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Mars and Venus

You see falling stars in the sky    
And I made a hundred wishes for us  
Building on the past for a new bridge  
From our kisses, hopes, and promises †  
I am at your lovely feet and you † †
touch my lips softly with your hand †  
And the angels smile flying over us †  
I want it to be like this always †  
Still I have a hard time believing it † †
is possible that happiness in days †  
can blossom into years, notes of doubt † †
going off in my mind
† †
Must we know the time of losses, partings †  
and other routes, detours that leave us lost †  
We rush through time so quickly and † †
I guess all of this is love that is in our † †
blood and soul †  
† †
Whatever happens I believe in one thing †  
that there are good winds below our wings †  
And I am intoxicated and alive with you †  
The wind takes us flying high and there †  
is not much need for words when engulfed †  
in passion †  
† †
You know eventually among beautiful planets †  
Like Mars and Venus desire to be together †  
We will become stars in the sky ourselves †  
The call from above to fulfill our dreams
KristinaX
Written by KristinaX
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I really appreciate the very warm reception here even though I am not a writer or poet. I was not really planning to write but you have made me want to try. So hopefully this came out okay. If there...
I really appreciate the very warm reception here even though I am not a writer or poet. I was not really planning to write but you have made me want to try. So hopefully this came out okay. If there are any recommendations for me please tell me. Thank you.
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