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Eternal Is An Instant
I sit
and absorb this moment
drink it in
fill my lungs
with every breath
Sadly such instants
come but
far too rarely
where I am
completely and utterly
at peace
where time
like stars
in sunlight
fades away
and nothing else exists
except the beautiful now
Until
the fool I am
I rationalise
that this moment
cannot last forever
And then
like that
the moment’s passed
Still however brief
or fleeting
flees that instant
of epic beauty
having been
now forever lasts
and absorb this moment
drink it in
fill my lungs
with every breath
Sadly such instants
come but
far too rarely
where I am
completely and utterly
at peace
where time
like stars
in sunlight
fades away
and nothing else exists
except the beautiful now
Until
the fool I am
I rationalise
that this moment
cannot last forever
And then
like that
the moment’s passed
Still however brief
or fleeting
flees that instant
of epic beauty
having been
now forever lasts
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Re. Eternal Is An Instant
17th Feb 2020 9:34pm
Great piece I can very much relate
"such instants
come but
far too rarely"
Yup true true I wish they would last longer
"such instants
come but
far too rarely"
Yup true true I wish they would last longer
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Re: Re. Eternal Is An Instant
18th Feb 2020 12:52pm
I suppose that’s what makes them so special their rarity. Thank you for reading and the wonderful comment 😀
Re. Eternal Is An Instant
17th Feb 2020 10:50pm
Re: Re. Eternal Is An Instant
18th Feb 2020 12:53pm
Time may pass but it’s mark is left
Thank you for reading and the wonderful comment 😀
Thank you for reading and the wonderful comment 😀
Re. Eternal Is An Instant
18th Feb 2020 4:18am
Re. Eternal Is An Instant
18th Feb 2020 12:55pm
Re. Eternal Is An Instant
18th Feb 2020 1:58pm
A short 'moment of truth', of clarity, can sustain you for a long time - thankfully, since they're so rare.
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Re. Eternal Is An Instant
18th Feb 2020 2:16pm
Like stepping stones through life thanks for reading and commenting josh I appreciate it 😀
Re. Eternal Is An Instant
18th Feb 2020 2:57pm
We often do that, don't we? Rationalize to prevent expectation of longevity. Perhaps it's a defense mechanism based upon experience. Regardless, you're right in that what is done is done forever, and can only be redone.
A lovely, introspective poem.
A lovely, introspective poem.
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Re. Eternal Is An Instant
18th Feb 2020 9:38pm
Thank you Ahavati yes indeed, sometimes the realisation it’s self can end a moment. And yes the arrow of time moves only one way, what has been will always have been. I appreciate your input thank you 😀
Re. Eternal Is An Instant
26th Feb 2020 4:09am
Everything we do matters, its a good way to see things, every instant is a building block in a permament structure, we are eternal..
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Re: Re. Eternal Is An Instant
26th Feb 2020 7:33pm
Exactly, building block in permanent structure (love it)
Nothing can be without what’s been before. Thank you for your comment it’s much appreciated 😀
Nothing can be without what’s been before. Thank you for your comment it’s much appreciated 😀
Re. Eternal Is An Instant
13th Mar 2020 2:00am
Beautiful MM...that instant when you see into the nature of things.
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
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18th Mar 2020 2:14pm
Re. Eternal Is An Instant
22nd Apr 2020 8:32am
I know the feeling, monkeyman! An excellent, and relatable poem... Thanks for sharing that! 🙏
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27th Apr 2020 7:45am