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the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
alchemy and unmitigated surrender
beckon from across
cerulean deep blue seas
distance is but a flash of
electronic iridescent musing
floating upon each little reminder
gossamer-like of airy ether,
hazily encapsulate her soul's desire
idyllic beauty's bated breath,
jovial in exquisite mind's eye
kindly, in all her heart's requests
listen, dear - to such a fortunate wind
murmuring it's hushed secrets
needy, is the solid tempered ache
open arms to all and everything
passing through this needles eye
quiet in duel fervid hopes
righteously certain and
sure within
the very marrow of brittle bones
united upon those luscious waves
velvet swaths, oh to tender skin
wonderment alights a flicker when
xenial is two of piercing shine
yesterday now becomes forever theirs, as
zephyrs billow confirming a whisper'd, "mine"
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 8th Feb 2021
| Edited 9th Feb 2021
Author's Note
Zazzles Acrostic challenge, Alphabet Soup
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11770/
İBlu2020
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11770/
İBlu2020
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Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
8th Feb 2021 7:08am
Pulled me right in, never noticed the Acrostic ... Lovely ... Bless and love ... .
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Re: Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
8th Feb 2021 7:14am
Ty for reading dearest FeNyX... I'm glad you liked.. I'm so appreciative of the comments ✨
🌹
xo
🌹
xo
Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
8th Feb 2021 8:28am
You truly write some captivating stuff my sweet
Beautiful, mesmerising and intoxicating
Great write
Love and light
Ron xx
Beautiful, mesmerising and intoxicating
Great write
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
8th Feb 2021 3:12pm
Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
8th Feb 2021 9:43am
Blue is favorite color. The heart of the ocean is blue. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
8th Feb 2021 3:25pm
blue is also a favorite color!
Ty for sharing and reading, Francisco
I'm so appreciative
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Ty for sharing and reading, Francisco
I'm so appreciative
🌹
Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
8th Feb 2021 11:28am
Re: Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
Ty for reading and your thoughtful comment, that means a lot to me, Grace! :)
💜
xo
💜
xo
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
8th Feb 2021 11:36am
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Re: Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
8th Feb 2021 3:27pm
Ohh, that's very kind of you to say, BP. I'm extremely grateful and I love your visits...
nice seeing you :)
🌹
🐝
nice seeing you :)
🌹
🐝
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
8th Feb 2021 1:35pm
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Re: Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
8th Feb 2021 3:31pm
Your thoughts are intuitive and I am grateful for them, Danny.. Ty so much for reading and taking the time on my little comp piece... it's nice to get feedback that feels warm and inspired... I guess that's kinda selfish of me but I needed it.. so ohh well... lol
Ty for stopping by!
🌹
xo
Ty for stopping by!
🌹
xo
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
8th Feb 2021 4:49pm
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Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
8th Feb 2021 1:48pm
I've searched my vocabulary to find words for this amazing, brilliant, different, and one-of-a-kind write and only a thousand WOWS start to do justice. Hugs, kisses, and peace. oral
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Re: Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
8th Feb 2021 3:09pm
Your visits always make me smile, Oral. I'm appreciative of such kind remarks and your time
Always a pleasure ;)
returned hugs and kisses,
🌹
xo
Always a pleasure ;)
returned hugs and kisses,
🌹
xo
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
8th Feb 2021 2:58pm
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Re: Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
8th Feb 2021 3:06pm
huh... I didn't think so at all.
I felt like the words worked well for the alphabet soup themed comp... and weren't "dictionary words" (don't know what that quite means) at all.
To each their own!! 👍🏻
Thx for reading
-hope you look 'em up and come back to reread...
:)
🌹
-B
I felt like the words worked well for the alphabet soup themed comp... and weren't "dictionary words" (don't know what that quite means) at all.
To each their own!! 👍🏻
Thx for reading
-hope you look 'em up and come back to reread...
:)
🌹
-B
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Sep 2021 1:45am
8th Feb 2021 9:35pm
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Re: Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
8th Feb 2021 10:33pm
Ty Wilber
lol...
You're too kind, I'm so appreciative
of you, your thoughtful remarks, list add and kind heart
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
lol...
You're too kind, I'm so appreciative
of you, your thoughtful remarks, list add and kind heart
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
Re: Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
8th Feb 2021 11:00pm
Ty so much for reading, Billy ;)
I am partial to V, of course... no surprise there!
🌹
although Q is a close second....
Lol
I'm appreciative of your vist
always, welcome
xo
I am partial to V, of course... no surprise there!
🌹
although Q is a close second....
