deepundergroundpoetry.com
UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
Craving impetuous passionate sex
It is why I draw breath
This IS my purpose
This hunger grows impatient
This deviant, debauched, depraved lust needs to feed
Skipping all entrées
I am your ravenous course for dessert
A hedonist soufflé with libidinous crème brûlée
Forbidden lechery
Served beneath the table…
Better yet on top
Freed from the shackles of polite society rules
Letting levied harsh judgement
Fuel the flames of impulsive passion
Tempting fate to see us
I am the delicious dish
To sate your nympholepsy
Served steaming
ANYWHERE and ANYTIME
Sheer dress fabric struggles to conceal
Sensual silk underneath
Made electric by desire
Shooting ecstasies spark
Illuminating my soaking wet desire to be filled
Love and tenderness?
Unnecessary
DO NOT handle with care
Take me
You will not break me
Spontaneous sex
No Hesitation, no Concern
This is what I need
This is what I crave
Someplace unusual
A fitting stage for our turpitude
Our infinite propinquity for exhibition, on display
Impassioned noises is our music
Like the roar of waves on the sea
The deep tremolo of an earthquake
Vibrating deep inside
Stifled screams clawing throughout my body
Captive sensations building
Desperate for release
Not knowing, nor caring who hears
My breath like a hot breeze
Rounds corners and brushes past crowds
In not so silent whispers of forbidden moans
By this spontaneous fusion of bodies
Ecstasy grows stronger and stronger
Our every new position
A seductive work of modern abstract art
A real-time writing of our own revised Kama Sutra
Performed for those spectators whose eyes now burn with passion
Whose minds cannot turn off their perversions long enough to look away
Are you prepared to give up your everyday prose?
If so, anywhere, anytime
We will
satisfy our lust
We will
Fulfill our needs
We will
Feed our cravings
Society will disappear from existence
Allowing for rebellious indulgence in spontaneous fornication
Take me here
Take me now
Give me the excitement
I crave your unpredictable and uninhibited desires
As I share mine with you
In Unusual Places
In New Positions
It is why I draw breath
This IS my purpose
This hunger grows impatient
This deviant, debauched, depraved lust needs to feed
Skipping all entrées
I am your ravenous course for dessert
A hedonist soufflé with libidinous crème brûlée
Forbidden lechery
Served beneath the table…
Better yet on top
Freed from the shackles of polite society rules
Letting levied harsh judgement
Fuel the flames of impulsive passion
Tempting fate to see us
I am the delicious dish
To sate your nympholepsy
Served steaming
ANYWHERE and ANYTIME
Sheer dress fabric struggles to conceal
Sensual silk underneath
Made electric by desire
Shooting ecstasies spark
Illuminating my soaking wet desire to be filled
Love and tenderness?
Unnecessary
DO NOT handle with care
Take me
You will not break me
Spontaneous sex
No Hesitation, no Concern
This is what I need
This is what I crave
Someplace unusual
A fitting stage for our turpitude
Our infinite propinquity for exhibition, on display
Impassioned noises is our music
Like the roar of waves on the sea
The deep tremolo of an earthquake
Vibrating deep inside
Stifled screams clawing throughout my body
Captive sensations building
Desperate for release
Not knowing, nor caring who hears
My breath like a hot breeze
Rounds corners and brushes past crowds
In not so silent whispers of forbidden moans
By this spontaneous fusion of bodies
Ecstasy grows stronger and stronger
Our every new position
A seductive work of modern abstract art
A real-time writing of our own revised Kama Sutra
Performed for those spectators whose eyes now burn with passion
Whose minds cannot turn off their perversions long enough to look away
Are you prepared to give up your everyday prose?
If so, anywhere, anytime
We will
satisfy our lust
We will
Fulfill our needs
We will
Feed our cravings
Society will disappear from existence
Allowing for rebellious indulgence in spontaneous fornication
Take me here
Take me now
Give me the excitement
I crave your unpredictable and uninhibited desires
As I share mine with you
In Unusual Places
In New Positions
Written by
KristinaX
Published 26th Nov 2020
| Edited 4th Apr 2021
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 35
reading list entries 17
comments 67
reads 2470
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
- Edited 24th Dec 2020 7:45am
26th Nov 2020 00:57am
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
26th Nov 2020 3:12am
I like the enthusiastic endorsement and compliment Reggie. :) Yes, this is what happens. lol - And I always love WOWs!
