one whisper, is life made. (+Reading)

Soft and so beautiful
Loved it
Love and light you clever poetess
Ron xx

Thank you,dear Ron... I'm so appreciative of your comments, your list add and all your beautiful kindness.
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xoxo
-B

Ahh the soft leap in to the arms of another ... Bless and love ... ..

Ty for reading, dear FeNyx
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xo
-B

I love this poem. You are so expressive🌹

You are extremely kind, Grace... Ty very much for that lovely sentiment
I do love your visits
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xo

It whispers beautifully

Dawww.... I was hoping!....
Ty for reading and I'm glad you could feel it.
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xo

I feel this deeply love the picture as well
You are remarkable BlueBoo
Always ❤️
Jackie xoxox

Hee hee hee
#BlueBoo
Thank you so much, Jackie
You are so awesome and I'm a lucky Blue.
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xoxo
-B

The tenderness comes through in this piece. His presence like a cocoon keeping you loved, warm and safe.

Mmmm... yes exactly.
Ty for reading and your own warm thoughts.
I enjoyed your visit very much.
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xoxo

endearing piece Blue

Tyvm, Tim.
...you made my day.
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xo

Brava, Blue❣❣ This is a romantic piece. Of course may favorite passage is "the scent of need flares      
filling the room - - so sweet and head" The accentuation of "flare" brought the tingles. And I love the "child in tall grass" analogy. Definitely romantic💖

Hi there, B
I'm glad you enjoyed my attempt to wax romantic. Those were my fav highlights, too.
You're a lovely soul and I do love/ enjoy your visits,  
so. much.  
🤗🌹🤗🌹🤗
xo  
B

Wonderful recording, Blue💖

Thank you, B
Daniel's idea when he commented and I agreed
It sounds OK? (the audio and music combo?)
I never know.. how I sound to myself is one thing... lol
Ty!
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Okay? No ma'am it's beautiful❣

😘
Ty
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A loving a creative write miss blue 💙... warm expressions through every line... where I also appear to be lost... or found 🦋... within this field of dreams...🌹🌹

I can meet you there.....
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Ty so much, Eli.
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xoxo

Sounds delightful...💐  I'll  wait... and patiently watch for you... we can picnic 🦋⚘... and listen to our hopes and desires whisper to us from the tall grass... where we talk and laugh... until we are ready to walk amongst the hills of life that house this fabulous field of dynamic dreams...🌹🌹

... the wind 🍃 blows warm and you hold my hand in yours as we walk and talk...it's as easy and comforting as both knew it would be. Our minds sync and our souls alight with a recognition of familiar in another... You and I would be free in that we'd finally be able to share...
💫✨🌹🦋 ✨💫
Ty for your lovely thoughts, Eli... I have missed you... THIS.
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xoxo

Beautiful!!! This wondrous passionate write is pure Romance. But I must confess that my mind is stimulated by your dreamy poem and I feel seduced by an Erotic undertone, hmmmm that is because I always enjoy a ''A Happy Ending"! (stimulating erotic massage) hahaha  ...... You are a True Blue Romantic!!!

You and me both!!! ;)
Ty for reading and your yummy comments.
I'm a true romantic under all my kink fetishism..
hahaha
xoxo
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Really adore this poem in its conveyance of romanticism and intimacy.
"emerald green finds deep blue        
mesmerized then transported—      
a lost child, in a tall grassy field;      
burrowing into your warm strength"
Those few lines stand out for me on an already beautiful piece.

And I struggle with writing erotic poetry, it always comes out so vulgar, in my mind anyway...

I missed this comment Kieron, whoops...
Ty for reading / listening... I'm grateful for your insights, my friend. ;)
Not for anything, but sometimes vulgar has it's place... I'm just saying. One man's vulgar is another man's boring vanilla ice cream (I love both) ... hahaha..
"Erotica", "Romantic", "sexy".... makes no matter. Write from where it's real... where it rips you to shreds.. good or bad... that's my goal, if I can find it.... when I can't??? I like to write poems about flowers that resemble pussy... lmao... it's a fetish!
Don't judge... 😂 😂 😂
Much love for the comments, Kieron!
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xoxo
B

This would be well served, I think, with a gently read audio, soft music in the background. Lovely sensitivity to your rendering, flow in it's pace and meter carries that depth of emotion well. 💖🙏

I was thinking about doing that same thing...
great minds think alike , huh?.. weird... lol
I actually like doing audio now...
I think that I still need work and practice, but I've recently recorded three or more pieces... and I really do enjoy it a lot. I was going to go back and add more, but it felt self indulgent...
Anyway.. thank you so much for everything, Daniel. Your thoughts and insights are deeply appreciated and pondered upon. I love getting visited by you, so much.
Much love and respect (sugah!)
Hee 🌹
xoxo
Susan

Erotic romance is hot.  Keep on writing.

Beautifully rendered, Blue.  The line between sensual and sexual is really well balanced and the longing resonates.  Gorgeous work 💜

I love seeing you, Luna!
Thank you for your lovely comments and the generous list add. In do happy you enjoyed the listen. I hope you're settling in your new digs... Happy new year!
💜 - xo

Romantic . Breathlessly so. Beautiful voice. 🌹Admire.

Thank you for listening and your kind words
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xo

Thank you for reading, Kevin.
I appreciate your thoughts and I'm grateful for the compliment
Welcome to DUP
I hope you enjoy your time here.
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xo
-B-

Very dreamy and delightful Blue. It's like it's wrapped in warmth and tenderness.
Lovely verse.

That's what I was hoping would be the takeaway, my friend. Thank you so much for listening and your thoughtful comments..
I feel relieved that's how the reading came across as I added much later from the original poem posting...whew 💦
Ty, Walter
xo
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