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in awe: of silence
in awe of wonderment
suspended
where heart beats linger
it has been said
"the air tonight is so thick with angst"
but of what, will or will not
happen tommorow
fingers rapidly weave
as dark taps upon the window
you looking out, I looking in
there's beauty amid all the apprehension
wayward limbs grasping reality
stars stroking the midnight sky
we come alive
if only in each other's eyes
barefoot in a penthouse dream
silence caressing desire
lips draping the glow of the moon
hushed breaths blush
back away from the blue
suspended
where heart beats linger
it has been said
"the air tonight is so thick with angst"
but of what, will or will not
happen tommorow
fingers rapidly weave
as dark taps upon the window
you looking out, I looking in
there's beauty amid all the apprehension
wayward limbs grasping reality
stars stroking the midnight sky
we come alive
if only in each other's eyes
barefoot in a penthouse dream
silence caressing desire
lips draping the glow of the moon
hushed breaths blush
back away from the blue
Published 17th Nov 2020
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17th Nov 2020 11:40pm
I feel this one so much - love it, you have a beautiful way with words... and I am definitely in awe of silence; if only my mind had a volume control.
"fingers rapidly weave
as dark taps upon the window
you looking out, I looking in"
"we come alive
if only in each other's eyes"
Every line is perfect so it's difficult to isolate favorites...
"fingers rapidly weave
as dark taps upon the window
you looking out, I looking in"
"we come alive
if only in each other's eyes"
Every line is perfect so it's difficult to isolate favorites...
18th Nov 2020 00:32am
I'm swimming in perfectly, imperfect moonlit ether, full of desire and want, losing all semblance, fear tempered with desire tempered with uncertainty.
Yet, still... I feel all the more
Your writing is some of my favorite and I very much enjoy reading and feeling the feels that I take away, inevitably after every read.
Ty so much for sharing and allowing
us a peek
xoxo
🌹
B
Yet, still... I feel all the more
Your writing is some of my favorite and I very much enjoy reading and feeling the feels that I take away, inevitably after every read.
Ty so much for sharing and allowing
us a peek
xoxo
🌹
B
18th Nov 2020 9:38pm
Swimming naked with love in the moonlight is a wonderful thing...with a love. Great poem Tim.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
