Salvation and Sacrifice

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Thank you so much for the comment and compliment, Blue. I am really glad you liked this one and I am always  thrilled to see you in the comments and honored by your RL entry. 💖 xoxo

Yes, there is no mistaking that artwork. ;)

Brava Kristina❣❣ I can't  fully grasp the sensation depicted, having never been whipper or whipee, but your beautiful, sensual descriptions intrigue me. This passage is phenomenal,  
"In a special manifestation of love
Where you are the savior and executioner
and
Where I am salvation and sacrifice"

The illustration by Wh1skeyswagger is spot on and reminds of graphic novel art. With his art and your words those graphic novels would fly off the stands.😍

Thank you so much for the incredible comment. I consider that passage the heart around which everything revolves in this one and hence the title. I am truly flattered by what you said about graphic novels. I know Wh1skeyswagger will love it as well. And I am honored by your RL entry. 💖

You had me at 'Holy Fuck' - Thank you for the incredible compliment, both on the piece and being more assertive. Maybe it is really just being submissive to your demand to be more daring. lol Thank you so much for the continued encouragement Reggie, it means a lot to me. 💖

Marks and markers
A life’s journey in the nether land

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Thank you so much for the comment Poetspeak, I am really glad you like it! 💖

I am happy to see my art sitting above this piece of art looking down at its beauty

For the record it would be a lovely write with or without my art


Well Done kristina, and thank you for allowing my sketch to grace this page

I love that, such a beautiful thing to say!

There is no doubt your art enhanced it and looks absolutely perfect sitting above it.

Definitely not the last time I ask you to use one. Thank you for the comment and compliment. It means a lot to me. 💖

Damn hot poem.  Keep on writing.
 

Thank you so much for the comment, I am really happy you felt the heat in this one! 💖

Beautiful.  You articulate that transcendental pain perfectly.  💜😻⚡

Thanks you so much for the wonderful comment and compliment Margo. I am really glad you liked this one and I really appreciate your feedback a lot! 💖

....aMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMazing write KX!!! You can feel the heat from the welting red marks from this steamy poem. The safe word for this hot erotic write is ''Masterstroke'' of  (k) Ink . This sultry delight was more then just a sexy thrilling read. It was an exciting stimulating experience. Your vivid verses ''Binds'' your readers to the ''submission'' of this extraordinary passionate write. Your versatility as a writer is a ''Dominating'' beautiful gift. WOW!!!!!!!!!!! ......tough to ''Beat'' this one KX!

Thank you for such an absolutely wonderful comment, I am so happy you continue to enjoy my writing. I love the safe word and k (ink) - and binding readers to the submission. A very clever comment indeed. ;) And such a gorgeous compliment, this has really made my day! xoxo 💖

Gulp, wow Kristina, that was so...titillating and vivid.
That opening line was like BAM!
I enjoyed the dialogue that went back and forth but that closing line just sealed it perfectly.
Great work.

I love your comment, from 'Gulp' to BAM! :) that really made me smile. I am also glad you liked the back and forth approach and ending. Your comment helped brighten my day in the midst of a ton of work. 💖 xoxo

A torrid tale.  I could feel the humidity and smell the whip, ropes, perspiration, salty tears and rapture !

Made me want to go practice my knot tying.  : )

Thank you so much for the comment, DaVinci. I am really glad you were able to get immersed in this one. ;) I think torrid tale would be a great title for a poem. And I was sure you would already be an expert at rope tying. Have you been using handcuffs instead? :) 💖

"Where you are the savior and executioner
and
Where I am salvation and sacrifice"

I cannot stop reading this poem, especially this part.
You are, my friend, such a fantastic story teller :) <3

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment, Marwen. Those lines are the heart of it. :) I am really glad you found this one so engaging and truly humbled by the amazing compliment. 💖 xoxo

KristinaX

With all due respect, change your profile description; there's nothing in this magnificent amorous expression, that's reflects the least bit of intimidation; your poetry is powerful and impressive. You have my respect and admiration.

Hi CFBrancy, but it's true, nevertheless I suppose I have posted so much now that I have overcome intimidation (to some extent) so maybe you are right that I need to change it. :) I really love "magnificent amorous expression" and thank you so much for the respect and admiration!! 💖 xoxo

Another masterpiece from your creative mind. Thanks for sharing and the stimulation. Peace. Oral

Thank you so much Oral, I feel really good when you say masterpiece especially given your prowess towards the sensual. :) Thank you for reading and commenting. 💖 xoxo

The intensity and passion are palpable. I would suggest filling out the dimensions a bit, the longing, anticipation, the surroundings and psychological aspects of describing the body language, haptics, intimate moments beyond the actual coital act, that lend it context. You've definitely captured that intimate, yin yang of the bdsm bond.

Thank you so much for the comment and feedback, Daniel. I am glad you felt the intimate yin and yang bond and really appreciate the suggestions for ways that I can improve on it so much! I will definitely think about additions that expand on the other dimensions and context. 💖

as if you need more people to weigh in on how fantastic your expression is...thank you for sharing it...i understand the submission well :).

Don't be silly, I always love people sharing their feelings and insight with me. :) I am really happy you felt this expression of feelings, submission and domination. I will be posting more on that soon. Thanks for reading and commenting. 💖 xoxo