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Treasure (See Note)
The moonlight is scattered over the mountains
In the distance there is Treasure
knowing its location
But I'm leaving again enslaved by my busy life
And again, I need to Apologize because I am in a hurry
In the cold vastness of stressful confines
In boundless distances Poetry beckoning
Trains rumble at the joints
Carrying beautiful words from the mines
Buried Deep Underground
Still, I only manage to hear a few on the wind
And to properly show appreciation for even less
I will continue to try and repent
In the middle of the busy day and life
Valuing distances and winds ...
I'm calling you from the station,
but it carries me in the wrong direction
And again, I am in a hurry and need to Apologize
In the distance there is Treasure
knowing its location
But I'm leaving again enslaved by my busy life
And again, I need to Apologize because I am in a hurry
In the cold vastness of stressful confines
In boundless distances Poetry beckoning
Trains rumble at the joints
Carrying beautiful words from the mines
Buried Deep Underground
Still, I only manage to hear a few on the wind
And to properly show appreciation for even less
I will continue to try and repent
In the middle of the busy day and life
Valuing distances and winds ...
I'm calling you from the station,
but it carries me in the wrong direction
And again, I am in a hurry and need to Apologize
Author's Note
The real treasure is all of you. I just wanted to apologize for not having much time to read and comment. Every time I get on time passes so fast and I have so many things I need to do that constantly pull me away. I am also dealing with some difficult stuff at the moment that only complicate things more. But there are so many beautiful souls and incredible writers that it bothers me a lot because I know I can never properly show appreciation for the encouragement and support I get. All I can do is apologize from the bottom of my heart. I want so much to read, and comment for, all of you. Also, I wanted to wish everyone a very Happy Holidays and New Years!
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30th Dec 2020 9:03pm
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30th Dec 2020 9:04pm
It hints of destinations and depots in life's struggles through everyday chores, sometimes forgotten.
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30th Dec 2020 11:30pm
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Very nicely said ... and life does muddle things up at times ... Bless and love ... .
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30th Dec 2020 11:32pm
Thanks FeNyX, I really appreciate your comment. Sometimes it can show us that there is always something more important. 💖 XOXO
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30th Dec 2020 9:15pm
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30th Dec 2020 11:35pm
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I love this railroad/mining metaphor. I especially like the realism of "Trains rumble at the joints" because my joints are prone to clickety clacks 😄 Bravissima, Kristina❣❣ We all do what we can in life and you are in such a transitional, growth stage that you needn't apologize for the neglect you perceive but rather enjoy wholeheartedly the time you can spare for poetry ❤🌹
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Thanks GW, I am really happy you liked the metaphor. It's true life can keep us very busy and sometimes it teaches us (and re-teaches) that there are even more important things than work and the day to day. But we do what we have to do. 💖 XOXO
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30th Dec 2020 11:36pm
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30th Dec 2020 11:37pm
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30th Dec 2020 10:24pm
Sending love, hopefully all gets sorted and we get you back soon
Have a awesome new year my graveyard, werewolf loving friend
Love and full moon light.....Howl
Ron xx
Have a awesome new year my graveyard, werewolf loving friend
Love and full moon light.....Howl
Ron xx
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Thanks Ron, I really appreciate that. I should be around I think, possibly even checking in more often. I have had to take some time off work here and there at the moment and they are going to let me work from home more, well I will mostly be at my Mom's house so I can help her. Anyway, you made me smile and I appreciate that. 💖 XOXO
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30th Dec 2020 10:43pm
Wonderful sentiment Kristina, no need to apologize. I know many of us are busy with work and/or with holiday plans and family time, and still trying to find the time to write and comment is a lot to take on. I'm lucky enough to work from home and got two weeks vacation, and even with that it seems like the time flies.
Thank you for thinking of all of us here at DUP, we're a small tight community, and we always appreciate the love and care.
Hope the new year brings you much joy and prosperity.
Thank you for thinking of all of us here at DUP, we're a small tight community, and we always appreciate the love and care.
Hope the new year brings you much joy and prosperity.
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Thanks Wally, I really appreciate the very thoughtful message. Like I said to Ron I guess I will be working more from home some but unfortunately that makes some things more difficult but at least they are working with me so I can deal with family issues. Anyway, I have been writing more - just have to convince myself to post them. 💖 XOXO
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31st Dec 2020 00:17am
KX you are a beautiful soul and your emotional allegiance to the DUP family is humbly displayed with this extraordinary sublime poem. You are one of the engines that pulls this poetry train and that is coming straight from the Caboose, lol. Seriously don't fret about the little things and take care of you. You are loved here.... You have never commented on anything I have ever written and as part of this family it's kinda feeling like domestic caboose over here, LOL. WE LOVE YOU!!!!!
