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Unreal
Sometimes I feel like the
Velveteen Rabbit,
what the fuck is real
and does it hurt?
Not really connected.
Pixels paint my vision
this is a matrix,
the Oracle or Skin Horse
it's all the same
and the bunny always
gets burned.
Shapes.
Lines.
Space.
Solids.
Published 1st Jun 2020
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1st Jun 2020 2:41am
1st Jun 2020 3:16am
Dear N,
I think I know what you mean. It feels like floating through an alternate universe unable to make sense of anyone or anything as of late. And this just makes me want to eat. Cute sneaks! Great write. H🌷
I think I know what you mean. It feels like floating through an alternate universe unable to make sense of anyone or anything as of late. And this just makes me want to eat. Cute sneaks! Great write. H🌷
1st Jun 2020 4:29am
1st Jun 2020 5:37am
Tapping into parts of the brain that can look into the beyond, the parallel universe.
Excellent spill.
Excellent spill.
1st Jun 2020 8:29am
1st Jun 2020 10:46am
Very deep Nick... very oriental in that it will mean something different to every reader. I guess that’s the great purpose of all things we write, ie. To touch everyone. Another winner! A.
1st Jun 2020 1:56pm
Wow ... this is amazing on all levels ... its layout ... the flow and cadence ... beautiful line breaks ... nice use of punctuation ... straight to the RL ...
