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from darkness comes the light (and hopefully air conditioning)
11/12/2020
power still out,
darkness will soon turn towards the dawn
Eta was all wet talk and small bluster balk
moved through quickly
only to find her lose her mighty
now—
I still, in the last of the darkness
only a heartbeat ~ sweat drops speak
waiting [always waiting]
for mine, not to be thine own
amongst darkness,
shown
a plea.. she cries!
harken for those cooling sighs
power still out,
darkness will soon turn towards the dawn
Eta was all wet talk and small bluster balk
moved through quickly
only to find her lose her mighty
now—
I still, in the last of the darkness
only a heartbeat ~ sweat drops speak
waiting [always waiting]
for mine, not to be thine own
amongst darkness,
shown
a plea.. she cries!
harken for those cooling sighs
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 12th Nov 2020
Author's Note
waiting for the power to come on,. especially the air conditioning. Thinking about sitting in my car with the AC blasting for a bit... 🔥
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Re. from darkness comes the light (and hopefully air conditioning)
12th Nov 2020 11:19am
I pray you get turned on soon ..... and your power supply. Sorry I'm still immature at heart
Love and light, especially light
Ron xx
Love and light, especially light
Ron xx
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12th Nov 2020 11:24am
lol... You're fine, it's funny.
I'm in Florida, this happens all the time
it's just sucky when it's still so warm
Ty for reading!
💜
xoxo
B
I'm in Florida, this happens all the time
it's just sucky when it's still so warm
Ty for reading!
💜
xoxo
B
Re. from darkness comes the light (and hopefully air conditioning)
12th Nov 2020 12:42pm
Usually when power goes out here, it's freezing to death that we have to worry about... amazing how ill-suited we humans are to our environment!
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12th Nov 2020 2:44pm
Spoiled by technology, especially when it comes to being comfortable in our environment!
lol... Ty for reading, I'm grateful for you
☺
xoxo
💜
B
lol... Ty for reading, I'm grateful for you
☺
xoxo
💜
B
Re. from darkness comes the light (and hopefully air conditioning)
12th Nov 2020 12:46pm
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12th Nov 2020 2:33pm
Re. from darkness comes the light (and hopefully air conditioning)
12th Nov 2020 4:52pm
Be safe. It's amazing but no surprise, how you have the talent and creativity to turn any event, situation, or challenge into an amazing write--poem. You are truly a POETESS. Hugs and peace. oral
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Re: Re. from darkness comes the light (and hopefully air conditioning)
12th Nov 2020 4:58pm
Power is on , AC is cooling (ahhhh!) and we're slowly getting back to somewhat normal.
I'm hardly a poetess, but I thank you for the kind words, My Oral loveliness.
I'm one big smile, to see your comments this almost afternoon. Ty for reading and your visit
Yours, is my favorite. (shhhh don't tell anyone) *wink
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💋 💋
-B
I'm hardly a poetess, but I thank you for the kind words, My Oral loveliness.
I'm one big smile, to see your comments this almost afternoon. Ty for reading and your visit
Yours, is my favorite. (shhhh don't tell anyone) *wink
🌹💜🌹💜🌹
💋 💋
-B
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12th Nov 2020 5:00pm
Re. from darkness comes the light (and hopefully air conditioning)
12th Nov 2020 6:38pm
You must be a Floridian too. lol I took an ativan and slept through the storm. Went to sleep with a light drizzling outside and it was the same when I woke, no power outage here on the east coast. Your title was great with it's equipoise of depth and cheek.
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Re: Re. from darkness comes the light (and hopefully air conditioning)
Yep, I'm a Tampon ... Lmfao
(it's a really bad joke that I love just too much.)
Tampan or Tampanian? idk.. I think it's Tampan.. Anyway, yes... I'm in Tampa and we were only slightly jostled. Yet the powers that (didn't) be, found it humorous to have our power go out for about 5-6 hours or so, just enough to get sticky inside, even though the weather wasn't very bad at all. I should have just smoked a little and slept through it as well, good call! Yet my (wee) anxiety wasn't allowing such an easy escape... of course. *eye roll... lol... Ty for reading and your thoughts,
-I'm appreciative, Daniel
🙏 🌹 💜
xo
B
(it's a really bad joke that I love just too much.)
Tampan or Tampanian? idk.. I think it's Tampan.. Anyway, yes... I'm in Tampa and we were only slightly jostled. Yet the powers that (didn't) be, found it humorous to have our power go out for about 5-6 hours or so, just enough to get sticky inside, even though the weather wasn't very bad at all. I should have just smoked a little and slept through it as well, good call! Yet my (wee) anxiety wasn't allowing such an easy escape... of course. *eye roll... lol... Ty for reading and your thoughts,
-I'm appreciative, Daniel
🙏 🌹 💜
xo
B
Re. from darkness comes the light (and hopefully air conditioning)
12th Nov 2020 10:04pm
Daniel C was only telling me about Eta...hope it becomes bright again soon Blue.
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
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Re: Re. from darkness comes the light (and hopefully air conditioning)
12th Nov 2020 10:16pm
The sun was out and shining about midday today,. that's how fast Eta moved through! (it's 513pm now) I think my power was out longer... hahaha
Luckily, it's back on and so is the AC! Yay 🎉
lol... I thank you for reading and your well wishes, Harry!
💜🌹💜🌹💜
xo
B
Luckily, it's back on and so is the AC! Yay 🎉
lol... I thank you for reading and your well wishes, Harry!
💜🌹💜🌹💜
xo
B
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12th Nov 2020 10:28pm
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12th Nov 2020 10:32pm
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13th Nov 2020 00:55am
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Re. from darkness comes the light (and hopefully air conditioning)
15th Nov 2020 8:28am
I've always thought how the dawn brings hope for the new day. Still, I'm a little baffled that it's hot in November.
But through this outage we got two great poems, two days in the life...
Great work Blue.
But through this outage we got two great poems, two days in the life...
Great work Blue.
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Re. from darkness comes the light (and hopefully air conditioning)
31st Jan 2021 00:05am
I visited Miami once years ago................way too hot for. Promplty came back to Montreal. OK; it can get very humid here so then more old people pass away.
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Re: Re. from darkness comes the light (and hopefully air conditioning)
31st Jan 2021 00:18am
It's never lost on me, the power of air conditioning!
Ty for reading, Robert!
💜
I'm appreciative
Ty for reading, Robert!
💜
I'm appreciative
Re. from darkness comes the light (and hopefully air conditioning)
4th Feb 2021 12:00pm
Like those first lines. "power still out" waiting in the darkness. I'm sure you didn't mean for it to have that deep of meaning, but it kind of jumped in my head. Wonderful 😁
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Re. from darkness comes the light (and hopefully air conditioning)
4th Feb 2021 1:07pm
DC,
I like your train of thought, it's a lovely compliment. I appreciate your list add and the look back into my writing... lol. I was actually sitting in a power outage due to Tropical storm Eta ... lol
Thank you for the kind words ;)
🌹
xo
B
I like your train of thought, it's a lovely compliment. I appreciate your list add and the look back into my writing... lol. I was actually sitting in a power outage due to Tropical storm Eta ... lol
Thank you for the kind words ;)
🌹
xo
B