Shrine of Eternal Burning Desires

Wow! What a fantastic spill! Great artwork as well! Captivating together! Well done!

You know I always love getting a Wow! so Thank you so much for that and the wonderful comment, Faith. I am really glad you liked it and of course the amazing artwork! which definitely enhanced it for sure. 💖 xoxo

Female vampire ... my catnip ... great write ... perfect compliment to the artwork ...

"my catnip" I love that, lol. (And I love vampires too) I thought what better to combine with BDSM. Thank you for the wonderful comment and compliment on this one and the artwork! 💖 xoxo

This is another fire that you have lit, freaking tight work here Lady

'freaking tight' I really love that! I thought this one would be up your alley. Thank you so much for the awesome comment and compliment I_IS_ME. That really made me happy. 💖 xoxo

KX. Your words are enchanting  with this thrilling, sexy and ''biting'' write. Your descriptive mystical seduction is captivating and your verse effortlessly enraptures the imagination. This erotic write is spellbinding and once again you do not disappoint. You certainly MARKED (bites) your territory with this seductive erotic submission and you certainly quenched my thirst with lustful delight. ''You will punish her for her beauty
For the toxic trickles down velvet petals
For the sanity that she took
And the poison that flows down the thighs '' .....imaginative visual and I am immersed. Fantastic!!!!

"sexy and biting" I love that. So many lovely comments, clearly lots of vampire lovers ;) or maybe just lovers. I am so happy that this one did not disappoint and I also love mystical seduction and spellbinding, you are making it difficult to respond with so many great references. Anyway, biting and clawing is the best way to mark things right? (well people) Thank you for the really amazing and clever comment! 💖 xoxo

I enjoyed this very much, you write with vivid strokes keeps the reader all in :)  The structure is also very appealing
Well done Kristina 👍🏻
Nice to meet you
Zazzles 😊
Write on  ✍️

Nice to meet you also, Zazzles! I am ecstatic you like the  structure and mentioned it because I am a bit impatient with formatting. :) And I love that you found it 'vivid strokes' Thank you so much for the comment and compliment! 💖 xoxo

You are making my desires burn within me.  Keep on writing.

As always, thank you for your wonderful comment and encouraging words, Francisco. I am really happy you found it stimulating. 💖 xoxo

Brava, Kristina🌹 I echo all the well deserved, beautiful comments above. The opening line, "She dissolves you in her lust" is so rich in it's eroticism. Oh to be so into another that you dissolve into them...you become one in flesh. Fill a me with want.

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment  and compliment, GW. I think that is a fitting opening for watching you life drain into another as you receive intense pleasure from the act and become subjugated to such lust forever! :) 💖 xoxo

Yeah what GW said ! 👍🏻✍️❤️🤗

Your comment is so poetic lifes draining into one another  beautiful❣❣

I like the submissive lines like "...you're glad to take on these lashes" and "...you will always be her slave", it reminds me of Anne Rice's Sleeping Beauty series.
It's a strong, passionate and very titillating write.
Bravo!

I thought this would be a good contrast to my last one for some variety, with a different power dynamic. :) And wow, I love Anne Rice so I will take that as a big compliment. Thank you so much for the awesome comment! I really appreciate it a lot. 💖 xoxo

Just bite me now, I'm ready to be turned
Absolutely awesome
Love and light
Ron

Tongue strokes the skin, saliva making way for this gift. Lower and lower, softer... Fangs pressed against smooth skin. Slowly breaking the barrier to my life. Venom ensures a free flow and I am tingling from head to toe as ... Going to stop there so I don't have to turn on extreme content, lol. Thank you so much for the comment, Ron. I am really happy you liked it! I think I will write one about the bite of a vampire and may post this weekend. Thanks for the idea! ;) 💖 xoxo

I wait with baited breath
Love and light
Ron xx

The search has been satisfied beyond words, deserving a big OMG!! Peace. oral

Wow Oral, thank you so much for the incredible comment! I don't know what to say. You have made me  REALLY happy and I appreciate it so much! 💖 xoxo

Really good write ... Bless and love ... ..

Thank you so much for stopping by, and the comment and compliment, FeNyx. :) 💖 xoxo

Dear K,

Each stanza stands alone. All together it’s quite magnificent. I’m afraid saying anything else would be redundant of all previous comments. It’s a gift you can write so wonderfully on so many different subjects. I curtsy as your loyal reader. H🌷

I love your comments and they are always so meaningful; for example each stanza standing alone. I wish I could say that was on purpose but actually I wrote it as a single flow and then divided the stanzas and then made edits. I guess I get some credit for choosing where to make those divisions. lol But going back and reading it with your comment in mind I really see that now which opened up another dimension of sorts. And I really appreciate your compliment about writing and versatility so much! It is so wonderful to have a beautiful loyal reader like you! 💖 xoxo

The tangent of personal address lends a kind of intensity, like a blow torch or a supernova, rather sultry in the darkly erotic, which has that element of danger and death about it. What I love most is your ability to go boldly!

Oh wow, I absolutely adore this comment, Daniel. I cannot say I really think like I am going boldly, it just comes out that way but I really love that! My filter broke a long time ago so feedback helps me so much to really know how it comes across. :) And I could not love your description more. Thank you so much as always. 💖 xoxo

To look deep into her calm sea blue eyes, temptation rips between his heart and his desire to have her both in mind and blood. How can one resist x

Oh yes! you cannot resist her temptation and the fangs are ready to take you in, body and soul. One cannot resist a vampire. ;) Oh how satisfying the taste of blood is. Thank you so much for reaching back to remind me of this one. 💖 xoxo