Bitter Hope

This is dark but in a different way,  Death is a lady of mystery and she wears a many different mask. Being the seductress that she is her beautiful looks and sweet fragrance can lure you into the deadliest of traps. Tight

Nice analysis, sir.

Very pleasing visually, I really like the font and wording.

Negative with a twist of hope

Angst Like

Crave new, more healthy connection, crave a big tasty mouthful of a new life, leave her to ripen and rot on his withered, emasculated stalk. Oh and awesome poem❣❣😍

Love where this one went ... excellent ...

Succinct piece with a great visual. If I could throw out one suggestion. Try reading it out loud the way you have it and then again minus the word “up” at the end.

Thank you! I’ll fix it

A twist with hope at the end of the tunnel.  Keep on writing.

The light shines out so much brighter after a night of darkness. 💖

So, Death is a woman. That explains a lot. We often wonder why men die first, we just cannot resist a pretty face and a seductive smile. Plus you know she's dressed in something kinky. ;))

For the most part we're programmed to avoid her at all costs. I've often wished the death of certain people who crossed me over the years yet I've never been to those dark depths where I'd wish it on my self.

I'm glad you're still with us babe. Keep up the good fight. XXX

Haha in my mind death is a woman....

And yes, I’m still here, fighting...