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Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
“I do not understand this squeamishness about the use of gas . . . I am strongly in favour of using poisoned gas against uncivilised tribes. The moral effect should be so good . . . and would spread a lively terror.” (Winston Churchill, 1919, presiding over the British Air Council)
Old Palestinian shuffles slowly across road
aided by his stick.
Mortality snags me through the windscreen —
I clutch the steering-wheel, eyes squinting the future.
Engines idle time
counting down incessantly, fuming with urgency.
Is he a world to be conquered?
The car behind toots impatiently —
window wound down
driver blows smoke at the wind’s leisure; flicks ash.
Ahead, a flock of starlings swarms in classic unity,
a movement of music
ethereally painted on the backdrop of a grey sky.
Two scavenging dogs sniff odd smells amidst the traffic
then fight for a bone. Increasingly lost to an obscure world
paradise questions progress,
poverty cross-examines plenty.
Each moment rests in unique potential
anticipating, hovering —
every electron, every drop of water, every human — sacred:
but God is on holiday
and scared we stumble in a foggy muddle
by and by.
#YehudaAmichai
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 5th Mar 2020
| Edited 10th Mar 2024
Author's Note
#YehudaAmichai
Comp entry for “Gods Change, Prayers Stay the Same”, hosted by Johnny Blaze. Reference Amichai’s poem “Half the People in the World”, found on-line here: https://kaitlinsgill.wordpress.com/2013/04/12/yehuda-amichais-half-the-people-in-the-world/
(photo credit: cristina-gottardi-q3FihXQ-13M-unsplash)
Comp entry for “Gods Change, Prayers Stay the Same”, hosted by Johnny Blaze. Reference Amichai’s poem “Half the People in the World”, found on-line here: https://kaitlinsgill.wordpress.com/2013/04/12/yehuda-amichais-half-the-people-in-the-world/
(photo credit: cristina-gottardi-q3FihXQ-13M-unsplash)
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5th Mar 2020 11:05pm
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Re: Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
8th Mar 2020 6:57pm
Thank you Skyblue2 for your kind words, and the RL too. Of courese, if God is defined as a set of principles by which all things truly work, then God is not absent but we have absented ourselves. Even so, I suppose one could say that a set of principles that allows so much suffering perhaps means some further questions need asking.
Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
5th Mar 2020 11:23pm
why do the more scientifically advanced
societies think it ok to be foul to those who
aren't. you can't blame the science, it's the
politicians who the employ the scientists,
I guess ..
societies think it ok to be foul to those who
aren't. you can't blame the science, it's the
politicians who the employ the scientists,
I guess ..
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Re: Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
8th Mar 2020 7:01pm
I suppose it's not just the 'superior' technology but an attitude that treats the planet (and therefore people who walk closely with it) as a 'thing' to be conquered. At root is the belief we are separated from Nature/others - and don't understand what we do to others we are indeed doing to ourselves (maybe this explains Brexit in a sort of contorted way).
Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
6th Mar 2020 2:02am
How many time will man repeat the same mistakes, visit the same horrors on one another. Super write Josh.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
8th Mar 2020 7:03pm
Thank you BK, I guess we will repeat the same old same ol until we have a new collective story of who we are - where the new story understands our interdependence and interconnectedness. Glad you liked the write.
Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
7th Mar 2020 4:58am
Dear J,
Fantastic. Poignant and true it would appear God is on an extended holiday. Leaving us mortals to fend for ourselves. Oh this isn’t a good idea, maybe in theory, but me oh my! This piece is as touching as it gets. Beautifully written! Good luck in the comp. H🌷
Fantastic. Poignant and true it would appear God is on an extended holiday. Leaving us mortals to fend for ourselves. Oh this isn’t a good idea, maybe in theory, but me oh my! This piece is as touching as it gets. Beautifully written! Good luck in the comp. H🌷
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Re: Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
8th Mar 2020 8:34pm
Dear H, Thank you for your enthusiastic comment. The way I see it is humanity is in its adolescent-teenage-rebellious stage pushing the limits of 'the rules' - one of God's 'rules' being you can't have an ever-expanding economy of money-as-debt+interest in a finite world - hence everything from rainforests to sacred landscapes being mowed down and turned into money. And another 'rule' being what we do to others and the environment, we also do to ourselves.
But my hope is one day we will end this stage and grow up (in consciousness and action) into mature adults, treating each other and the planet as 'part of ourselves'. Until then ... well ... errrr... things gonna get worse in our collective teenage tantrum that wants to "rule the world".
