 2:50am
Thanks so much for your support, Wilber... I do appreciate it so much. I never really win comps, so I wouldn't hold your breath, but you're incredibly kind for saying so.
Be well and I am grateful you.
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xo
Susan
Be well and I am grateful you.
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xo
Susan
1st Mar 2021 4:19am
Wickedly wonderful. The buildup to Sapphic adultery is made even hotter by the prospect of a threesome. You do this well and I can appreciate the fine-tuning of your words. There is heat to be had here and I am glad I got to feel it.
John
John
1st Mar 2021 5:36am
Damn John, I do love that word wicked... heh heh heh... I'm just saying now that I'm utterly appreciative of your list adds and comments left on all my writes that you've so generously read this evening, that said, tbh this piece wasn't my favorite because I'm not the best at comp writing unless I'm extremely excited about the comp opportunity.... I liked this idea of writing from a cheater's viewpoint, it was difficult for me and I feel it's noticeable... which is ok... just a bit embarrassing... lol.. I'm glad you enjoyed it and got where I was going, John ;)
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xo
Susan
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xo
Susan
2nd Mar 2021 00:51am
Ty very much, Remy
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts.
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xo
Happy to see you :)
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts.
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xo
Happy to see you :)
2nd Mar 2021 2:07am
Truly deserving of a first place Blue. I liked that aside from the emotional fire this ignites there is also playfulness that the three could/might have, but again, it all depends on this type of friendship.
Congrats on the win. Excellent piece.
Congrats on the win. Excellent piece.
Ty Walter, for your visit and the kind words. I enjoyed your piece as well... I could never judge any of these comps because I always want everyone to be a winner... lol... I appreciate you reading and making time to leave your insights.
Much love,
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xo
Much love,
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xo
