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Life in a day
drawings
smudged together
mixed colours
spilled on pallette
children unformed
wishes unfulfilled
cautions
as picked guitars
strummed
strings vibrations
held in hands
choked sounds
standing
at line's end
head hung low
shadows lengthen
evening draws nigh
end greetings
smudged together
mixed colours
spilled on pallette
children unformed
wishes unfulfilled
cautions
as picked guitars
strummed
strings vibrations
held in hands
choked sounds
standing
at line's end
head hung low
shadows lengthen
evening draws nigh
end greetings
Published 30th May 2020
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30th May 2020 00:57am
30th May 2020 3:56am
30th May 2020 5:01am
Wish are unfulfilled because of this situation now. Great poem. Keep on writing.
30th May 2020 5:42am
31st May 2020 00:28am
31st May 2020 2:20am
31st May 2020 9:50pm
I often think of poetry in terms of music, and life across a timeline as well, the rises and falls, interludes and crescendos. This write holds that kind of feeling and journey for me. 💖🙏
31st May 2020 11:05pm
