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Brutality
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 10th Jun 2020
Author's Note
admin's morality competition
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11450/#486587
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11450/#486587
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Re. Brutality
10th Jun 2020 5:00am
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10th Jun 2020 6:50am
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10th Jun 2020 8:28am
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2020 1:24pm
Message received! Stand up to those who abuse power and you risk receiving a concussion. We need MOARality! Well done!
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10th Jun 2020 3:29pm
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10th Jun 2020 3:59pm
I love the image with this poem. Simple and straightforward work. Very powerful.
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Re. Brutality
11th Jun 2020 5:04am
I like this a lot, it's brutally honest and true about those who are abusive.
Good luck in the comp.
Good luck in the comp.
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Re. Brutality
11th Jun 2020 5:50am
Antonym in poetic art. Now the whole class will remember what an 'Antonym' is for the upcoming test.
I say once again, "we all understand estimate the educational value of poetry."
I say once again, "we all understand estimate the educational value of poetry."
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Re. Brutality
11th Jun 2020 3:57pm
Dear A,
I feel like this should be a poster. Hanging in classrooms, dorm rooms, police stations, Congress, Senate. Just where my head went but aside from that trip, what is so impactful is the succinct use of each word to define and drive home the point. Well done and best of luck in the comp. H🌷
I feel like this should be a poster. Hanging in classrooms, dorm rooms, police stations, Congress, Senate. Just where my head went but aside from that trip, what is so impactful is the succinct use of each word to define and drive home the point. Well done and best of luck in the comp. H🌷
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19th Jun 2020 1:29am
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