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garden of the soul~ with the gorgeous Sky_dancer
her soul bloom blood orchids
her womb ache with need
in her quiet times, she wept sunshine
suckling the dawn she gave birth to wonderment
the freckled day smiled up at her
his need surpassed her own
passions stirred within him would not be denied
he cultivated the garden of soul within her
flavoring it with melancholy and lust
she was insatiable
she sucked from his phallus hidden truths
he brought her lavender
to soothe her,
roses to seduce her
ornaments, for joy
a steadfast gardener, he
germinated her seed
she whispered magic inside
they were sacred
like the Ash tree
hands draped in ribbon
sanctified union
divining the deepest spaces of his hollows
he was mine I his
we laughed inside our tears
cried within our joy
our souls became one
in our sacred understanding
Author's Note
thank you beautiful Sky I love you ❤
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Re. garden of the soul~ with the gorgeous Sky_dancer
5th Jul 2020 4:16pm
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5th Jul 2020 9:59pm
Re. garden of the soul~ with the gorgeous Sky_dancer
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5th Jul 2020 4:19pm
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Re: Re. garden of the soul~ with the gorgeous Sky_dancer
5th Jul 2020 10:00pm
I love writing with you beautiful it was like we were reading each other's minds... it was a pleasure ❤
Re. garden of the soul~ with the gorgeous Sky_dancer
5th Jul 2020 4:21pm
Re: Re. garden of the soul~ with the gorgeous Sky_dancer
5th Jul 2020 10:01pm
thank you graciously dearest Ron from us both I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤
Re. garden of the soul~ with the gorgeous Sky_dancer
5th Jul 2020 6:42pm
I am positively enchanted by this masterpiece of sensuality and romance. You capture so well the beauty of the heart/mind bond between true lovers and the deep significance of poetry and sex. A captivating sampling of the melding of geniuses.❣❣❣😘😘
Oh yeah, favorite passages, "in her quiet times, she wept sunshine" and oh my, "she sucked from his phallus hidden truths" and "He brought lavender to soothe, roses to seduce her" I have this classic image of a man kneeling his treasure chest open.
Oh yeah, favorite passages, "in her quiet times, she wept sunshine" and oh my, "she sucked from his phallus hidden truths" and "He brought lavender to soothe, roses to seduce her" I have this classic image of a man kneeling his treasure chest open.
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Re: Re. garden of the soul~ with the gorgeous Sky_dancer
5th Jul 2020 10:02pm
thank you graciously dearest poet from us both it was really a pleasure creating with her... I cherish your thoughts ❤
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6th Jul 2020 2:53am
Re: Re. garden of the soul~ with the gorgeous Sky_dancer
6th Jul 2020 5:20pm
Re. garden of the soul~ with the gorgeous Sky_dancer
5th Jul 2020 7:35pm
Some real nice flowiing words in there. Think I've said that before to you. Grats gn I really like it.
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Re: Re. garden of the soul~ with the gorgeous Sky_dancer
5th Jul 2020 10:03pm
thank you graciously dearest poet from both Sky and I it was beautiful collaborating with her... I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤
Re. garden of the soul~ with the gorgeous Sky_dancer
7th Jul 2020 10:54pm
In a league of it's own. Such an amazingly beautiful collaboration by two incredible writers.
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Re: Re. garden of the soul~ with the gorgeous Sky_dancer
7th Jul 2020 11:31pm
thank you graciously from us both beautiful Kristina I deeply appreciate your thoughts 🌹
Re. garden of the soul~ with the gorgeous Sky_dancer
8th Jul 2020 2:08am
Crimsin, Sky, your words are a testament of poetry traversing distances with a spiritual attachment.
Excellent work.
Excellent work.
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Re: Re. garden of the soul~ with the gorgeous Sky_dancer
8th Jul 2020 2:49pm
thank you graciously dearest Wally from us both I'm happy you felt our spiritual connection to each other I deeply appreciate your thought dear poet ❤
Re. garden of the soul~ with the gorgeous Sky_dancer
8th Jul 2020 8:40pm
Gorgeous writing, you two. Such a lovely, sensuous, passionate spill ❤️
The dynamic duo ;)
The dynamic duo ;)
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9th Jul 2020 9:32pm