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hand of glass
From the pitch of dark,
these corners glow in earnest
'Tis this one purest object of desired
one and of thine own feathered touch
with hand of glass,
and fairest of all the fragile broken pieces;
listen to thy sweetest sounds
quietly—
Dare to listen
as our,
or maybe my,
favorite'd did travel
atop each blinding jagged streak,
higher with each plea
of hushed benevolence
in all it's darkness curving
To lay claim and pine...
O' to beg for such it is
I will
time,
and time,
and time again
with my smug like clever
or the yawn of battered hearted ease
Still, I listen for such a telltale find
my all and everything
and yet ...
from the pitch dark
these corners still glow in earnest
Published 27th Dec 2020
| Edited 21st Feb 2021
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27th Dec 2020 7:45pm
27th Dec 2020 11:57pm
27th Dec 2020 7:46pm
WOW! Another masterpiece. I read several times to get the amazing message. Thank you Princess for sharing another of your works. hugs and peace,, oral
27th Dec 2020 11:58pm
27th Dec 2020 7:50pm
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27th Dec 2020 10:15pm
I particularly like the way you envelope the lines of the write, a technique I am fond of as well, as life itself moves in organic cycles. Nice use of more elegant language. I like how you keep your writes changing in various ways, something I try to do, but do not achieve so well as you. Beautiful work and enjoyable to peruse. 💖🙏
27th Dec 2020 11:56pm
Daniel,
I truly love your feedback visits so much.
My hopes are, that you are really aware of that.
xo
💜
Susan
I truly love your feedback visits so much.
My hopes are, that you are really aware of that.
xo
💜
Susan
28th Dec 2020 00:58am
27th Dec 2020 10:39pm
Bluevelvete your poetry spotlights your beauty beyond the profound verse that you continually to lay down.You are an amazing artist and your poetry is highlighted by the fact that you are pretty damn, hotttttttttt to boot, lol.
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27th Dec 2020 11:27pm
28th Dec 2020 4:05am
28th Dec 2020 12:59pm
Phrases coddled comes to mind
Elegant writing
Showing your talents here for verse and clarity
A really lovely poem
Like
Elegant writing
Showing your talents here for verse and clarity
A really lovely poem
Like
28th Dec 2020 1:03pm
28th Dec 2020 8:47pm
28th Dec 2020 9:13pm
You are kind in your thoughts, Kink
Lovely to see you.
You're missed, btw
yet, never far from my RL ;)
Have a happy new year ahead,
Much love,
💜-B
xoxo
Lovely to see you.
You're missed, btw
yet, never far from my RL ;)
Have a happy new year ahead,
Much love,
💜-B
xoxo
28th Dec 2020 9:40pm
Miss blue...🌹... a peek into the magic that hides in the arc 🔥 of lifes curves (glowing corners)... sparks lift and fly into the golden sky of the eve... carrying with the warmth and glow of your shimmering soul... where I listen... as you glisten so....⚡
Eli...💎
Eli...💎
28th Dec 2020 9:50pm
Ohhh Eli...
*hand to heart.
I feel like I only need to speak to you in poem speak sometimes, my lovely friend... lol.. Your comments leave me with such a beautiful feeling that it's impossible not to smile.. Thank you for your generosity in time and effort. How nice is it to know that it only takes one comment to make someone's day??!!...yes.
Day. Made.
I'm deeply appreciative.
Much love and well wishes,
🌹
xo
*hand to heart.
I feel like I only need to speak to you in poem speak sometimes, my lovely friend... lol.. Your comments leave me with such a beautiful feeling that it's impossible not to smile.. Thank you for your generosity in time and effort. How nice is it to know that it only takes one comment to make someone's day??!!...yes.
Day. Made.
I'm deeply appreciative.
Much love and well wishes,
🌹
xo
29th Dec 2020 3:34am
So beautiful Blue
Each line has it's own unique flavor
Epic writing girl
Each line has it's own unique flavor
Epic writing girl
30th Dec 2020 2:35am
You deliver a classical style with lines like "'Tis this one purest object of desired" and "listen to thy sweetest sounds" making these piece feel timeless, as if it could have been written 200 years ago.
Excellent work Blue, very lovely indeed.
Excellent work Blue, very lovely indeed.
30th Dec 2020 2:39am
Wally,
Your observations are very important to me and I am thankful to read your opinions, I am very happy you like this one... it meant a lot to me.
You are so kind, I'm always grateful
💜
xoxo
Susan
Your observations are very important to me and I am thankful to read your opinions, I am very happy you like this one... it meant a lot to me.
You are so kind, I'm always grateful
💜
xoxo
Susan
