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truth in an uncommon coldness.
wrapped in my pseudo cold weathered best
braced for an uncommon version of chill
true coldness claws and sneers it's snark jest
frozen to bone—
sHiVeRinG
confined to an icy heart's shrill
eyes pried
to open so wide
pure.
vivid.
clear.
crystallized in sheer force
yet, with a tender-like care
s l o w l y....
beasts of burden gentle their snarling howls
the wind crawls to abscond
and all the while,
...spiked frost adorns
her cold
in exquisite glacial forlorn...
Author's Note
My #Nopoo that I beefed up a bit...
©Blu2020
pic: via Pinterest
©Blu2020
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
10th Jan 2021 10:38pm
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Re: Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
10th Jan 2021 10:45pm
Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
10th Jan 2021 10:47pm
I like how you spilled this piece as you capture the beauty of the cold yet you blanket it in a magical robe of warmth nicely compose dear poetess..respect enjoy your evening dear poetess 😇😁
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Re: Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
10th Jan 2021 10:50pm
The warmth now feels like it's coming from your general direction, Stoney!.. *wink*..
I thank you for reading and your lovely comments
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B-
I thank you for reading and your lovely comments
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B-
Re: Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
10th Jan 2021 10:54pm
😁 I appreciate your kindness and compliment as it warms my own heart and soul wishing you a very beautiful and blessed evening dear poetess and friend 😇😁
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Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
10th Jan 2021 10:49pm
Re: Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
10th Jan 2021 10:59pm
Awwww...(blushes)
My goodness, I'm all smiles! You just had the six word capability of making my night!!!
It's the little things, like a beautiful comment from your best DU friend... to make a mood so improve! I appreciate you taking the time and effort to make my smile this big. I'm thankful for the list add and my luck in our connection... ;)
Ty, C.
🌹
xo
-S
My goodness, I'm all smiles! You just had the six word capability of making my night!!!
It's the little things, like a beautiful comment from your best DU friend... to make a mood so improve! I appreciate you taking the time and effort to make my smile this big. I'm thankful for the list add and my luck in our connection... ;)
Ty, C.
🌹
xo
-S
Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
11th Jan 2021 1:25am
Re: Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
11th Jan 2021 1:26am
Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
11th Jan 2021 2:46am
Beautiful. Blue❣❣ Living in Texas, where the weather is hot the majority of the year, I have grown to appreciate more and more the cold weather. It's cold, cuddle weather right now. I love the classic vibe and beauty of this passage, "beasts of burden gentle their snarling howls." Brava sweet S😘
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Re: Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
11th Jan 2021 2:57am
Oohh my lovely B,
Likewise in my weather situation, I barely have a winter either. Hence, this idea sprang, with a mixture of my own inner woe is me...I long to cuddle on a cold night, especially since they're so very scarce..... I appreciate you reading and your thoughtful comments. You bring my the warmth that I was craving....
Much love and respectful hugs,
🌹
xo
B
Likewise in my weather situation, I barely have a winter either. Hence, this idea sprang, with a mixture of my own inner woe is me...I long to cuddle on a cold night, especially since they're so very scarce..... I appreciate you reading and your thoughtful comments. You bring my the warmth that I was craving....
Much love and respectful hugs,
🌹
xo
B
Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
11th Jan 2021 2:50am
Re: Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
11th Jan 2021 2:52am
Your reading, means the world to me, Grace
Much thanks for your eyes...
🌹
xo
-B
Much thanks for your eyes...
🌹
xo
-B
Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
11th Jan 2021 3:52am
True coldness claws and sneers it's snark jest--frozen to the bone
Wow... I know what it's like to brave for that sort. Spent my life doing it.
It's actually snowing here in Texas...
Hope you are cozy where you are 😘
Love ❤️. Margo
Wow... I know what it's like to brave for that sort. Spent my life doing it.
It's actually snowing here in Texas...
