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Whiner Wakes
Honestly measured
beauty abounds in my life
epiphanous truth
beauty abounds in my life
epiphanous truth
Author's Note
Just needed a self-butt kick'n...figurative, obviously, I'm no contortionist 🤠
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Re. Whiner Wakes
Oohh Yes! Good for you, BB!🐻 💋 🐻
I love the uplifting and hopeful senryś /haiku (I never know which one is which) It's an amazing feeling to tap into that well of inspiration..
Wonderfully penned!! 👍🏻 ☺️
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xo
I love the uplifting and hopeful senryś /haiku (I never know which one is which) It's an amazing feeling to tap into that well of inspiration..
Wonderfully penned!! 👍🏻 ☺️
🌹
xo
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10th Feb 2021 2:41am
Thank you so much, dear Blue❣❣ I'm glad you find hope in the peace. A haiku is about nature and a Senryu is about human things. That's how I understand the difference
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am I off base? 🤷🏻♀️....?
Wonderful!
I do so love a hopeful piece.
It's infectious and that's always a good thing
You're a bright 🔆 spot!
🐻🌹🌹🌹😍
xoxo
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Wonderful!
I do so love a hopeful piece.
It's infectious and that's always a good thing
You're a bright 🔆 spot!
🐻🌹🌹🌹😍
xoxo
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10th Feb 2021 2:50am
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10th Feb 2021 3:47am
Nice! It's good to look at life objectively once in a while and see how blessed we really are...
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10th Feb 2021 4:49am
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10th Feb 2021 4:56am
Thank you my friend❣ I often lose sight of how truly fortunate I am himbled by accounts, like "Man's Search For Meaning," where others are subjected to fathomable abuse only to energe with a bright, optimistic perspective. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, Ethan.
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10th Feb 2021 4:35am
Dear GW,
I agree with BT, every time I open my mouth to complain I try to swallow my tongue because Im fool to do so. I know how lucky I am. I think your lovely senyru is an excellent piece of self awareness. No one gives a better butt kicking than ourselves. Great write. H🌷
I agree with BT, every time I open my mouth to complain I try to swallow my tongue because Im fool to do so. I know how lucky I am. I think your lovely senyru is an excellent piece of self awareness. No one gives a better butt kicking than ourselves. Great write. H🌷
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10th Feb 2021 5:01am
Anen to your insight about self-inflicted butt whoop'n. I am.always made happy by your comments and comiseration, dear Honoria 🙏🌹