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Angels
My questions to angels that sing,
I draw a blank, can't think of one.
How they fly around on two wings,
Like starlings and robins have done.
The newbies they show how to fly
With white faceless clouds in and out.
But who taught the teachers the time,
And halos, what's that all about?
They're wearing sky blue in the trees
As buxom young girls with long hair.
For when I think internally,
That doesn't get me anywhere.
Most certainly that’s how I feel,
It's a theoretical pain.
By answers for when I might heal;
I'm always left out in the rain.
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Day 22 of 30
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63 unique words of 102 total
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Re. Angels
Anonymous
23rd Apr 2020 00:37am
being Nephilim I know a thing or two 'bout angels, .. their wicked smart in many ways, .. but so dumb in others, .. the peril of obedience sucks, ..glad I didn't get that dna
I love your words J₳ĐɆ-₱₳₦ĐØⱤ₳
I love your words J₳ĐɆ-₱₳₦ĐØⱤ₳
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Re: Re. Angels
23rd Apr 2020 00:55am
Oh my gosh, thank you Dire for this, for making a connection, and for an honor of place.🙏🏻
Be safe & well, brother.
J₳ĐɆ
Be safe & well, brother.
J₳ĐɆ
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Anonymous
23rd Apr 2020 1:08am
I think I know you somehow, .. I feel this, .. I see it
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23rd Apr 2020 1:45am
Re. Angels
23rd Apr 2020 1:59am
Dear Jade, a vivid and talented mind...a combination of yours that I can only envy🌹 awesome write, indeed.
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Re: Re. Angels
3rd May 2020 8:31am
Apologies for the late reply, dearest sister (slowly recovering from an eye injury)...
My gracious thanks for your always kind support & appreciation. 🧡
My gracious thanks for your always kind support & appreciation. 🧡
Re. Angels
23rd Apr 2020 3:50am
Re: Re. Angels
3rd May 2020 8:34am
Apologies for the late reply, dearest sister (slowly recovering from an eye injury)...
Thank you, Jen, you are too kind.🧡
Thank you, Jen, you are too kind.🧡
Re. Angels
23rd Apr 2020 12:28pm
A vivid imagination created into life bringing insightful thoughts for the readers mind..beautifully composed dear poetess..respect
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Apologies for the late reply... (slowly recovering from an eye injury)...
Thanks so much, brother Stoney🙏🏻
Thanks so much, brother Stoney🙏🏻
Re: Re. Angels
3rd May 2020 1:21pm
Your welcome dear poetess take care of yourself and get better soon I send my prayers out to you for a speedy recovery dear poetess..respect
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Re. Angels
23rd Apr 2020 11:18pm
Re: Re. Angels
3rd May 2020 8:38am
Apologies for the late reply, dearest sister (slowly recovering from an eye injury)...
My gracious thanks to my Kitty Poetess.
tiger hugs,
ever
Jade🐾
My gracious thanks to my Kitty Poetess.
tiger hugs,
ever
Jade🐾
Re. Angels
3rd May 2020 8:12am
Re: Re. Angels
3rd May 2020 8:41am
Oh my gosh, thank you so much Wally, for your poet’s embrace, and the RL honor.🙏🏻