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Vampire's Kiss
Drops of blood run down my neck
Merging with a transparent
stream of sweat
Still this is only a small taste of
what is to come
No one will understand and no one
will believe
The bite of a Vampire
Being exposed to it,
I gave myself into an embrace
And he, lips snarled, initiated me
Into his circle, into his sect …
He pulled up the hem of my skirt
My beautiful Vampire
Lower and lower, softer …
Tongue strokes me gently,
saliva making way for this gift
Fangs pressed against smooth skin
Like a tarantula they slowly scrape
searching
Close to where petals tremble
And I, the prey, shake with
anticipation and fear
While the fire of passion flares up
faster
Trying to be disobedient to him,
but my mind is entranced
I cannot
And this night will exist only in
red colors …
Tongue probing between my legs
tormenting me
And on the petals a steady rain
flows
As this beast licks my pearl,
and I am overwhelmed
Paralyzed by the intense pleasure
and desire to be taken
Biting my own lip to pain and blood
as if commanded
My legs firmly held open as I
struggle
with my last bit of strength
All the while wanting to give in
Slowly breaking the barrier to
my life
Piercing my thigh with burning teeth
Venom ensures a free flow
and I am tingling from head to toe
In the heat of this passionate
violation…
Only screams and moans are heard
My beautiful Vampire,
the source of pain and rapture
He took me and subdued me in
his world!
At the moment of climax,
I am his completely
Pierces my soul...
And he sucked me into his sphere
Now my lust includes the need
for prey and blood
And the day is scary to me;
only the night is my world
And you, my Vampire,
will never dry up
You took me, you captured me,
I am yours forever!
Merging with a transparent
stream of sweat
Still this is only a small taste of
what is to come
No one will understand and no one
will believe
The bite of a Vampire
Being exposed to it,
I gave myself into an embrace
And he, lips snarled, initiated me
Into his circle, into his sect …
He pulled up the hem of my skirt
My beautiful Vampire
Lower and lower, softer …
Tongue strokes me gently,
saliva making way for this gift
Fangs pressed against smooth skin
Like a tarantula they slowly scrape
searching
Close to where petals tremble
And I, the prey, shake with
anticipation and fear
While the fire of passion flares up
faster
Trying to be disobedient to him,
but my mind is entranced
I cannot
And this night will exist only in
red colors …
Tongue probing between my legs
tormenting me
And on the petals a steady rain
flows
As this beast licks my pearl,
and I am overwhelmed
Paralyzed by the intense pleasure
and desire to be taken
Biting my own lip to pain and blood
as if commanded
My legs firmly held open as I
struggle
with my last bit of strength
All the while wanting to give in
Slowly breaking the barrier to
my life
Piercing my thigh with burning teeth
Venom ensures a free flow
and I am tingling from head to toe
In the heat of this passionate
violation…
Only screams and moans are heard
My beautiful Vampire,
the source of pain and rapture
He took me and subdued me in
his world!
At the moment of climax,
I am his completely
Pierces my soul...
And he sucked me into his sphere
Now my lust includes the need
for prey and blood
And the day is scary to me;
only the night is my world
And you, my Vampire,
will never dry up
You took me, you captured me,
I am yours forever!
Author's Note
Thank you averagejoe69 for inspiring this write with a comment. I said I would try this weekend so here it is. :) I did try to keep it from having Extreme Content which was hard. I guess there is a chance I will work up the courage to post an EC version but probably not. Kind of stuck on the erotic category recently so I will try to do something else soon. :)
Oh, and I held a tarantula once and he kept probing along my hand with his fangs, in case that reference does not make sense. lol It is a real life experience so there. ;) * Okay this note is way to long so it ends here *
Oh, and I held a tarantula once and he kept probing along my hand with his fangs, in case that reference does not make sense. lol It is a real life experience so there. ;) * Okay this note is way to long so it ends here *
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Re. Vampire's Kiss
20th Dec 2020 10:09pm
Absolutely awesome write, sensual, dark and sexy
Great job. Loved it
Love and light
Ron xx
Great job. Loved it
Love and light
Ron xx
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20th Dec 2020 10:14pm
I am really happy you liked it, otherwise I would have been crushed since you inspired it. :) Thank you so much for the comment, compliment, and again for the one that inspired this; sensual, dark, and sexy is a great combination and what I was aiming for so I love that description. 💖 xoxo
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20th Dec 2020 10:35pm
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21st Dec 2020 00:23am
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20th Dec 2020 10:44pm
Damb this is hot🌋🌋 (he says as he demonstates a good sopt on his neck for bites). I am completelyenraptured by your imagery from word one. This molten passage fairly hardened my steel,
"And on the petals a steady rain
flows
As this beast licks my pearl,"
Brabissima bella poeta🌹 Wow❣ Wow❣Wow❣
Thank you gor sharing this intoxicatingly titillating piece, BD🙏