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
26th Nov 2020 1:30am
This is tight X, very descriptive and with a challenge. You're really beginning to demonstrate more with your pen, we like that
0
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
26th Nov 2020 3:14am
Thank you for the comment and compliment I_IS_ME. I am glad you thought it was tight and appreciated a different flick of the pen! :)
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
26th Nov 2020 3:00am
WOW! This is hot, sexy, explosive and brilliantly composed! I've never seen anything as amazing as this before! Erotica at it's very best. I am so impressed. Excellent spill done with class and in such good taste! WOW! WOW! WOW!
0
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
26th Nov 2020 3:27am
Thank you so much for the awesome comment and compliment. I am hesitant to post erotica but your incredible feedback is definitely inspiring. And again I am deeply humbled by your words and over the moon to get four WOWs.
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
26th Nov 2020 3:34am
My pleasure, divine Poetess! You deserved every one of them. You do truly amazing work!
0
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
26th Nov 2020 4:42am
Bravissima, Kristina❣❣ Is there no genre of poetry you can't write? The desire and titillation builds with every stanza. Y'all got me tingling head-to-toe ❤🌹
0
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
26th Nov 2020 4:19pm
Thank you so much for the comment and incredible compliment, GW. I am happy you like this one; your poetry is an inspiration, your guidance is invaluable and has helped me improve.
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
26th Nov 2020 5:07am
Nice hot picture. You give it everything you got and go all night long. Keep on writing.
0
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
26th Nov 2020 4:13pm
Thank you so much for the comment, Francisco. Until every ounce of your being is spent in the most beautiful carnal union. If you have more to give you have not gone far enough. ;)
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
26th Nov 2020 6:16am
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
Thank you so much for the comment and stopping by, I am glad you liked it. :)
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
26th Nov 2020 4:33pm
Had me laughing reminiscing of the time in the alley when this guy came out screaming thinking we were breaking into his car 😂...the more daring and dangerous the more enticing...I'd like to try when jumping off a plane...would have to finish on the ground of course 🙄
0
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
26th Nov 2020 4:48pm
lol I have been in an alley *cough* :p "the more daring and dangerous the more enticing" indeed. What a thrill it is 'in unusual places'. While jumping out of a plane, that is definitely not safe sex lol. Maybe just keep it in the plane...
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
26th Nov 2020 9:58pm
The thrill of spontaneity and/or getting caught, mixed with lust. Impressive erotic write - desires and needs on display. I agree with the other comments, a very versatile poet you are.
0
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
27th Nov 2020 00:41am
A powerful combination to feed our desires... Thank you so much for the comment. I am glad you liked it and being considered versatile is a great compliment. :)
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
27th Nov 2020 2:34am
If it isn't spontaneous and hard...well...that's just breeding sex...for whatever kinky reason...I have always enjoyed sex in the Botanic Gardens...I am a true nature lover. Hot...boiling hot poem, Kristina.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
0
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
27th Nov 2020 2:44am
'that's just breeding sex' lol - there so much wisdom in you Harry. Botanic gardens are beautiful so nothing wrong with adding to it. Shall we make a list of ... (no better not, guaranteed to get strange that one) I consider 'boiling hot' a great compliment. Thank you!
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
Two words: DAY-UM!
And here I thought "NEW POSITIONS" in the title meant a career move or a new job LOL.
OMG, Kristina, if I would be snacking on my popcorn, I would've dropped it on the floor.
Love the bravado on this, like no fucks given (well, you know what I mean).
Bravo.
And here I thought "NEW POSITIONS" in the title meant a career move or a new job LOL.
OMG, Kristina, if I would be snacking on my popcorn, I would've dropped it on the floor.
Love the bravado on this, like no fucks given (well, you know what I mean).
Bravo.
0
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
27th Nov 2020 4:40pm
DAY-UMs or NIGHT-UMs, I will take them as a compliment. ;)
I had not thought about the job angle. lol (surprises are good)
I just want to be part of the reason popcorn exists!
It's all about giving more fucks. (well, you know what I mean)...
I had not thought about the job angle. lol (surprises are good)
I just want to be part of the reason popcorn exists!
It's all about giving more fucks. (well, you know what I mean)...
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
It's a rigorous interview process, the job requires a lot of stamina, experience, and a wide range of skills (and a sufficient amount of crazy). :p but that's quite a spill. I am glad you liked this one.
