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Deep Underground Poetry
I may not have the right words
to find the best sparks yet
I confess and you do not judge
Although I am not a poet
and maybe my writing is not great
But you give me gentle smiles
anyway and I admire you endlessly
For sharing so many beautiful, sad,
motivational, and passionate words
Steps to the edge for me
I am falling in love with you
For me it's exciting of course
having so many unique and interesting
new things to read
This house is cozy and I am
very grateful
to find the best sparks yet
I confess and you do not judge
Although I am not a poet
and maybe my writing is not great
But you give me gentle smiles
anyway and I admire you endlessly
For sharing so many beautiful, sad,
motivational, and passionate words
Steps to the edge for me
I am falling in love with you
For me it's exciting of course
having so many unique and interesting
new things to read
This house is cozy and I am
very grateful
Author's Note
Just trying to say DUP seems like a great place in my own awkward way. I know it is not the best writing and maybe silly but I can laugh at myself with you.
The more I say I am not going to try and write the more I want to so maybe I will and thanks for tolerating me. Psychology is a bitch.
The more I say I am not going to try and write the more I want to so maybe I will and thanks for tolerating me. Psychology is a bitch.
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Re. Deep Underground Poetry
15th May 2020 1:00am
This is great! You seem lovely! Welcome!! I can relate to your poem. Looking forward to seeing more.
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15th May 2020 1:09am
Thank you julia for the welcome and the encouragement. I am glad you relate. :) I have not read any of yours yet, I have been bouncing around like a manic butterfly reading stuff but I look forward to it.
Re: Re. Deep Underground Poetry
15th May 2020 1:15am
A manic butterfly... love it! I’m going to like you! Have a ball, butterfly... spread those wings!
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15th May 2020 10:43pm
Re. Deep Underground Poetry
15th May 2020 9:15pm
DUP is pretty awesome. It's a community that spreads around the world and everyone is very welcoming. You'll find support, pointers, and inspiration most of all. This is the prime example of what I felt when I first got here and I'm glad you've expressed it so open and honestly.
Cheers.
Cheers.
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Re: Re. Deep Underground Poetry
15th May 2020 10:44pm
Thank you for the insight and encouragement. I do love that there are people from many countries and I do feel less intimidated about writing some things now then I did at first. So let's see how it goes. :)
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18th May 2020 1:02am
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Re. Deep Underground Poetry
18th May 2020 5:10am
Hullo and welcome
what you've written is true on so many levels. hope you can make a home here like so many others
I see nothing out of place in your poem, well done. please continue
what you've written is true on so many levels. hope you can make a home here like so many others
I see nothing out of place in your poem, well done. please continue
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Re: Re. Deep Underground Poetry
18th May 2020 10:54pm
Thank you lepperochan for the welcome and encouragement. I really like getting feedback. :)
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18th May 2020 5:06pm
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Re. Deep Underground Poetry
19th May 2020 00:35am
In your own elegant way, you mean❣❣ You evoked in me memories of when I first discovered this "cozy" poet's home. A big Gahddess_Worship welcome, Kristina...just to dispel the inevitable...I'm a guy 😀 I look forward to following your illustrious writing career.
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Re: Re. Deep Underground Poetry
19th May 2020 00:39am
Thank you Gahddess_Worship, for the welcome and encouragement. I am glad I could evoke some memories. Was that inevitable? :p
Re: Re. Deep Underground Poetry
19th May 2020 1:02am
far too many time I would get messages thinking that I am female. I'd always reply that I am the worshiper and not the goddess 😀
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Re. Deep Underground Poetry
28th May 2020 8:33am
Now I have seen this I say welcome to DUP too. It reads in some ways like a love letter from someone feeling their way into a relationship.
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28th May 2020 5:34pm
Re. Deep Underground Poetry
3rd Jun 2020 8:26pm
Weather you believe you can write or not, so long as every word flows like drops of blood through your heart to allow your soul to sing, then you will always be a poet.
XXX
XXX
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Re: Re. Deep Underground Poetry
3rd Jun 2020 10:17pm
Now that is beautiful "so long as every word flows like drops of blood through your heart to allow your soul to sing"
Re. Deep Underground Poetry
2nd Jan 2021 3:45pm
aaaaaaaaaaaah Wonderful sentiment and Feel to this Honest authentic spill
Caused me to smile in a loving think
Trust me when i say all of us do not spill stellar stuff 24/7
many of us KNOW we're gonna go back and edit, edit, Edit (i've been editing a Poem book i wrote for now going on 8 yrs - lol)
Caused me to smile in a loving think
Trust me when i say all of us do not spill stellar stuff 24/7
many of us KNOW we're gonna go back and edit, edit, Edit (i've been editing a Poem book i wrote for now going on 8 yrs - lol)
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Re: Re. Deep Underground Poetry
2nd Jan 2021 3:52pm
Thank you so much Tallen for stepping back in time a bit with me. Re-reading this one gave me a smile also. :) I post and leave it for dead and if it lives then I might take it to the doctor (no-not really). 8 years - that's some dedication... ;)
Re: Re. Deep Underground Poetry
2nd Jan 2021 3:58pm
i hope to publish the book before i die - lol
A friend did the cover for me
and all i have now is edit, pdf it and choose a self-publish company
i am in the process of reading all Your " Self " spills - helps me to know Your heart and know where You are coming from
i've been on an indolent train since last year April and trying to get back into posting here again. AND so reading is a great 1st step - hoping for inspiration from others.
A friend did the cover for me
and all i have now is edit, pdf it and choose a self-publish company
i am in the process of reading all Your " Self " spills - helps me to know Your heart and know where You are coming from
i've been on an indolent train since last year April and trying to get back into posting here again. AND so reading is a great 1st step - hoping for inspiration from others.
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Re: Re. Deep Underground Poetry
2nd Jan 2021 4:02pm
Oh boy, I think there are a lot of Self ones to get through now. :) I hope it is worth the journey...
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Re: Re. Deep Underground Poetry
7th Feb 2021 4:55pm
I just let things spill out from the heart. :) I like that you could see the romantic aspect in this; as well as the sweet admiration and compassion. You have a good eye.
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17th Jul 2022 11:35pm
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17th Jul 2022 11:40pm
Wow ABS, I had not seen this is so very long... seems like forever. I guess it still applies now though. lol I am really glad you found it poetic and really appreciate you reading and giving me your thoughts. :)
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Re: Re. Deep Underground Poetry
10th Oct 2022 7:09pm
Oh boy TIm, stepping all the way back to my little awkward DUP write. lol Geez, the memories there. This journey has been riddled with land mines but that's another story. Anyway, resonating with people, sharing with people in a meaningful way, making people feel good, encouraging people, and having some fun has always been my goal. I really appreciate the feedback you have given me to help me in this journey more than you know. And so many others as well. Thank you!