"And on the petals a steady rain
flows
As this beast licks my pearl,"
Brabissima bella poeta🌹 Wow❣ Wow❣Wow❣
Thank you gor sharing this intoxicatingly titillating piece, BD🙏
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21st Dec 2020 00:25am
I know if I get three Wows from you on erotica I am over the moon considering your prowess in the area. Thank you so much for the awesome comment and compliment. Completely enraptured from word one, absolutely humbled! Thanks again... Keep that
steel shiny and ... well you know. 💖 xoxo
steel shiny and ... well you know. 💖 xoxo
Re. Vampire's Kiss
Your poetry
And Netflix
Are MY FAVORITE MIX
VERY TALENTED GIRL X
NEW POETRY COMING SOON
2020 ?? 😍😎🌷😄
And Netflix
Are MY FAVORITE MIX
VERY TALENTED GIRL X
NEW POETRY COMING SOON
2020 ?? 😍😎🌷😄
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lol, I don't know about Netflix but I will take that as a compliment and combined with 'very talented' I am very happy and appreciate it very much! New poetry coming? * cough * (no it's not Covid) maybe. 💖 xoxo
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KX this provocative blood thirsty write is an erotic dark sultry masterpiece. It is something I can sure sink my teeth into and I always welcome a taste of your visual dark, orgasmic, and juicy poetry. Mmmmmmm, Not to be a ''Pain in the Neck'' but I sure could go for a Bloody Mary right about now, lol. Seriously KX your passion and imagination in poetry is a mesmerizing experience when I immerse myself into your words. Bravo!!!!
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21st Dec 2020 00:34am
Your comments never disappoint with so much metaphoric excellence. lol Okay I am beaming enough to burn up a Vampire like the sun when you say 'erotic dark masterpiece' but I don't want to kill any vampires so be careful throwing around compliments like that please. Thank you so much for this incredible comment, I appreciate it so much! 💖 xoxo
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20th Dec 2020 11:55pm
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21st Dec 2020 00:26am
Thank you so much for the comment and compliment Poetspeak. I know I am weird but I absolutely love 'creepy sexual enticement'. So besides loving that you found the imagery very compelling I think I love that even more. lol 💖 xoxo
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21st Dec 2020 00:30am
Trust me
You're not weird
Kink comes in all shapes, sizes and needs
Find your passion and get as much as you can .....xx
You're not weird
Kink comes in all shapes, sizes and needs
Find your passion and get as much as you can .....xx
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Re. Vampire's Kiss
21st Dec 2020 00:51am
There is a poetess on here with a series titled 'A twist Of A Vampire's Fate" Her name is SweetKittyCat5. We think that you may enjoy the series, it is erotic and dark with both werewolves and vampires. This is intense in it's on self and we have always thought as a vampire when and where is the best time and place for the bite. The neck is clearly to obvious, to visible, but with kiss and teeth retracted it can lead to nipple suckled and upper inner thighs feedings. Yes smoking, we will return from the shadows after the turn of the year, until then we are going to play on the sidelines. But dang this is tight so freaking hot and trying to draw I from the shadows. Tight work Lady
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21st Dec 2020 1:08am
Now I want so much to draw I from the shadows! lol But maybe I should give you this break because I am sure when you come out of the shadows in 2021 it will be epic. Thank you for the SKC5 recommendation, I will definitely be looking that up at some point. I love Werewolves and Vampires so that sounds heavenly (okay maybe that's the wrong word but you know what I mean). And tight enough to compel I_IS_ME out of the shadows, that is super high praise indeed. Keep feeding through the holidays because I want nothing but the best of ME in the new year! 💖 xoxo
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21st Dec 2020 4:45am
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21st Dec 2020 2:07pm
Thank you so much for the comment Francisco. I enjoyed it very much and I hope you did too. :) 💖 xoxo
Re. Vampire's Kiss
22nd Dec 2020 1:25pm
Was on the edge of my seat...waiting for the sequel. Amazing. Thanks for sharing. Peace. oral
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22nd Dec 2020 1:28pm
I like keep you on the edge of your seat... Ah, the sequel. Maybe. :p Thank you for reading and the comment. I always love to see you Oral. Stay passionate and awesome. 💖 xoxo
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22nd Dec 2020 1:32pm
It is easy to stay passionate feeding and identifying with your words. Thanks for being an amazing poet and encourager. xo, Peace. oal
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You've touched into an interesting truth here, about the BDSM thing, that in giving power to someone else, you are giving them trust, placing yourself into their hands. It is a way to deepen intimacy. Your flow of detail is well paced, I found nothing superfluous in the rendering, all well put together and imbued with that delicate wisp of presence and passion, we only capture through the courage of candor. Excellent work.