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
27th Nov 2020 5:29pm
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
27th Nov 2020 7:38pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
27th Nov 2020 7:55pm
I like intriguing but fire, steam, and pleasant sensations are even better. ;) Thank you for the comment, I am glad you liked it.
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
28th Nov 2020 4:56am
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
28th Nov 2020 3:27pm
Thank you so much for the comment and compliment, I am really glad you liked it.
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
I'm like a zillion years late to this sexy af party here... (I guess better late than never)...apologies! So, I'll start with... Purrrrrrrrrrrrrr, Kristina...!!!
I love the directness and the "Fuck. Yes. I am turned on by this" attitude this leaves me feeling on top of all of your delicious descriptiveness. Writes like these are more involved than people realize (at least for me, IMO ) because you're putting, at least a part of your most vulnerable self, on display (pun kinda intended) for inevitable judgement. It takes balls. You certainly have them and just a fantastic sense of sensuality, when it comes to erotic writing. I loved this and it's steamy yumminess. Ty for sharing and I'm glad I finally caught on!
(bad Blue!)
🌹
xo
B
I love the directness and the "Fuck. Yes. I am turned on by this" attitude this leaves me feeling on top of all of your delicious descriptiveness. Writes like these are more involved than people realize (at least for me, IMO ) because you're putting, at least a part of your most vulnerable self, on display (pun kinda intended) for inevitable judgement. It takes balls. You certainly have them and just a fantastic sense of sensuality, when it comes to erotic writing. I loved this and it's steamy yumminess. Ty for sharing and I'm glad I finally caught on!
(bad Blue!)
🌹
xo
B
0
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
1st Dec 2020 2:49pm
I am really stoked to see you here now, and I love Purrrrrrrrring! But you are scaring me about the inevitable judgement. lol They say it's the quiet ones you have to watch out for, combined with not having a filter I didn't think much about that. But it's from the heart (and other places) so I guess I just have to expose myself, pun intended, and that is why people keep identifying much of my writing as being vulnerable... ;p
Thank you so much for the comment and compliment, I am really flattered by 'fantastic sense of sensuality' and the RL add. And it is always great to get feedback from someone with your incredible talent.
Thank you so much for the comment and compliment, I am really flattered by 'fantastic sense of sensuality' and the RL add. And it is always great to get feedback from someone with your incredible talent.
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
DaMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMn!!!! This eloquently penned write is SUPERB. It is sexy, steamy, and sultry on steroids, just to add a few more "S" words, lol. This work of art is respectfully stylish and Eroticism at its finest. Your masterful sexual metaphors were not only stimulating but beautifully written. It is as if they were foreplay to the uninhibited thoughts created deep inside the mind and arousing the climactic brain. You know it's good when you feel yourself immersed in your seductive verse and it becomes your own personal experience, Fantasy with a Pulse! Breathtaking!!!!!
0
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
1st Dec 2020 9:35pm
Thank you so much for this absolutely awesome comment. I love your assembly of wonderful S words but I cannot tell you how happy you have made me with your gorgeous description. Those last two lines are the best compliment... Truly speechless to find an adequate reply. "Fantasy with a Pulse", I LOVE that!!
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
2nd Dec 2020 4:16pm
Thank you so much for the very sweet comment, I am really happy you liked this one. :)
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
2nd Dec 2020 1:11pm
Nice flowing sensuality ... vivid ... enticing ... seducing ... wonderful write dear poetess ...
0
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
2nd Dec 2020 4:18pm
Thank you so much for the comment and your wonderful feedback. I appreciate it a lot and I am really glad you liked it. :)
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
3rd Jan 2021 4:38pm
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
3rd Jan 2021 9:26pm
Coming back for another pass. So glad you like it even more. Only gets better with time. ;)
Huge Like (for you)
Huge Like (for you)
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
18th Jan 2021 3:52pm
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
18th Jan 2021 6:42pm
3rd time is the charm, or every time. I love that you felt it worthy of another pass. And that reading me engages the .... senses.
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
24th Jan 2021 10:57pm
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
24th Jan 2021 11:03pm
Thank you so much for the comment Poetrician. I really like hot vivacious but being the earthquake is the best. As usual this one was from the heart and incorporated history, reality, and desires...
