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aether. (equilibrium in practice)
Your breath over my shoulder
gentle pressure of lips on my nape
timbre of true complex depth echo, but small
a bask, in your whispered voice softly in ear
Can you feel my breath catch?
or my palms oh so damp ?
My fragile newly opened heart
almost punches through
my well thought of infrangible ribcage
I feel tender fingertips in all places my need lives
Have the Gods been listening themselves?
Is my honor in such glory due?
To need this heady benevolent reward is
to breathe
For whatever deeds done, to such my unknown
I have not one single question per motive given
I need...
I need twice more
as begs and pleas underscore
I again, feel your breath over my shoulder....
Thank you....
.... Always.
Published 24th Dec 2020
| Edited 28th Dec 2020
Author's Note
©Blu2020
Equilibriate, breathe, exhale
pic: Blue Magnificence by Louise Adams via Pinterest
what was the thank you for.....?
Equilibriate, breathe, exhale
pic: Blue Magnificence by Louise Adams via Pinterest
what was the thank you for.....?
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24th Dec 2020 1:49pm
That picture and the title really set the tone for reading this magnificent piece perfectly. And reading your beautiful work is a great way to start the day! (and coffee)
24th Dec 2020 1:58pm
☕ Cheers!
Me too... coffee is my lifeblood!
Ty for reading, the list add and your lovely comments, Kristina
Your visit left me in smiles this morning
Have a very happy holiday.
🌹🎄🌹🎄🌹
xo
B
Me too... coffee is my lifeblood!
Ty for reading, the list add and your lovely comments, Kristina
Your visit left me in smiles this morning
Have a very happy holiday.
🌹🎄🌹🎄🌹
xo
B
24th Dec 2020 2:03pm
It takes something really special for me to put in the category of coffee ☕. lol Oh, and I love that avatar - it's just so calm and peaceful. Wishing you and yours a very happy holidays as well. 💖
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/400414-dawning-elixir-my-ode-continues/
I'm showing you only to impress upon you my affinity, too. I'm such a coffee nerd!!
☺ hahahaha
I've written many a coffee ode....
Thought you'd chuckle
☕tink*☕
xo
PS.. Thank you about the avatar
I'm showing you only to impress upon you my affinity, too. I'm such a coffee nerd!!
☺ hahahaha
I've written many a coffee ode....
Thought you'd chuckle
☕tink*☕
xo
PS.. Thank you about the avatar
24th Dec 2020 2:32pm
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24th Dec 2020 2:48pm
Oh to be as desired
Absolutely beautiful, sensual and loving
Spooning is awesome
Love and light
Ron xx
Absolutely beautiful, sensual and loving
Spooning is awesome
Love and light
Ron xx
24th Dec 2020 4:59pm
Thank you for reading and the RL add, Ron.
Your beautiful heart and soul shine bright from across the pond... I feel the warmth.
Merry Christmas to you and yours,
Much love,
xo
B
Your beautiful heart and soul shine bright from across the pond... I feel the warmth.
Merry Christmas to you and yours,
Much love,
xo
B
24th Dec 2020 3:33pm
Another amazing and thought-provoking poem. Thanks. Have a positive and happy holiday season. Hugs, orl
24th Dec 2020 3:35pm
24th Dec 2020 4:01pm
Sheesh..🤯 incredibly beautiful and straight up entrancing penning here bluevelvete I so love this it leaves me speechless! you have some dope ass writing skills thanks for sharing!
24th Dec 2020 5:11pm
Your thoughts are as beautifully shocking, my friend. I and humbled by your insightful comments
My gratitude is aplenty for your visit, the list add and making my afternoon that much brighter.
Season's Greetings to you and yours
❄ ☃️ ❄️
xo
B
My gratitude is aplenty for your visit, the list add and making my afternoon that much brighter.
Season's Greetings to you and yours
❄ ☃️ ❄️
xo
B
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24th Dec 2020 5:05pm
You know what they say, Tim.... flattery gets you... everywhere! ;)..... lol (blushes at you comments)
I'm very thankful for you and your new friendship this year. I am humbled and I thoroughly understand just how lucky I am to be able to write and create with such talented people around me.
Ty for the RL add, your confidence in me and your honest thoughts.
I'm overwhelmed 🙏
Merry Christmas to you and yours
Much love,
xo
Susan
I'm very thankful for you and your new friendship this year. I am humbled and I thoroughly understand just how lucky I am to be able to write and create with such talented people around me.
Ty for the RL add, your confidence in me and your honest thoughts.
I'm overwhelmed 🙏
Merry Christmas to you and yours
Much love,
xo
Susan
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24th Dec 2020 5:39pm
Beautiful Bluevelvete!!! May you have a very Merry Christmas to you and all of yours. You take my breath away every time you lay down your poetry!!!
24th Dec 2020 7:10pm
Love the spiritual overtone of your subconsciousness of your thoughts nicely done poetess..respect enjoy your day today 😇😁
28th Dec 2020 9:19pm
Thank you so much Stoney!
I deeply appreciate your visits and feedback
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
I deeply appreciate your visits and feedback
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
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28th Dec 2020 10:22pm
Stunning work Blue. It really permeates the emotion of balance between the physical and the ethereal, appreciating the gift of life, captured beautifully in this piece.
28th Dec 2020 10:24pm
Thank you, Wally
Your comments are always so helpful and deeply appreciated!
Much love,
💜
xoxo
Your comments are always so helpful and deeply appreciated!
Much love,
💜
xoxo
