Home, Sweet Home

oh my God dearest NewB this is genius really
it says so much I love this though I know
it's a painful part of you... you are sharing...

love Brenda 💕

Relax she ain't lookin

Great poem.  Nice dedication to LunaGrayhawk your muse.  Keep on writing.

This is really, really great poetry, NewB.  I love the graphic and there’s a so much current flowing beneath your words.  Excellent spill 💜.

Way to go NB ( working on expanding yourself that is).


hugs,
buddhakitty.

Man I love these little blurbs about dealing with life's clutter... nice write New...✌

Dear NB,

Tender. Vulnerable. The last two stanza’s are stunning. Finding that safe zone in the midst of chaos is the proverbial needle in a haystack. Amazing how much baggage we are capable of carrying throughout life. As for the format and presentation of this piece, well, it’s brilliant. Beautiful write. H🌷

its amazing if you push yourself take the leap outside the commonplace. I enjoy the CC competitions put yourself in other poets heads

This is the perfect place for experimentation. Awesome write.

Wonderful ink NB...a candy covered world with hidden shadows that we all encounter.
🙏 Harry

top draw .. NB

Your visual poetry game is at a new level.
Excellent work.