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22nd Dec 2020 9:01pm
Thank you very much for the comment and compliment Daniel. I always love getting your perspective, especially when delving into a different type of writing; although this topic came quite naturally for me. I am really glad you did not find anything superfluous and felt the delicate presence and passion. As always, I appreciate your very meaningful analysis so much and it always helps me feel a bit more confident about the execution. 💖 xoxo
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23rd Dec 2020 9:41pm
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23rd Dec 2020 9:51pm
I think it is safe to say that we all benefit from the abyss of your mind, Adagio. Maybe some day I will show the true abyss of mine. Thank you so much for the comment. I always appreciate your visit and feedback very much. 💖 xoxo
Re. Vampire's Kiss
24th Dec 2020 1:05am
You've certainly turned up the fire on this Kristina. I love the mix of the vampire lore and the erotic tones and gave us a great piece.
"the source of pain and rapture" for me really sums it up.
Bravo!
"the source of pain and rapture" for me really sums it up.
Bravo!
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24th Dec 2020 2:03am
It's because I always want you to drop your popcorn or skittles now since that makes me so happy. So you started it or maybe It's just the blood lust and all the whips, ropes, handcuffs, and other stuff laying around here. Regardless, I appreciate your comment and compliment. And yes, pain and rapture about sums it up. :) 💖 xoxo
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24th Dec 2020 2:51pm
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24th Dec 2020 2:57pm
Thank you so much for stopping by, Marks. I am really glad you liked it. :) And a Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to you and yours! 💖 xoxo
Re. Vampire's Kiss
28th Dec 2020 00:09am
Quite interesting write with the mixing of the dark supernatural with erotica. The lure of the forbidden and carnal pleasures; the freedom of submission leading to the power of a predator. My first few times reading this, I thought there was a connection between vampire, blood and menstrual cycle, and example, "....my Vampire, will never dry up." But have since, left that interpretation. Although, I'm not 100% sure.
Now I will go and fashion my garlic necklace. Although one could do worse than the Vampiress KristinaX stalking them! : )
Now I will go and fashion my garlic necklace. Although one could do worse than the Vampiress KristinaX stalking them! : )
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28th Dec 2020 1:15am
First of all I am really happy to see this long comment from you DaVinci because I knew it must be a good one and you did not disappoint. :) I am glad you found it interesting, I love vampires and sex so it just made sense to me. lol The submission and predator aspect lending perfectly to inclusion of BDSM. Had this been the vampiress in my previous one that would be a perfect conclusion regarding menstrual cycle. But alas in this case it is kind of just a reference to eternal sex. If it said 'I will never dry up' that would have worked also. Still a great connection to make nonetheless. And even to the very last sentence such a wonderful comment. Thank you for that. 💖 xoxo
Re. Vampire's Kiss
2nd Apr 2021 4:04pm
Loving this one as I have a love of Vampire's : ) Dark and Erotic now to hear you read this well that would be the icing on the cake or icing on something : ) Reading it one could see the image taking place. Tasting her as his teeth grazed the softness of her flesh... well lets keep that comment PC for now lol. Great spill Kristina : )
Cheers
Cheers
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2nd Apr 2021 4:25pm
Ah yes! I love Vampire's and the supernatural also. The darkness is so erotic, makes me want to suck some ... blood. :p That's an interesting request, I don't normally read the erotic ones but I will have to think about that. Well I love that first line... 'for now' - good, so there is hope for a continuance here. No filter. ;) Thank you so much for the wonderful comment Stanhoven. 💖xoxo
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2nd Apr 2021 8:35pm
This kinda of inspired my latest The Hunger, oh them Vampire Kisses : ) I have written a few with no filter but still reluctant to post. I read a couple of my soft erotic ones which are posted on here to a group once.
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2nd Apr 2021 8:59pm
I will definitely check that one out. ;) I totally understand, I have written some no filter ones and I am totally reluctant to post as well. I had posted one and it seemed pretty well liked but I ultimately hid it anyway. In the past I have tried to keep erotica creative and tasteful. My others can get pretty extreme and are definitely not for everyone. :p I need to write more Vampire ones...