Ridden Wishes...

he be a very lucky feller here

Thanks D😘

Beautiful images, Pandy❣❣ Trying to decide whether my thickness is amiable...you know me, Mr. Nice Guy so I think it's  possible that it's...although some may like it mean😄🐻💋

So glad you could enjoy it!  Don't be silly either, Mr Nice guy....

amiable adjective

ami·​a·​ble | \ ˈā-mē-ə-bəl  \

Definition of amiable

1a: friendly, sociable, and congenial

b: generally agreeable
an amiable comedy

2archaic : PLEASING, ADMIRABLE


A most friendly and sociable lay indeed, plus I know you're a man who loves to please. Thanks for the comment and RL love!

Super happy that you're back and with this incredible piece, tight piece boo

Thanks buddy. Uber hugs!

Read slowly and savouringly, I can see an 'amiable thickness' coming upon a few male readers!

Hee hee..wicked giggles if so.😉😯

Lucky, very lucky man

Thanks Joe. Damn it, I've been so wrapped up in piecing stuff together and need to make a stop at your place.😉

Awesome gift to love a piercing lol and Ink of course, hope to see you at my place soon x

Oh, that's what I meant..."piecing" some ink together. I may have written piercing. I'm scatter brained anyhow.😅

Thank you for the add too, that's so very kind. Cumming in a bit, pun intended. 😎

Lovely ... Bless and love ... ..

As always, thank you and I hope this finds you well. Miss your writings.🙏💗

Thanks sweetums!🌷💞

Heavens to Betsy you've turned country, you have always had so many hidden facets.😅

You definitely straddled the full girth  of expression, and rode  me to the summit.
As always... you gallop,  never canter, in the field of your artistry.   Excellent ride Pandy!!
Excellent write!!!🌹

Who's da best? You da best!😉 Thanks buddy 😘

Beautifully done, gorgeous! With very few words you have created visions of passionate, visceral and picturesque “coupling”...

I’m keeping her.

- Taryn

Thanks sweetums!🌷🙏

You never fail to take us where you're going and it's always one helluva ride. Those first 2 lines and I was hooked. Another one for my list...

Thanks sweet Willow 🙏🌺

This has to be one of my absolute favs of yours ... love its compactness ... crispness ... it is so visually pleasing ... straight to the RL ... do not pass go ... do not collect $200 ...

Oooh, high praise from you. I aimed to keep a flow of subtle rhyme since the muse is throwing itty bitty pieces out. Thanks sweetums 🙏🌺

Love how you described the roseate between alabaster. An alluringly fiery image of a woman in a state of readiness that is emblazoned on my mind. Amiable is often used to describe a gentleman and is the perfect fit for manhood ready to do service for his lady in waiting. Then that ending about never wanting to surrender when making love spoke to my heart. Indeed separate but joined. Love what your words do to me and how they turn me on.

Xo
John

It tickles me pink and makes my heart happy whenever I read your comments. I'm pleased my humble crumbs can provoke your senses, John. Thank you for your treasured feedback, you brought a smile and giggles ! xx

It's pretty intense for a short piece and that closing line is just passionate  beyond description.
Well done.

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This piece is a sensually evocative exploration of intimacy and desire, beautifully capturing the essence of passion and surrender within a relationship. The imagery of "hips joined at the furthest allowance of roseate between the alabaster" paints a vivid picture of physical closeness and connection. The use of "adoration wrapped 'round his amiable thickness" adds layers of tenderness and reverence to the portrayal of the partner.

The central message encapsulated in the whispered wish "when making love to you, I never wish to surrender" is powerful and poignant. It speaks to a desire for perpetual connection and the refusal to relinquish oneself completely, even in moments of vulnerability. The structure of the poem, with its fragmented and elongated formatting, enhances the sense of longing and intensity, drawing the reader deeper into the emotional landscape.

Overall, "Ridden Wishes" is a captivating piece that skillfully intertwines physical desire with emotional depth, inviting readers to contemplate the complexities of intimacy and love.