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unrequited: a lonely senryś
the blistering truth
unrequited love's heartbeat
skips, slows slows slows stop
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 21st Feb 2021
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Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
21st Feb 2021 6:18am
Re: Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
21st Feb 2021 6:36am
Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
21st Feb 2021 6:24am
Re: Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
21st Feb 2021 6:37am
Agreed, but isn't it?🤷🏻♀️
Ty for reading and the list add, C
🌹 💜 🌹
I appreciate it, always.
xoxo
Ty for reading and the list add, C
🌹 💜 🌹
I appreciate it, always.
xoxo
Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
21st Feb 2021 6:24am
Re: Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
21st Feb 2021 6:38am
Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
21st Feb 2021 7:29am
Oh Dearest Blue, this well written Senryu is devastating. Let's get that ticker started again 🐻💋🐻💋🐻
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Re: Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
21st Feb 2021 8:22am
Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
21st Feb 2021 9:35am
Re: Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
21st Feb 2021 4:03pm
Awww... (hugs)...thank you for leaving your thoughtful remarks, dearest FeNyX
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xo
always appreciate
🌹
xo
always appreciate
Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
21st Feb 2021 9:50am
Re: Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
21st Feb 2021 9:57am
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd May 2024 11:45am
21st Feb 2021 12:15pm
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Re: Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
21st Feb 2021 5:18pm
i like that you're keeping this one, ethan ;)
my experience, within the realm of the dreaded unrequited, is my usual state of being, (it seems) so I definitely derived my impetus from personal experiences. Fortunately, I'm not currently steeped within that pining, but I know it and I know it well. 🙄
I love your descriptive vision - of a heart, in hands and physically feeling those last beats... it's prefect 👌🏻
Glad I stung, just so..
🐝 - 💜
i truly appreciate the list add and your thoughtfulness
Much love,
🌹
xo
my experience, within the realm of the dreaded unrequited, is my usual state of being, (it seems) so I definitely derived my impetus from personal experiences. Fortunately, I'm not currently steeped within that pining, but I know it and I know it well. 🙄
I love your descriptive vision - of a heart, in hands and physically feeling those last beats... it's prefect 👌🏻
Glad I stung, just so..
🐝 - 💜
i truly appreciate the list add and your thoughtfulness
Much love,
🌹
xo
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Sep 2021 1:45am
21st Feb 2021 1:48pm
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Re: Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
21st Feb 2021 5:07pm
Ty, Wilber
It was for a competition, so luckily I'm not heartbroken. ;) Thank you for your lovely comments
Much appreciated
🌹
xo
It was for a competition, so luckily I'm not heartbroken. ;) Thank you for your lovely comments
Much appreciated
🌹
xo
Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
21st Feb 2021 7:23pm
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
21st Feb 2021 8:44pm
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Re: Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
26th Feb 2021 6:47pm
Awww... it really is. It's kinda the story of my life... sadly... Ty, BP
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xo
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xo
Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
Anonymous
22nd Feb 2021 2:20am
Yes.
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Re: Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
22nd Feb 2021 2:24am
Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
22nd Feb 2021 6:47am
Re: Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
22nd Feb 2021 7:10am
Ty for stopping by...
Jealous?
You're far too kind
....Will you please visit again?...
Good. (yes, I just assumed) ;)
Much appreciated,
🌹
xo
-B
Jealous?
You're far too kind
....Will you please visit again?...
Good. (yes, I just assumed) ;)
Much appreciated,
🌹
xo
-B
Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
1st Mar 2021 7:08pm
Perfect description. It's like someone turns off the flow and you feel a pain one can never forget.
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Re: Re. unrequited: a lonely senryś
1st Mar 2021 7:38pm
Ty for reading and your comments, Wally
I really appreciate it and it's that slow fade to stop that definitely is the crusher!
🌹
xo
I really appreciate it and it's that slow fade to stop that definitely is the crusher!
🌹
xo