Hope you are cozy where you are 😘
Love ❤️. Margo
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Re: Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
11th Jan 2021 4:43am
Thank you for reading, Margo
Your thoughts and insights are appreciated and I'm thankful for your visit.
It's cold for where I am because we usually don't have much of a winter. Tomorrow it gets much warmer again... of course!
Thanks again,
🌹
xo
Your thoughts and insights are appreciated and I'm thankful for your visit.
It's cold for where I am because we usually don't have much of a winter. Tomorrow it gets much warmer again... of course!
Thanks again,
🌹
xo
Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
11th Jan 2021 4:54am
A chilled heart should never be ... Cold but quite nice ... Bless and love ... .
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Re: Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
11th Jan 2021 6:29am
Thank you for reading, dearest FeNyX and your lovely thoughtful comments
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
12th Jan 2021 5:50am
....love this picturesque winter cold wonderment! ''beasts of burden gentle their snarling howls
the wind crawls to abscond ''.. my favorite line, a whisper of winter in my ear as I experience the full context of this marvelous descriptive ''Cold'' write. Your talent is astounding!
the wind crawls to abscond ''.. my favorite line, a whisper of winter in my ear as I experience the full context of this marvelous descriptive ''Cold'' write. Your talent is astounding!
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Re: Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
18th Jan 2021 6:13pm
Ron,
I'm so sorry that I missed this comment... usually I'm on top of it! lol... I appreciate your insightfulness and I'm so glad you enjoyed it and found a small resonance.
You are a valued voice that I too enjoy reading.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
I'm so sorry that I missed this comment... usually I'm on top of it! lol... I appreciate your insightfulness and I'm so glad you enjoyed it and found a small resonance.
You are a valued voice that I too enjoy reading.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
13th Jan 2021 8:34pm
Maybe because it's the winter weather that I found this so warm and endearing but it also feels magical. It takes strength to forgive, but it's also necessary to heal in order to move on.
Excellent work.
Excellent work.
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Re: Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
18th Jan 2021 6:10pm
I agree... sometimes easier said than done.
You're kind in your thoughts and comments, Walter.. thank you ☺
🌹
xo
B
You're kind in your thoughts and comments, Walter.. thank you ☺
🌹
xo
B
Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
18th Jan 2021 6:02pm
I'm conflicted - I don't think the piece is about winter cold but either the world is a cold place, or the subject is similar to an "Ice Princess" - cold at heart. Her coldness protecting her??
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Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
18th Jan 2021 6:17pm
She's completely unfamiliar with such servere cold both emotionally or physically because it's not usual or commonplace, where she is from.
Metaphorically or physically....it's sort of an allegory.. a wee bit
Metaphorically or physically....it's sort of an allegory.. a wee bit
Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
23rd Nov 2023 2:44pm
Re: Re. truth in an uncommon coldness.
24th Nov 2023 4:06pm
You're beautiful, my dear... truly.
Doing a little stretching and yoga right next to you, via the cyber highway... lol .... It feels amazing, to get that stretch in... that's my goal in 2024 is to become more and more flexible I think it's key, as you get older!
This it was sort of a cringe-worthy poem and a blast from my past but I thank you for thinking there's Beauty here, how truly kind.
I hope you enjoyed your Thanksgiving holiday and enjoy the blackest of Fridays... Mwahahahaha.... (i joke of course!)
Adore hearing from you, my dear Pablo.
🌹💙 💙
Doing a little stretching and yoga right next to you, via the cyber highway... lol .... It feels amazing, to get that stretch in... that's my goal in 2024 is to become more and more flexible I think it's key, as you get older!
This it was sort of a cringe-worthy poem and a blast from my past but I thank you for thinking there's Beauty here, how truly kind.
I hope you enjoyed your Thanksgiving holiday and enjoy the blackest of Fridays... Mwahahahaha.... (i joke of course!)
Adore hearing from you, my dear Pablo.
🌹💙 💙