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RAINY ROMANTIC NIGHT
I crave to imagine you are here with me
Clenching me tight
Never setting me free...
On this rainy romantic night.
Both eyeing as rain dots off a tree.
The moment perceptions right
as we can clearly see
Our eyes that stare
To one, another's pupil light...
That glows in a strong flare
Masking in Warm and gentle care
Our faces gleam blue bright
Gently, you fondle with my long hair.
As now all settle amazingly right
Now we both share
A cuddle that won't fright
but engage us till moonlight shows bare
Our bonding bodies
That churns in silky peaches without a smear
Glitchy colors and leaky lights artes
That combine in a true compatible mere.
"Silence fills around"...
The rain seemed to have stopped
Light sprinkling in a purple shroud
As the windows bokeh, crafts us cropped
invisible to natures dew sound
Crickets chirp in flooded sight.
That allure in an enticement dare
Not even do mosquitos trespass to bite
Respecting....which is nothing rare
Making love, we forget nature's gullies...
Nothing in us can ever compare
The way we mix in such accessories
Blending in a divine downpour in a proper pair.
Clenching me tight
Never setting me free...
On this rainy romantic night.
Both eyeing as rain dots off a tree.
The moment perceptions right
as we can clearly see
Our eyes that stare
To one, another's pupil light...
That glows in a strong flare
Masking in Warm and gentle care
Our faces gleam blue bright
Gently, you fondle with my long hair.
As now all settle amazingly right
Now we both share
A cuddle that won't fright
but engage us till moonlight shows bare
Our bonding bodies
That churns in silky peaches without a smear
Glitchy colors and leaky lights artes
That combine in a true compatible mere.
"Silence fills around"...
The rain seemed to have stopped
Light sprinkling in a purple shroud
As the windows bokeh, crafts us cropped
invisible to natures dew sound
Crickets chirp in flooded sight.
That allure in an enticement dare
Not even do mosquitos trespass to bite
Respecting....which is nothing rare
Making love, we forget nature's gullies...
Nothing in us can ever compare
The way we mix in such accessories
Blending in a divine downpour in a proper pair.
Published 29th Apr 2020
| Edited 30th Apr 2020
Author's Note
My own romantic rain poem that is part fantasy as for many a reality fantasy love story
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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30th Apr 2020 00:03am
30th Apr 2020 2:00am
30th Apr 2020 11:10am
Always welcome dear poetess..respect hope all is well with you and the family stay safe out there
30th Apr 2020 9:04pm
Thank you Stoney we been doing great. Just keeping indoors and cleaning organizing working a lot at home. All is healthy and doing great thank you. I hope your family is doing fine.
30th Apr 2020 11:36pm
30th Apr 2020 11:39pm
I am glad to hear that you and family are doing well yes during these times it is a good to keep the mind doing things that are positive my family is doing well respect dear poetess
1st May 2020 2:21am
I'm glad you and your family doing good. Hope your Thursday is going peaceful for you.
1st May 2020 1:27pm
1st May 2020 5:26pm
30th Apr 2020 5:03am
30th Apr 2020 9:02pm
Thank you ,I enjoyed this poem. I'm trying to see about making it a sensual video with my voice. Maybe I'll try doing for all my poems the same. Thank you for liking.
15th May 2020 6:44pm
You've painted a vivid picture, with the most liveliest of moods and settings I've read in a while. The setting of the rain is not only just refreshing (in it's metaphorical and physical state) but it also feels as if it's blessing to share in such a passionate scene.
Beautifully written.
Beautifully written.
16th May 2020 6:05am
Thanks wallyroo92, I feel the same. The rain has a special feeling especially when close to someone very affectionate.
Beautiful write, why let inclement weather deter love? Favourite lines:
Now we both share
A cuddle that won't fright
but engage us till moonlight shows bare
Our bonding bodies
This verse has inspired a rhyme titled Bodies Bonding which I have just posted in the Erotic section.
Now we both share
A cuddle that won't fright
but engage us till moonlight shows bare
Our bonding bodies
This verse has inspired a rhyme titled Bodies Bonding which I have just posted in the Erotic section.