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31st Dec 2020 00:42am
Thanks FF, that's a really sweet comment and I appreciate it a lot. Definitely not one of the engines though and you are not a caboose, unless you want to be at the back but we are not going to get into that. You sure are fixated on the caboose, I think there is definitely something to that. lol Thanks for the cheerful message! 💖 XOXO
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31st Dec 2020 1:31am
Oh stop it! You have nothing to apologize for. Seriously. As awesome as the DU family is, the "real" world comes first.
Besides, if you need to apologize, then I need to apologize double! I think we can all extend each other a little grace here, right...?
Love your metaphor as well, by the way. ❤
Besides, if you need to apologize, then I need to apologize double! I think we can all extend each other a little grace here, right...?
Love your metaphor as well, by the way. ❤
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31st Dec 2020 1:54am
I will stop, I take it all back because you scare me BT. :) I am really glad you love the metaphor though and the heart makes me a little less scared. Still do I really have to re-write everything? 💖 XOXO
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31st Dec 2020 2:51pm
LOL 😆 Oops, did I let the scary bossy lady speak?! My bad.
Really, I just relate to this write so thoroughly that I had to remind you (and myself) not to be so hard on ourselves....
❤❤ more hearts and fuzzy hugs ❤❤
Really, I just relate to this write so thoroughly that I had to remind you (and myself) not to be so hard on ourselves....
❤❤ more hearts and fuzzy hugs ❤❤
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Whew, I feel so much better now. I will try not to be so hard on myself if you do the same. 😘 fuzzy hugs, love it - is that a Canadian thing? 💖💖💖
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31st Dec 2020 6:07pm
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31st Dec 2020 4:35am
Very nice poem. We all get pulled in direction that time flies quickly. Keep on writing.
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31st Dec 2020 2:04pm
Thanks Francisco, I really appreciate your comment. Time definitely flies even amidst all the chaos of 2020. 💖 XOXO
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No apologies necessary Khristina
not at all. You are a very special lady and I’m sure I speak from Many when saying, we appreciate you sharing your poetry with us as much as you enjoy sharing . As for reciprocation it can be tough sometimes I think we all get that at any rate no worries darling and happy New Year’s to you too and this was a lovely tribute thank you🤗❤️🥳
Always your big sis
Jackie xoxox 🤗❤️
not at all. You are a very special lady and I’m sure I speak from Many when saying, we appreciate you sharing your poetry with us as much as you enjoy sharing . As for reciprocation it can be tough sometimes I think we all get that at any rate no worries darling and happy New Year’s to you too and this was a lovely tribute thank you🤗❤️🥳
Always your big sis
Jackie xoxox 🤗❤️
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1st Jan 2021 9:00pm
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment, Jackie. I always wanted a sister, or even an annoying or big brother, so it's great to have a big sis over here. I smile every time I see that. 💖 XOXO
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No apologies needed as I truly understand wholeheartedly what is important that you find the time for thyself, for we all have other things in our lives to attend too for we are only human beings looking for a place to sometimes to hide away from the stress and anxiety and hustle and bustle of the world, to me mentally coming here has been a place to be able to express our feelings and emotions and thoughts and meet people who have gone through so much yet continue to stand and fight and express themselves through unspoken words from the depth of the heart and soul and mind 🙏😎 dear poetess this is well received don't be so hard on yourself poetess stay strong even through the darkness of the storms keep writing and keep your head up and stay 🙏💪👊👊👊👌
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1st Jan 2021 10:43pm
Thank you so much for the amazing comment, Stoney. You have so perfectly captured the reasons for being here. You are so right about looking for a place to sometimes hide away from the stress and anxiety and meeting people who have gone through so much. Your words are so thoughtful and beautiful. I really appreciate it so much. 💖 XOXO
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2nd Jan 2021 1:54pm
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2nd Jan 2021 00:49am
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2nd Jan 2021 1:02am
Thanks Marks, I really appreciate your comment and I wish you all the best in 2021 as well. 💖 XOXO
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3rd Jan 2021 00:27am
Thank you for the beautiful poem sweetheart. 😘💖🙏🏻 We're all glad that you're here with us.
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3rd Jan 2021 00:37am
Thanks Daniel, It is always such a joy to see your comments and you are certainly a beautiful gem in the mines, here deep underground. 💖 XOXO
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17th Jul 2021 4:42am
Felt like I was watching a classic speechless film from the old days. It tastes like sandalwood and old, sweet tobacco. Loved it.
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17th Jul 2021 2:48pm
Hi Dreamboy. I love that description. Ah, the smell of sandalwood is beautiful. Thank you so much for the comment and thoughts. I am really happy you liked it! 💖 XOXO