much aesthetics in the layout n fonts fb..the contents choke one in heaviness amidst the breathless vacuum felt... in-between n beyond these blank pearling in prints..there is this beautiful hearty hueing yearn..towards connect towards love ...in all the sync...yes, that is indeed love wen we art heart in love.... work of art. hope you keeping well n safe these times, light & love ev :)
This feels like it comes from such depth, raw with aching candor. You have such terrific ability and courage. The construction has your signature adroit language, the economy of each line and stanza is subtly but poignantly expressive. Opening stanza sets the tone, builds the scene and introduces the subject in a few brilliant strokes. Every stanza is utterly gorgeous, speaking to the heart and the soul of humanity. The refrain is well proportioned and executed. Your writing is quickly becoming my favorite on site.
This has a liturgy feel, pasted on the walls of a derelict cathedral (I am what is commonly referred to as a "lapsed" catholic - don't ask). Can only echo the comments of Uma & Daniel. Very much "your signature adroit language." Excellence. Rob