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Calming Psalms of Solace....
Lay the shattered fragments of your unadulterated self
before me, leaving not one burden
unveiled or unsung;
tempest tears and saddened ballads.
My embrace yearns to swallow
all that haunts
as fingertips smooth love's solvent;
caressing affection
into the crevices of weary mind
and rigid limbs.
Cradle within the soul of me
as I sing in psalms
to conquer the rhythm of your blues;
planting solace
in your tender garden of sorrow.
before me, leaving not one burden
unveiled or unsung;
tempest tears and saddened ballads.
My embrace yearns to swallow
all that haunts
as fingertips smooth love's solvent;
caressing affection
into the crevices of weary mind
and rigid limbs.
Cradle within the soul of me
as I sing in psalms
to conquer the rhythm of your blues;
planting solace
in your tender garden of sorrow.
Written by
PandoraUnleashed
Published 29th Jun 2020
| Edited 6th Jul 2020
Author's Note
Copyright © 2020 PandoraUnleashed. All Rights Reserved.
A word of caution, use your full copyright disclosure. That's my reasoning for editing all my pieces now, I just found "Morning Glory" posted at All Poetry by the username of, Neil32. Within an fifteen minutes of my threat, he closed his account. Be on the lookout, I screenshot his face if anyone needs to see { if that's even his either } Grrrr....
A word of caution, use your full copyright disclosure. That's my reasoning for editing all my pieces now, I just found "Morning Glory" posted at All Poetry by the username of, Neil32. Within an fifteen minutes of my threat, he closed his account. Be on the lookout, I screenshot his face if anyone needs to see { if that's even his either } Grrrr....
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Re. Calming Psalms of Solace....
29th Jun 2020 10:51pm
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Thanks, Tallen. If only is right, I don't get the type of people who can't appreciate this type of intimacy. Uber Pandy hug!
Re. Calming Psalms of Solace....
29th Jun 2020 11:02pm
So beautiful, so full of emotional content. Great job by a awesome wordsmith. Loved it
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6th Jul 2020 6:48pm
Thank you for such a lovely comment Joe💝 I haven't been here in a few days and I'm sure you've probably released 20 during that time. I gotta play catch up with you today. Pandy hugs!
Re. Calming Psalms of Solace....
29th Jun 2020 11:56pm
Love this piece so beautifully composed with each word spoken from the depth of the heart and soul respect dear poetess
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Thank you so much to the writer of wisdom. That's gonna be your new name, I thought about it the other day... King Wisdom! One love, Stoney.🤗
Re: Re. Calming Psalms of Solace....
6th Jul 2020 10:54pm
I appreciate the compliment and the name much respect to you dear poetess 🙏🤛🤗
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Re. Calming Psalms of Solace....
30th Jun 2020 4:42am
The compassion this exudes wraps around me like a blanket of deep comfort and solace. Such a tender offering to the suffering man from a woman who knows how to touch his soul with her spirit. You have captured the feeling of love in its truest form. This is more than a poem it is a healing touch upon the core of the masculine. I love where this took me tonight and the feeling it left me.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Your comment truly wraps me in solace. Thank you to the moon & back for such an endearing comment, but aren't they all. I'm glad you felt the warmth most of all. Just like your writing takes me on a vivid trip every time, I always hope to put at least a mere ounce feeling, but still strive for more.
I appreciate you, John { uber hugs}
I appreciate you, John { uber hugs}
Re. Calming Psalms of Solace....
30th Jun 2020 6:21am
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6th Jul 2020 7:02pm
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2020 3:53am
Oh lordy, girl...this is an absolute thing of beauty. Opening arms and heart and welcoming the vulnerability...for both. I agree with Tallen...if only we all had such a soul at our side
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6th Jul 2020 7:16pm
Re. Calming Psalms of Solace....
1st Jul 2020 4:52am
Wow, this was phenomenal. Soothing and calming indeed. In a way, we all seek that haven to feel safe and you've explained it beautifully here.
Brave.
Brave.
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6th Jul 2020 7:24pm
I'm gracious of such kind words & the add, Wally. Pandy hugs and a promise to catch up with you. I'm sure you have beauty hiding !!!!
Re. Calming Psalms of Solace....
2nd Jul 2020 11:41am
Such a comforting thought! Each word seemed to be threaded with delicate care.
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6th Jul 2020 7:29pm
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3rd Jul 2020 8:00pm
I read this days ago, but I'm reading again, so I'm leaving you a comment this time ;)
Everyone needs someone to unburden themselves upon every once in awhile - you said it so beautifully... That you will be the shoulder for a person cry on, even if it hurts. To know depths of their soul like no other in the name of your love. You are a beautiful soul, Pandy. This poem and your sentiment displays a beautiful act of selfless love and honesty - and in such a creative and wonderful fashion. Thank you for sharing your gorgeous ink with us ❤️🙏
Everyone needs someone to unburden themselves upon every once in awhile - you said it so beautifully... That you will be the shoulder for a person cry on, even if it hurts. To know depths of their soul like no other in the name of your love. You are a beautiful soul, Pandy. This poem and your sentiment displays a beautiful act of selfless love and honesty - and in such a creative and wonderful fashion. Thank you for sharing your gorgeous ink with us ❤️🙏
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6th Jul 2020 7:38pm
You said it all, NB. As I've told some others above, I don't understand those not appreciating such an intimacy. Your compliment just made my day, as having a good soul is where the true beauty is. Thank you.💝🙏🌟
Re. Calming Psalms of Solace....
8th Jul 2020 10:39pm
Just beautiful, I think NewBeginnings has described it perfectly so I will leave it at that.
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Re. Calming Psalms of Solace....
28th Aug 2020 9:21pm
Solace ... beautiful word ... in a beautiful poem ... bravo dear poetess ...
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