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our mischievous kinship
You loom.
Palpable in presence,
mischief that almost permeates,
so thick it lays
in laughter's swirling air
I only hear
Just those things needed
No longer plagued
with those cold disassociated ends.
Horrific dark, abated
Ohh, how fortunate
to a mind's unusual quirk
I actively listen,
at last, ready to ingest
all that was longed for
and only now, realized was missing
Love of forceful piercing
so very much like my own,
sounding of our mischievous laughter
hilarity of passionate hijinx
True booming laughs
that is the indescribable love
from deep in my chest
I unleash
and unbury
Today...
Yes, today
You do loom.
It's been here ... I believe
That love.
It's forever.
I think I now know
how you've always been there
[here]
ever since then
now today
tomorrow and ever after.
Like you promised
you would
in those harsh
so loving, gruff, melancholic whispers;
How they reassured
as much as they could
O' my kindred of my very start
heal the hurts
of this child's grown up broken heart
pieces, finding full in whole.
You loom, yes.
Still.
More than likely always will.
Yet, to loom
was never
your typical style
Maybe you do
because of what's so sorely needed
A gifting,
perhaps a cosmic delivery
of that unleashed, unburied,
freed or whatever it is
I've made myself believe
I'm me-just now
In all that you did teach,
I'm. Me.
Relentless , mischievous
and
with a belly booming laugh
all my own
I myself, now loom.
Ready to flaunt
all those vibrant inherited colors.
Lost, small and broken
eventually I could see
a me that your looming helped set free
to flourish all my own
in each and every hard discovered tone.
Published 15th Nov 2020
| Edited 17th Jun 2022
Author's Note
..... always a daddy's girl.
Damn, how I miss you today
xoxo 💜
İBlu2020
Damn, how I miss you today
xoxo 💜
İBlu2020
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15th Nov 2020 4:17pm
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15th Nov 2020 4:55pm
There are fathers that would love your words, a daughter's words, finally getting it. Tight
15th Nov 2020 5:24pm
Ty, Me... your 'tight' is a high praise prize
I'm grateful for you reading and leaving comments so supportive
🙇♀️
🌹
xo
B
I'm grateful for you reading and leaving comments so supportive
🙇♀️
🌹
xo
B
15th Nov 2020 5:09pm
You truly are wordsmith beautiful, poignant and meaningful. Sending love and hugs across the void
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
15th Nov 2020 5:26pm
Thank you so much for reading and your warm thoughts, Ron. I'm sure you can relate and I value your opinion. I appreciate your RL add as well 🙏
💜 💜
xoxo
B
💜 💜
xoxo
B
15th Nov 2020 5:11pm
What a Beautiful Sentimental Write! ....''this child's grown up broken heart'' stirred something inside of me and the emotions were astonishing. And your final stanza, "I myself, now loom
Ready to flaunt all my inherited colors...
Once small and broken
Now, I'm proud to see
a me so free
In all of my own colorful bloom ...........thanks for the good cry, lol!
Ready to flaunt all my inherited colors...
Once small and broken
Now, I'm proud to see
a me so free
In all of my own colorful bloom ...........thanks for the good cry, lol!
15th Nov 2020 5:36pm
Awww.... What an extremely sweet & kind comment. I'm humbled by your compliment.
So very glad I was able to convey something that resonated. I'm appreciative of the RL add and you taking the time to read and leave your thoughts
-Always welcomed
🌹💜🌹💜🌹
xoxo
B
So very glad I was able to convey something that resonated. I'm appreciative of the RL add and you taking the time to read and leave your thoughts
-Always welcomed
🌹💜🌹💜🌹
xoxo
B
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- Edited 24th Dec 2020 7:45am
15th Nov 2020 6:09pm
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His birthday encroaches (the 25th) We all (my family) would whoop it up for Thanksgiving, every year. He LOVED it. The food, family, his birthday always so close, if not ON the actual holiday. Now, this time of year just burns, starting on Veterans day and ending sometime in January.....
Debbie downer, I know... lol. Ty for reading and the list add. I'm never sure about my writes and your comments are uplifting and motivational.
You're a voice that I look forward to reading and it always brightens my smile when I do
🌹💜🌹
xoxo
-Velv
Debbie downer, I know... lol. Ty for reading and the list add. I'm never sure about my writes and your comments are uplifting and motivational.
You're a voice that I look forward to reading and it always brightens my smile when I do
🌹💜🌹
xoxo
-Velv
15th Nov 2020 10:08pm
Such an exquisite poem Blue...each line is filled with love and loss.
