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It's not the beginning, but
end that determines friendship—
understanding the other
where they come from:
unhealed wounds, triggers
defensiveness, doubt
all needing more love
until recovered in trust—
virtually impossible
in a virtual world;
and yet, here we are
proof-positive it can work
There are no games with us
only a brutal truth
stripping bark
down to its tender pulp—
those insecurities that plague
a human soul
Because it's not the beginning
but end that determines friendship
Ours is far from over yet—
I'll always have your back
regardless of where you rest
your weary head
~
understanding the other
where they come from:
unhealed wounds, triggers
defensiveness, doubt
all needing more love
until recovered in trust—
virtually impossible
in a virtual world;
and yet, here we are
proof-positive it can work
There are no games with us
only a brutal truth
stripping bark
down to its tender pulp—
those insecurities that plague
a human soul
Because it's not the beginning
but end that determines friendship
Ours is far from over yet—
I'll always have your back
regardless of where you rest
your weary head
~
Author's Note
For Johnny xo
Five years of best-friendshipness, and counting
Five years of best-friendshipness, and counting
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Re. It's not the beginning, but
Anonymous
27th Jan 2021 6:05pm
Ohh! That bark metaphor is excellent! And this---
"virtually impossible
in a virtual world;"
Ain't that the truth. And that---
"Because it's not the beginning
but end that determines friendship"
Holy heck! What an amazing poem to mark the occasion. It will be 25 years before we know it! Thank you! xo
"virtually impossible
in a virtual world;"
Ain't that the truth. And that---
"Because it's not the beginning
but end that determines friendship"
Holy heck! What an amazing poem to mark the occasion. It will be 25 years before we know it! Thank you! xo
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Re: Re. It's not the beginning, but
27th Jan 2021 8:20pm
Lord! I might make it to 81, Universe willing! LOL!
Happy Anniversary Bestie! <3
Happy Anniversary Bestie! <3
Re. It's not the beginning, but
27th Jan 2021 8:06pm
Re: Re. It's not the beginning, but
27th Jan 2021 8:20pm
Re. It's not the beginning, but
27th Jan 2021 10:20pm
again....you're like the Poet Cheerleader of this place. i've often been abit "intimidated' by youyr optimism, but now it's you is you and i is me, & so be it............
Fine poom work, as always
<3 dkzk
Fine poom work, as always
<3 dkzk
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Re. It's not the beginning, but
27th Jan 2021 11:08pm
Re. It's not the beginning, but
27th Jan 2021 11:51pm
This is so beautiful ..
I love this metaphor as well,
"There are no games with us
only a brutal truth
stripping bark
down to its tender pulp—"
May you have many many more anniversaries!!
Happy Happy ♡ x
JeJe
I love this metaphor as well,
"There are no games with us
only a brutal truth
stripping bark
down to its tender pulp—"
May you have many many more anniversaries!!
Happy Happy ♡ x
JeJe
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Re. It's not the beginning, but
28th Jan 2021 1:33am
Always have best friend back. Always have your love's back too. Keep on writing.
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Re. It's not the beginning, but
28th Jan 2021 7:01pm
Re. It's not the beginning, but
29th Jan 2021 3:17pm
Lovely, lovely, that wrap up, sweet LadyA! Just as it should be with friends, all trust and no bs.
You are still penning sharp and from the heart.. I adore both qualities in your pen..
Enjoyed your "best-friendshipness" tribute ;)
much loves n blessins,
~d
You are still penning sharp and from the heart.. I adore both qualities in your pen..
Enjoyed your "best-friendshipness" tribute ;)
much loves n blessins,
~d
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Re: Re. It's not the beginning, but
29th Jan 2021 3:19pm
Ohhh look who's back! Great to see you here. You remind me of my first year at DU! xo
Re. It's not the beginning, but
1st Feb 2021 10:15pm
It's great.
Particularly like:
"Ours is far from over yet—
I'll always have your back
regardless of where you rest
your weary head"
Particularly like:
"Ours is far from over yet—
I'll always have your back
regardless of where you rest
your weary head"
1
Re. It's not the beginning, but
Anonymous
4th Feb 2021 2:43am
Hey Ahavati........fantastic ink........this is how friendship is supposed to be.......congrats to you and Johnny........may you both always be blessed with each other........wonderful tribute to him........you’re luving soul shines thru your words........enjoyed.........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. It's not the beginning, but
9th Feb 2021 3:34am
Dear Ahavati, I'm not sure if I've said it before, but you and Johnny are like ying yang, you inspire each other in such a way, it's amazing to witness it. Your piece (much like his), is just sincere and honest the reader feels the sheer emotion of it all.
Beautiful work.
Beautiful work.
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14th Feb 2021 00:27am
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17th Mar 2021 12:10pm