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the begger girl
she was berely there,
a shadow cast in the
rain.
her wet hair matted
to her face,
head tilted down,
eyes squinted against
the spate.
as I drove past,
I read the sign
in her hands...
"ANYTHING
HELPS,
GOD BLESS."
I don't think
he does...
Published 25th Mar 2020
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25th Mar 2020 00:44am
25th Mar 2020 1:11am
It was (heartbreaking that is). I am pained to see another being, be they two legged, four legged, winged, finned, suffer.
blessed be,
buddhakitty.
blessed be,
buddhakitty.
25th Mar 2020 4:12am
I love this dark piece Kitty...particularly the way you just let it end with with that final statement.
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
25th Mar 2020 9:52am
Thank you for the kind words. This is based upon a real experience.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
25th Mar 2020 9:14pm
God's on holiday trying to figure out which algorithm is at fault in the self-organising universe.
26th Mar 2020 00:32am
Seems like he is on vacation when we take a look at the world.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
26th Mar 2020 10:12am
26th Mar 2020 10:14am
27th Mar 2020 12:05pm
your way of capturing life ..is beyond just what eyes see..beyond life itself... very lingering n haunting depth you say it all.. this is touching to the core.. God is there in the verses you art, in the soulful eyes of hers i.. of of yours that is receptive .. God is the Truth..whatever form/ formlessness/ presence/ absence/ pain/ ecstasy one say feel ... Juzme bk..Allz Well in Love.. Light & Love to you ev. :)
27th Mar 2020 1:39pm