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
15th Nov 2020 11:18pm
Thank you so much for reading, Harry.
I'm always so happy and left with joy, that you take the time you do with me and my attempts at poetry. I know that these comments at times, might start to sound static or God forbid, repetitive (I hope not!) but I really am utterly appreciative of you and your understandings of my still in progress, writings. Your comments, thoughts, insights, I take in. I use them to advance my own understanding (I try to) In hopes I can improve myself as well as my writing. I cherish your input.
Just felt like making that known!... lol
I Ty for the RL add, too my friend!
-always such a pleasure
💜 💜
xoxo
B
I'm always so happy and left with joy, that you take the time you do with me and my attempts at poetry. I know that these comments at times, might start to sound static or God forbid, repetitive (I hope not!) but I really am utterly appreciative of you and your understandings of my still in progress, writings. Your comments, thoughts, insights, I take in. I use them to advance my own understanding (I try to) In hopes I can improve myself as well as my writing. I cherish your input.
Just felt like making that known!... lol
I Ty for the RL add, too my friend!
-always such a pleasure
💜 💜
xoxo
B
15th Nov 2020 10:35pm
Very heart warming and beautiful.
"A gifting...
Or perhaps a cosmic delivery" just says so much in the span of what our lives, you received such a beautiful present.
Thank you for sharing.
"A gifting...
Or perhaps a cosmic delivery" just says so much in the span of what our lives, you received such a beautiful present.
Thank you for sharing.
15th Nov 2020 11:35pm
Ohh Wally...
Yours is a comment that almost has me tearing up. Ty for reading and getting what I was trying to convey. I'm so glad you enjoyed it
I almost feel spoiled at such beautiful loveliness but greedily take it anyway... lol
🌹💜🌹
xoxo
B
Yours is a comment that almost has me tearing up. Ty for reading and getting what I was trying to convey. I'm so glad you enjoyed it
I almost feel spoiled at such beautiful loveliness but greedily take it anyway... lol
🌹💜🌹
xoxo
B
15th Nov 2020 11:53pm
You bring an appropriate fearless unhindered voice to your artistry. This was an evocative epistle, nicely paced and heartfelt resonance throughout. 💖🙏🏻
16th Nov 2020 00:45am
Ty for reading and your thoughtful
insights, Daniel.
I'm always grateful to see your avatar.
The space x launch was visible from my side of FL tonight, hopefully you were able to catch it, wherever you are, it was an amazing sight!
(if you're into that!...lol)
best,
-B
insights, Daniel.
I'm always grateful to see your avatar.
The space x launch was visible from my side of FL tonight, hopefully you were able to catch it, wherever you are, it was an amazing sight!
(if you're into that!...lol)
best,
-B
18th Nov 2020 4:12pm
My friend misty took a picture of it with a telescopic lens. I can't say that I am particularly sentimental, to my own poverty. I recently had a friend, who every year buys me a book, a lovely birthday card and a meal, part ways with me because I forgot her birthday. It struck me only as a lesson in how we project ourselves onto others. Her attachments to the sentimentality of birthdays is not the same as mine, but it is a shame to lose a friendship with a caring person because I did not return the same amount of care.
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18th Nov 2020 00:13am
Not sure what to say that has not been said. This is a beautiful tribute to your father. If only every daughter could have such a relationship with their father.
18th Nov 2020 00:20am
Thank you, and I agree. I'm saddened with a heavy heart for those who weren't as lucky there.
However, life is a cruel mistress at times and loves balancing things out, by deciding that the type of mother I should have, would give Joan Crawford a run for her money (Watch the movie Mommy Dearest with Faye Dunaway and you'll understand that reference)... it's kind of funny if it wasn't so fucked up... lol.
Writers 'fuel' I suppose.
Thank you for the compliment and your comments
I'm so glad you enjoyed it and stopped by
💜🌹💜
xo
B
However, life is a cruel mistress at times and loves balancing things out, by deciding that the type of mother I should have, would give Joan Crawford a run for her money (Watch the movie Mommy Dearest with Faye Dunaway and you'll understand that reference)... it's kind of funny if it wasn't so fucked up... lol.
Writers 'fuel' I suppose.
Thank you for the compliment and your comments
I'm so glad you enjoyed it and stopped by
💜🌹💜
xo
B
18th Nov 2020 6:56pm
I will have to watch that movie but you have a point... and definitely writers fuel. Although not nearly as beautiful as your writing, I did write one about my father and 2 about my mother. If you are bored and want to read PM me and I will send you links.