Lol
I'm appreciative of your vist
always, welcome
xo
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
8th Feb 2021 11:52pm
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Re: Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
Wow what a comment... sorry I missed it, Tim!
hahaha... I'm not THAT quick, trust me. Sometimes I've been working on something for days or a few poems at the same time because I can't seem to finish one or vice versa. So I guess it might give an appearance that I'm super productive because they're posted around the same time... but one may have quickly come to me and the other a struggle for days..haha.... nothing is as it seems! lmao! I thank you for reading and your list add..Your comments made me giggle and moan.... nooooo way!!... lol 😁
Thank you for stopping by and your visits!
Much love,
🌹
B
hahaha... I'm not THAT quick, trust me. Sometimes I've been working on something for days or a few poems at the same time because I can't seem to finish one or vice versa. So I guess it might give an appearance that I'm super productive because they're posted around the same time... but one may have quickly come to me and the other a struggle for days..haha.... nothing is as it seems! lmao! I thank you for reading and your list add..Your comments made me giggle and moan.... nooooo way!!... lol 😁
Thank you for stopping by and your visits!
Much love,
🌹
B
Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
9th Feb 2021 2:44am
Hmmm..."xenial" is a rather delicious word...thanks for serving it at this feast of verse. Dear Blue, this captures so well and so romantically cyber romance as you've illustrated with rich passages like this "distance is but a flash of
electronic iridescent musing" I have certainly felt this deeply, "needy, is the solid tempered ache.." And I am thoroughly touched by this passage,
"quiet in duel fervid hopes
righteously certain and
sure within"
Bravissima querida S❣️❣️🐻💋🐻💋🐻
electronic iridescent musing" I have certainly felt this deeply, "needy, is the solid tempered ache.." And I am thoroughly touched by this passage,
"quiet in duel fervid hopes
righteously certain and
sure within"
Bravissima querida S❣️❣️🐻💋🐻💋🐻
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Re: Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
9th Feb 2021 3:04am
Ohhh, BB!! 🐻 ♥ 🐻
This was extremely challenging for me, because I'm not great with forced structure, like this. It's just not how my brain is wired. I changed the ending three times already... lol .. I am not thrilled with what I have but I'm leaving it for now...
I really thank you for reading and the comments, you have me slightly more hopeful
You're awesome, BB... Ty for sharing those Bril insights
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
This was extremely challenging for me, because I'm not great with forced structure, like this. It's just not how my brain is wired. I changed the ending three times already... lol .. I am not thrilled with what I have but I'm leaving it for now...
I really thank you for reading and the comments, you have me slightly more hopeful
You're awesome, BB... Ty for sharing those Bril insights
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
10th Feb 2021 3:08pm
B right
R adiant
I nspirational
L ionhearted
L ovable
I lluminating
A uthentic
N imble
T errific
You truly are Brilliant Blue!!!!!
R adiant
I nspirational
L ionhearted
L ovable
I lluminating
A uthentic
N imble
T errific
You truly are Brilliant Blue!!!!!
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Re: Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
12th Feb 2021 7:44pm
Wow!
brilliant?!!?
Hardly, but I was inspired and I'm incredibly glad you stopped by and left your lovely acrostic!
I'm honored... Hee hee hee. I like nimble and lion hearted, especially! I'm always a bit naughty and nice! Thank you, Ron for all the incredible outpouring you have shown me. I am extremely grateful and don't take it lightly... ever.
I appreciate everything... always.
Much love and long distance hugs,
🌹
xo
B
brilliant?!!?
Hardly, but I was inspired and I'm incredibly glad you stopped by and left your lovely acrostic!
I'm honored... Hee hee hee. I like nimble and lion hearted, especially! I'm always a bit naughty and nice! Thank you, Ron for all the incredible outpouring you have shown me. I am extremely grateful and don't take it lightly... ever.
I appreciate everything... always.
Much love and long distance hugs,
🌹
xo
B
Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
12th Feb 2021 6:17pm
Intimate magnification, to see a galaxy within a tear drop, there are infinite oceans of depth within the most minute subatomic particle, phasing in and out of this reality onto shores we cannot yet fathom. This is very touching and eloquently gorgeous. 💖🎶🙏
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Re: Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
12th Feb 2021 7:50pm
I love exploring the supposed unexplored and putting my own spin on it.... lol. Your comments are a beautiful reminder that there's a neverending possibility to do so and that there ARE others who get it or come from a like understanding.... Ty so much for your eyes, comments and list add. It's always such a joy to be on the receiving end of your visits ;)
Much love,
🌹
xo
B
Much love,
🌹
xo
B
Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
15th Feb 2021 9:46pm
Brilliant outstanding work Blue. It flows so effortlessly. Excellent vivid imagery and expression through each line, it's very dreamlike.
Best of luck in the competition.
Best of luck in the competition.
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Re: Re. the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
15th Feb 2021 9:56pm
Ty so much for reading and the list add, Walter!
Your comments just made my late afternoon... Ty so much for that!
💜 🌹 💜
xo
B
Your comments just made my late afternoon... Ty so much for that!
💜 🌹 💜
xo
B