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alone, yet not alone with her heartbreak. [800 years and counting]
Last night @ 6:41pm EST
I fell so in love
Yet alone, where no one knew
under a dazzling brilliant shine
I could hear centuries tell their stories
Jupiter and Saturn shook hands
The true magic of an ineffable conjunction
eight hundred years of secrets strewn
...I captured it..
as my heart broke...
Published 23rd Dec 2020
| Edited 28th Dec 2020
Author's Note
pic: Bluevelvete
The Saturn and Jupiter conjunction from atop a 7 story parking garage of a company that sits empty because everyone is working from home. I watched the Ursid meteor shower as well. Stunning
... we are but a spec...
©Blu2020
The Saturn and Jupiter conjunction from atop a 7 story parking garage of a company that sits empty because everyone is working from home. I watched the Ursid meteor shower as well. Stunning
... we are but a spec...
©Blu2020
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23rd Dec 2020 1:30pm
23rd Dec 2020 1:54pm
Thank you, LilD!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it,
Much thanks for the RL add
💜
xoxo
I'm so glad you enjoyed it,
Much thanks for the RL add
💜
xoxo
23rd Dec 2020 2:13pm
23rd Dec 2020 7:50pm
23rd Dec 2020 2:39pm
23rd Dec 2020 7:52pm
23rd Dec 2020 3:33pm
23rd Dec 2020 8:03pm
Dearest FeNyX,
Thank you for reading and your always welcomed kindness.
Season's Blessings to you and yours
❄ ☃️ ❄️
Thank you for reading and your always welcomed kindness.
Season's Blessings to you and yours
❄ ☃️ ❄️
23rd Dec 2020 8:25pm
23rd Dec 2020 5:25pm
23rd Dec 2020 7:51pm
23rd Dec 2020 8:02pm
You are a wise wordsmith, Grace.
Pain gives us a crazy sense of keen awareness
Much love,
🌹
xo
Pain gives us a crazy sense of keen awareness
Much love,
🌹
xo
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
23rd Dec 2020 8:57pm
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That's high praise, Tim and I'm truly thankful for your comments, the list add and your lovely insights. Thank you for all you've helped me with and been there for.
Season's Greetings to you and yours
❄
xoxo
Susan
Season's Greetings to you and yours
❄
xoxo
Susan
23rd Dec 2020 11:52pm
BV this is such a beautifully creative write. Your energy and vibration uniquely encapsulates light years of beauty with your expressive universal connections through poetry. Brilliant!
23rd Dec 2020 11:59pm
Thank you for reading and your generosity of thought. My creativity was feeling a bit repetitive and self serving... (me me me) even though this still is... lol.... I tried to call to the feel of what was happening emotionally due to viewing this, on my own especially...
Ty for the RL add and all your kindness
Happy Holidays!
xoxo
B
Ty for the RL add and all your kindness
Happy Holidays!
xoxo
B
24th Dec 2020 5:28am
24th Dec 2020 12:06pm
24th Dec 2020 10:25am
Dear BV,
Well now. It’s moments such as these that point out to me just how insignificant I am compared to the vast and powerful universe. Falling in and out of love plays no roll to the beauty and grandeur of this spectacular moment. Whatever angst and pain I might have been feeling prior to seeing this was relieved by a hug so warm and enveloping as to forget my own problems. Gorgeous write. H🌷
Well now. It’s moments such as these that point out to me just how insignificant I am compared to the vast and powerful universe. Falling in and out of love plays no roll to the beauty and grandeur of this spectacular moment. Whatever angst and pain I might have been feeling prior to seeing this was relieved by a hug so warm and enveloping as to forget my own problems. Gorgeous write. H🌷
24th Dec 2020 1:02pm
Dearest H,
I think that's quite possibly the best comment of my DU experience. You totally outdid yourself and I'm all "Omg, awwww-ing" while dabbing the corners of my eyes... Thank you, for You.
I am so so glad to have your warmth, heart and generous humor not just here on my page but all over DU in the little places we both share in our DU movements, that make me smile or downright belly laugh. You are such a bright light and lovely poet, My cup runneth over, Honoria... thank you.
Much love and Merry Christmas!
🎅 🥃 🍷🥂☃️🎁🍸❄️
xoxo
Susan
I think that's quite possibly the best comment of my DU experience. You totally outdid yourself and I'm all "Omg, awwww-ing" while dabbing the corners of my eyes... Thank you, for You.
I am so so glad to have your warmth, heart and generous humor not just here on my page but all over DU in the little places we both share in our DU movements, that make me smile or downright belly laugh. You are such a bright light and lovely poet, My cup runneth over, Honoria... thank you.
Much love and Merry Christmas!
🎅 🥃 🍷🥂☃️🎁🍸❄️
xoxo
Susan
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Sep 2021 1:45am
24th Dec 2020 6:29pm
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24th Dec 2020 6:49pm
Thank you for your insights, Wilber
Your visits are a truly lovely. I appreciate the list add and your thoughtfulness so very much
Season's Greetings to you and yours
Much love,
❄ ☃️ ❄️
xo
B
Your visits are a truly lovely. I appreciate the list add and your thoughtfulness so very much
Season's Greetings to you and yours
Much love,
❄ ☃️ ❄️
xo
B
24th Dec 2020 7:16pm
I could just imagine the view you captured it so well nicely composed dear poetess..respect
25th Dec 2020 7:01pm
I love how this planetary conjuction is a once in a lifetime experience, and us stargazers were treated with such a beautiful view.
Excellent verse Blue.
Excellent verse Blue.
25th Dec 2020 7:15pm
Me too, Wally.... me too.
Ty for reading and sharing your thoughts today
I appreciate the list add as well
🌹
Much love,
X
B
Ty for reading and sharing your thoughts today
I appreciate the list add as well
🌹
Much love,
X
B