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
9th Feb 2021 2:26pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
10th Feb 2021 11:37pm
Getting down and dirty in the most random places is always incredibly exciting. I love it... It feeds the craving and urgency even more. Thank you so much for the compliment; I am really happy you liked it. xo
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
10th Feb 2021 11:24pm
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
10th Feb 2021 11:38pm
Clever, what you did there with risky and frisky Billy; I am definitely frisky and risky can be very exciting! ;) Thank you so much for the comment and compliment. I am so happy you liked this one.
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
19th Mar 2021 3:45pm
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
19th Mar 2021 4:13pm
Hey Remy, I will definitely take that as a compliment! Thank you so much. I am really happy you liked it. :)
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
4th Apr 2021 1:31pm
DO NOT handle with care
Bold
One of my favorite lines
Even better than before, how does one top greatness like this
Wish I could leave multiple RL AWARDS
BIGGER LIKE
Bold
One of my favorite lines
Even better than before, how does one top greatness like this
Wish I could leave multiple RL AWARDS
BIGGER LIKE
0
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
4th Apr 2021 1:37pm
Super happy you like the new formatting. I should have done it a long time ago because I think it brings things out better especially for a longer one like this. Thank you so much for the revisit and wonderful comment, I always love that. :) That's one of my favorite lines also... a core one to the piece. Love the BIGGER LIKE and sentiment.
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Feb 2022 2:45pm
25th Nov 2021 6:46pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
26th Nov 2021 3:56am
It's thanksgiving... I really cannot bear to have you starving! What kind of host would I be... Please tell me what places and positions will sate your appetite so that I can be answer to all of your desires... <3
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
2nd Jun 2022 11:04am
Gives a new desire to at least fictionally in my own mind okay the role of voyeur or on a less sinister fashion be a watcher.
0
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
2nd Jun 2022 3:32pm
I am so happy you could reach back into my mind, whether the voyeur, the watcher, or the engager. ;) We are full of so much desire... always searching for new places and positions. <3
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
5th Jul 2022 12:20pm
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
5th Jul 2022 1:47pm
I love flowers. ;) especially stargazer lilies. I am really happy you could feel me on this one. Spending some time breaking all the rules with no limits in public is intensely thrilling... ;)
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
11th Sep 2022 4:54am
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
Hey Ted, I am really glad you enjoyed. It's been a long time since I stepped back to this one. There is a lot meaning and personal experiences this is based on starting in the UK. And those continue... I edited this poem a while ago but I know that doesn't go into updates otherwise it would have been quite some time since it ended up there. Had you read it before or is this the first time? Like so much of my stuff this one is quite different I think. You never really know what you are going to get do you? :p <3
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
17th Nov 2022 11:58am
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
17th Nov 2022 12:02pm
So many topics and styles. ;) Meaningful and imaginative, I love that. I was really happy the format worked out, I am weird about line lengths and things like that. My OCD is weird about that stuff and it can really bug me. Just like I am weird about posting times. lol Commenting on all... Wow, that's an undertaking. :p
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
17th Nov 2022 12:05pm
<< post removed >>
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
11th Sep 2022 4:57am
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
17th Nov 2022 11:51am
Really sorry Ted, I missed this comment somehow. That happens sometimes but rarely. Maybe I didn't get the notification either. I do love this one, actually I think it's my most read one here and there is a lot of history regarding the inspiration for writing it. I am glad you found and enjoyed it! <3
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
4th Nov 2023 8:12pm
yep, it's a good one. nice use of the words turpitude and nympholepsy.
0
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
7th May 2024 12:37pm
Hey there nathan, I am so sorry I overlooked your comment from a while ago. I am so glad you liked some of the word choices. I think those worked well for what I was trying to express. ;) Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it.
Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
7th May 2024 5:29am
Deviously delicious write. Extremely hot. Daring and erotic. Loaded with energy. I love public sex. Well done
0
Re: Re. UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
7th May 2024 12:43pm
It's impossible to imagine someone not wanting seconds, thirds, and more when the main course is you DK. You are definitely hot, daring, and erotic. ;)
Public sex can certainly make anything you do far more exciting, can't it? It's impossible not to think of the possibilities all the time. And acting on those thoughts feels so incredible. Welcome to DUP! :)
Public sex can certainly make anything you do far more exciting, can't it? It's impossible not to think of the possibilities all the time. And acting on those thoughts feels so incredible. Welcome to DUP! :)