But my hope is one day we will end this stage and grow up (in consciousness and action) into mature adults, treating each other and the planet as 'part of ourselves'. Until then ... well ... errrr... things gonna get worse in our collective teenage tantrum that wants to "rule the world".
Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
7th Mar 2020 10:17pm
Probably my favorite of yours, Josh, but it's a tough call. You're one of the best here, no gas work about it.
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Re: Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
8th Mar 2020 8:38pm
Thank you Crow, my most steadfast supporter over these 3 years I've been on DUP now. High praise indeed and tank you too for the RL. In my upbringing, 'gassing' was also a word for people who were 'all talk and no action' - sounds like it's similar in the States.
Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Mar 2020 1:00pm
8th Mar 2020 12:58pm
Josh, I can feel a palpable relationship between your offering and the poem by Amichai you chose as inspiration. It seems to me that the narrators of both question their place in the universe through perception that there is randomness in its unfolding.
This apparent chaos in motion in yours is offset by your observation of the starling flock and the auto traffic . It suggests the bulk of the chaos is man made, but we as humans can reduce it is emission through unity and following guidelines.
Amichai portrays it simply as being in the wrong place at the right time, saying that half the people of the world spoil it for the rest. There's a struggle to accept that it is all happening for a reason, but belief in the potential of paradise.
Good luck in the judging!
This apparent chaos in motion in yours is offset by your observation of the starling flock and the auto traffic . It suggests the bulk of the chaos is man made, but we as humans can reduce it is emission through unity and following guidelines.
Amichai portrays it simply as being in the wrong place at the right time, saying that half the people of the world spoil it for the rest. There's a struggle to accept that it is all happening for a reason, but belief in the potential of paradise.
Good luck in the judging!
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Re: Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
8th Mar 2020 8:42pm
Thank you Johnny for your considered and thoughtful feed-back - so interesting to read how people with a passion for and knowledge of poetry read one's own. It was very helpful. Yes, I felt too the starling flock plays a pivotal moment in the poem. Thanks again, Josh.
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Anonymous
8th Mar 2020 9:54pm
I don't know about being knowledgeable, but it's easy to be passionate about great poetry you never fail to deliver.
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Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
There is a soulful, contemplative mien to this write which is the standard by which one could reasonably define your body of works. Nothing belabored, superfluous, overblown. Purpose, gravitas, depth of meaning. You make excellent use of logos, ethos, and pathos, Josh. There is the sense of the obtuse, the absurd, in what is perpetrated by nations, by society, which overlooks and destroys the individual. Indeed, the WW1 gas mask is an oft repeated theme of the faceless and heartless aspect of the evolution of the human endeavor. Much of what we rely upon today was developed, of necessity, in war time.
I am grateful to be closing my reading for this day on this note. I will carry contemplation of this with me.
I am grateful to be closing my reading for this day on this note. I will carry contemplation of this with me.
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Re: Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
8th Mar 2020 8:49pm
I really enjoy reading your comments Daniel and always consider it a privilege you take the time to comment so interestingly and insightfully. I find you help me understand my own poetry better - I tend to write on the impulse and then spend a lot of time fiddling, rather than having a 'plan' in my head before starting to write. And your pointers put on the map for me aspects I have not always considered, so I am very grateful for that { & the RL :)) }
Re: Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
13th Mar 2020 00:57am
It is always my pleasure and honor to be of use to you brother. Namaste.
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Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
11th Mar 2020 2:04am
Oh my God.....the title,how very aprapo ....this paints a vast, yet intimately unholy and grimy portrait
Well done!
Well done!
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Re: Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
11th Mar 2020 10:09am
Hi calamitygin, thank you again for reading and commenting; and for the RL. Glad you liked it (not sure 'liked it' is the appropriate phrase) - but it's time co-operation superceded competition.
Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
15th Mar 2020 11:45pm
Everything is always happening all at once...it is all connected at every single infintesimal point. Powerful ink Josh.
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
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Re: Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
1st May 2020 10:36pm
Yes, true. I feel it more and more how everything is connected, all humming with life-energy-potential in every moment. I see it in flowers too because I work a fair amount with plants on my quinta. And RL much appreciated. Thank you, Josh.
Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
1st May 2020 10:09pm
Such inspiring sorry I tend to read poems and forget to hit like or comment and today I am. You are a great poet I see why you have so many awards ... :)
Joanna
Joanna
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Re: Re. Gassing Beliefs at the Pedestrian Crossing
1st May 2020 10:38pm
Hi Joanna, thank you for reading and commenting. That's really nice. Glad you enjoyed the read. Best regards, Josh.