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A Salvation by Gravity (NoPoo 55)
I sink like a pebble
Upon the ocean floor
Struggling
Always struggling
To swim in unknown waters
What did you see?
That attracted
Curiosity
Was it my seeming
Unflattering desperation
Whatever
Brought the smile
It gave me buoyancy
To float on the surface
Feel the sun again
Now these currents
Carry me on a journey
Where the only gravity
Exerted on me
Is yours
Upon the ocean floor
Struggling
Always struggling
To swim in unknown waters
What did you see?
That attracted
Curiosity
Was it my seeming
Unflattering desperation
Whatever
Brought the smile
It gave me buoyancy
To float on the surface
Feel the sun again
Now these currents
Carry me on a journey
Where the only gravity
Exerted on me
Is yours
Published 5th Jan 2021
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5th Jan 2021 3:31pm
5th Jan 2021 4:34pm
5th Jan 2021 5:57pm
You've tapped into emotions that exist deep within. I agree w/ Kink... this could be me, too.
Beautifully written, C
I'm always so awed by you.
💜
xoxo
Beautifully written, C
I'm always so awed by you.
💜
xoxo
6th Jan 2021 2:34am
6th Jan 2021 3:07am
Wow what a profound beautiful poem AP
Really touching thanks for sharing ;)
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Really touching thanks for sharing ;)
Jackie 🤗
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