Peace in hovering

That was so gorgeous, Kristina! ❤️
Your delicate and lighthearted flow combined with the beautiful natural imagery makes my heart flutter 🦋😁
That was fantastic!! Keep up the great writing!

Thanks NewBeginnings! Your opinion means a lot to me so I really love that it had such an impact. ❤️🦋

This is nice work Kristina. I would suggest varying the enjambments a bit more to give the piece a more fluid, changing feeling. Something like this,

Butterfly wings
Honey bee stings
On
Violin strings,
a strange harmony
I sought
Peace
infinite faith
in the
Peace of hovering
Among
empty days,
my troubles
remained
somewhere
in the distance

Balance of strength
I got drunk
on pure feelings
Connected thinking,
harmony of our bodies
and connections

Our inner forces
beautiful
piercing
We are connected,
you are the
line
inscribed
in my palm
You are
the one
I have been waiting
for
so long

That is the connection,
in your embrace
You open the world
To me,
I feel it
With you now
and the eyes
Say it

We share the world
like oxygen and air [love this]
I have faith
we are heading for
the stars
Together

It's a strange dream
where I'm not just
the one
whose songs
drift
on
delicate
colorful wings
On the way
to new heights
our heart rate will
rise

I will whisper to you
in secret
Connected thinking,
harmony of bodies
and connections,
our inner forces
a beautiful piercing
We are forever connected
Sincere love
night and dawn
I will be your verse
and
You can be my
poem

We are connected
no matter what
happens
That's the connection
in your embrace
you can always
count on my support
And if we drift away
I am forever
your support
and balance

Keep at it. Effort will help you gain in every way. In confidence, in fluidity. 💖🙏

Thanks Daniel, I really appreciate suggestions a lot that can help me improve - and the encouragement. I will read through what you have provided and decide about editing. 💖

I love this the way it’s it is... words from the heart and soul are always treasures to behold

Thanks buddydog, it is always great to hear your opinion and I appreciate your feedback a lot. 💖

I was once visiting a Buddhist monastery in the mountains near where I live. It was so peaceful it inspired me to write. What was most interesting was that as I was breathing in the air, the silence and the peace, a small white butterfly flew close past me. It was an awesome experience.

Your piece reminds me that peaceful moment I had with the universe. We intertwine ourselves with nature feeling the connection to the earth and other beings.

Excellent write.

That sounds amazing, it must be an amazing place. I am glad I could help inspire such a wonderful memory. I can definitely see why you would think of that. There is a peace in nature that is quickly being forgotten.

Thanks for sharing that beautiful memory with me. 💖

Reading through some of your catalog...

Are those MJ plants?

F***king A, finally someone that noticed. lol Yes, those are most definitely Mj plants. That tells me so much about you C. lol 'Reading through some of your catalog' very much like that. Feel free to peruse the aisles of my strange any time. You can even hear this one in one my early recordings if you want. It's not very good but I tried.

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/394073-peace-in-hovering-audio/

Right...

I was like...

How didn't anyone notice.?.

Strange minds...  :p

Tells me so much about you, as well...  :)))

(Just listened to...:)))

Based on the leaf structure and plant morphology  
I think they are 70% sativa 30% indica...  

:PPP

I read that one way to fast. I was anxious... nervous trying to do a reading. Sometimes I put myself out there and then go why the hell did I do that. And then... I put myself out there in the most egregious ways unconcerned with the onlookers... A constant contradiction. A constant struggle. But I am seriously impressed you can make a determination on sativa or indica. You are so high and let you drop stones that crush the weak souls. But they dig out of the rubble trying to be high.