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One Soul......One Mind.......One Spirit
walking to our favorite water spot
nice warm breeze swirling around us
looking up to a stunning blue sky
with purple fluffy lined clouds
sun casting our shadows upon ripples
across a crystal emerald pond
our path leads thru purple flowers
swaying in the calm wind
music of a whispering waterfall so peaceful
calming to just relax here in your arms
sitting on a rock dipping our toes
can’t help but be close to you
while our would combine as one
total beauty and grace of nature surrounds us
as the sun sets and a purple moon softly glows
close your eyes and join my dream
let’s now become.......one soul.......one mind......one spirit
Copyright © 2020 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
nice warm breeze swirling around us
looking up to a stunning blue sky
with purple fluffy lined clouds
sun casting our shadows upon ripples
across a crystal emerald pond
our path leads thru purple flowers
swaying in the calm wind
music of a whispering waterfall so peaceful
calming to just relax here in your arms
sitting on a rock dipping our toes
can’t help but be close to you
while our would combine as one
total beauty and grace of nature surrounds us
as the sun sets and a purple moon softly glows
close your eyes and join my dream
let’s now become.......one soul.......one mind......one spirit
Copyright © 2020 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 28th Sep 2020
| Edited 29th Sep 2020
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28th Sep 2020 1:50am
28th Sep 2020 1:55am
Awe NewB........I thank you so much for helping me thru this process.......as I said to you......I never forget a act of kindness from a soul.......you’ve blessed me for sure........I’m glad you like this........honored by the RL.......purple luv & hugs xo :) 🌸💜
28th Sep 2020 3:12am
Dear FG,
There is a gentle spirit throughout the entire piece that is relaxing. I can almost actually hear the rippling water of the pond. It’s a beautiful guided journey with a lovely hopeful ending. H🌷
There is a gentle spirit throughout the entire piece that is relaxing. I can almost actually hear the rippling water of the pond. It’s a beautiful guided journey with a lovely hopeful ending. H🌷
29th Sep 2020 1:53am
Hey H........thank you for the wonderful encouragement........you always make me smile........thrilled you’ve enjoyed this........honored by the RL......purple luv & hugs xo :)
28th Sep 2020 4:37am
A lovely blend of your beautiful write and the accompanied pretty visual.
I enjoyed this
Well done you
💜 💜 💜
xo
B
I enjoyed this
Well done you
💜 💜 💜
xo
B
29th Sep 2020 1:56am
Hey Blue.........so thrilled to see you smiling upon my ink.......my first try at this........happy for your positivity........honored for the RL.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
28th Sep 2020 8:37am
Lovely piece my Purple poetress, great write really loved the flow
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
30th Sep 2020 00:58am
Hey Joe........I’m thrilled you like this one........I’m always happy to have your visit........thank you my friend.......honored by the RL......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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28th Sep 2020 10:04am
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30th Sep 2020 1:03am
Hey BP.........thank you for your visit.......thrill Ed to see you smile upon my ink.........purple luv & hugs xo :)
28th Sep 2020 1:28pm
Flowered one, this is a beautiful presentation, but it's very difficult to read ( for me )? Did you select "Visual Poem" so it would be bigger?
30th Sep 2020 1:06am
Hey Ahavati........thank you for your honest words........yes I did select visual.........I tried other colors........I think the pic is too small for this........glad you still enjoyed it.......honored by the RL........purple luv & hugs xo :)
29th Sep 2020 12:45pm
30th Sep 2020 1:08am
Hey Buddy........I so appreciate your visit.........happy that you’ve enjoyed this one.........it would be nice to visit for sure........honored by the RL........purple luv & hugs xo :)
