"WHERE ART THOU LOVE?"

Forbidden is freaking hot.  So you can hear now.  Keep on writing.

Thanks hun I appreciate

Well constructed , Nancy...

Creative wordplay , structure , and a thread of sanity in love throughout...

This I can appreciate , and your mind and soul shine through

Thank you so much I live Shakespeare feel in writing, I was inspired to just write like him at least once to see how my work turns out and I love it. It's only hard pronouncing the words but it looks very elegant just looking at it. This is my first real poetry attempted writing with Shakespeare touch in it on how Romeo and Juliet felt before dying.

Love how you spilled this piece nicely composed dear poetess..respect

Thank so much Stoney I truly love Shakespeare even though it may sound off or confusing but it's beautiful and romantic and only fills the heart to challenge to his creative unique work which I'm falling into to see how far I can go. This is my first attempt of writing like his hands and I'll try to keep writing more in future. Thanks for liking hun.

Well you did it justice dear poetess..respect

Thanks Stoney I truly appreciate your kindness in words.

Respect dear poetess for it is definitely necessary to step out of the norm showing different styles of writing respect dear poetess and friend enjoy your day

I've always found Shakespeare so ahead of his time I try to keep up with him in the now.
I like the way you formatted these stanzas, the first two lines being short followed by two longer lines.
Excellent spill Nancy.

Thanks hun i sometimes don't feel confident with it.  Cause its hard to even pronounce some of the words. But ill post my original i had at first. Ill continue to write like shakespeare further ahead. Thanks for liking hun.