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Rose-colored Memories
A solemn silence fills the air.
Our lips are ever still—
The memories still linger there,
But the love has lost its thrill.
Once upon a love anew,
We glistened like a drop of dew;
A withered rose now lay askew,
Within the garden which it fondly grew.
I stare into a false reflection,
Mirrored softly on the wall—
In this cave of recollection,
My thoughts begin to crawl.
I saw the writing on the wall,
As I gazed into the crystal ball.
For it was written in our destiny,
This forbidden love will never be.
Our lips are ever still—
The memories still linger there,
But the love has lost its thrill.
Once upon a love anew,
We glistened like a drop of dew;
A withered rose now lay askew,
Within the garden which it fondly grew.
I stare into a false reflection,
Mirrored softly on the wall—
In this cave of recollection,
My thoughts begin to crawl.
I saw the writing on the wall,
As I gazed into the crystal ball.
For it was written in our destiny,
This forbidden love will never be.
Author's Note
Finally broke a month-long dry spell with my writing... I've been a bit depressed and uninspired, so please forgive my absence here as of late. Hope you like it!
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Re. Rose-colored Memories
26th Aug 2020 11:49pm
So very very relatable.
With impeccable flow... I love this so
Ty for sharing your write
💜 💜
B
With impeccable flow... I love this so
Ty for sharing your write
💜 💜
B
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Re: Re. Rose-colored Memories
27th Aug 2020 00:27am
Thanks so much for the great feedback, Blue... I've noticed you around, writing up a storm, but haven't got around to reading much of your work yet. Needless to say, I've got a lot of catching up to do on here...!
Re. Rose-colored Memories
27th Aug 2020 1:00am
Be still my pain filled heart. A love so strong and the longing... sigh. I understand this to the core. And understand having to step away ❣️
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Re. Rose-colored Memories
27th Aug 2020 1:28am
Re. Rose-colored Memories
27th Aug 2020 2:34am
NewB, you touch my heart with this one. A glimpse of what could have been, what should have been, but destiny declines.
Thank you for the write.
Thank you for the write.
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Re. Rose-colored Memories
27th Aug 2020 2:42am
Re. Rose-colored Memories
27th Aug 2020 6:20am
Glad to see you back ... great emoting/evoking with this ... it flows so well ... the last line aches ...
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Re. Rose-colored Memories
27th Aug 2020 8:49am
Re. Rose-colored Memories
27th Aug 2020 2:37pm
Its scent of rose to the sense and then was gone, but alas still bore the thorns
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Re. Rose-colored Memories
27th Aug 2020 3:44pm
Re. Rose-colored Memories
27th Aug 2020 6:24pm
Dear NB,
Ditto all the above responses. This is such a gentle metered poem that exhales a sigh of remorse and wistfulness. Although we’ve missed you your time away has given you the opportunity to create more beautiful verses to share with us.
H🌷
Ditto all the above responses. This is such a gentle metered poem that exhales a sigh of remorse and wistfulness. Although we’ve missed you your time away has given you the opportunity to create more beautiful verses to share with us.
H🌷
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Re. Rose-colored Memories
27th Aug 2020 7:38pm
I enjoyed reading this
“A solemn silence fills the air
Our lips are ever this”
This Part!
Right from the start.
“A solemn silence fills the air
Our lips are ever this”
This Part!
Right from the start.
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Re. Rose-colored Memories
28th Aug 2020 1:32am
Re. Rose-colored Memories
31st Aug 2020 5:54am
Beautiful piece NB. Sometimes we have to wait for the muse to come back to us and fill us with words.
Your verse had it all, love, nostalgia, heartache and yet hope.
Well done.
Your verse had it all, love, nostalgia, heartache and yet hope.
Well done.
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Re. Rose-colored Memories
31st Aug 2020 5:45pm
This is beautifully expressed NewB. I can feel the emotion in this poem.
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Re. Rose-colored Memories
2nd Sep 2020 2:02am
Hey NB.......luv this......soft tender words so heartbreaking.......I can relate to this for sure deep in my soul........RL for me........Glad to see you back......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. Rose-colored Memories
12th Sep 2020 1:38pm
Re. Rose-colored Memories
24th Sep 2020 5:58am
"Rose-colored Memories"
What a perfect way to express!
Good piece, I like this.
Depth, real, and so very human.
I can certainly relate to these words. 💙
What a perfect way to express!
Good piece, I like this.
Depth, real, and so very human.
I can certainly relate to these words. 💙
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